5Th Application

[Rakuia 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:DarkraiXX

[How old are you?:14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:North American Eastern Time Zone,UTC-5

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I'm a great gammer.I like to keep peace between people,Mostly friends.I like Player vs Player (even if i know this is a Role-Play server) but also i like protection.I keep close contact with people who are important to me. I love RPG

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:About 5-8 hours a day if i have nothing thats going on with importance.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:Its like a alternate version of yourself.Its as if you have a dream and you become a different person.also becoming one with your toon.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:I have but people slowly became corrupted with cheating items,but i love Role-Play on gaming console.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:Changing a players actions/habits from what they learned outside of character/role-play. Such as if you were planning with someone from a different server and you came to a new one and caused distraction or chaos.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:Controlling others to do what you want, Such as if you said " i stabbed Arlena in the heart and took his spoils" the other one has to be first killed then you take the drops/spoils.

\What do you expect this server will be like?:Fun and full of adventures. where people can get along also have conflicts and war.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:Plenty that i have been on and stayed for a day or so because it didn't have the status i was looking for.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:Yes

How did you hear about us?:A friend told me so I watch a couple of Youtube videos then I saw that you had elf's and I was in.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:My last application http://www.lordofthe...tion-darkraixx/

In-Character:

Character Name:Rakuia

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):Cross-breed Elf-Human

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):Brown shaggy hair,Blue eyes,skin white/tan,white jacket with yellow and black design, black pants, age: 26,peronallit: great with elfs and humans, hates orcs, neutral feeling with dwarfs, easy to get along with, stubborn when it comes to listing to battle orders if it docent sound like a good idea but still goes along with it, likes to sneak behind enemies lines, trusted between transferring information. Great with concealing himself.

Rakuia was born in the land of analgesia, he was a strange one who was born of a human father and a elven mother. He's birth was the deed for peace between the humans and elf's.His life was a peaceful one until the "Coming storm"! Both of his parents being the leaders of the groups decided to go and deal with this storm. Years have past and Rakuia has come up with the fact that his parents have died in battle. He travels the land with his fumilar Griffin(a dragon) he fights with the forces that have anything to do with the "coming storm" He uses a hunter ability that allows him to silently kill his foes with a quick succession. He plans to take this "evil" out of this world with the help of his blue diamond dragon! He stays on the h

What are your Character's ambitions?:To get revenge for his parents and to fight the "coming storm"

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):Bow & arrows

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?Archery

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

Other Information about your Character

He is a hunter and like long ranged combat. Also is quick and likes to be sneaky when around other enemies.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? My toon will first get his bow ready and aim for a quick headshot to the one that is holding on to the halfling. then in the confusion he will take another shot to take out the other then check to see if the halfing was alright.He would then take the halfing with him on the travels and see if they can reach the closest town in search of the halflings parents. If not found my toon would leave some gold for the halfing and visit him every time he gets.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? My toon will smile and say what sells do you have today. My toon will respond with "Hello Good sir. Do you have anything of intreats that will help me on my travels such as bows of enchantment or extra arrows?" He will buy the items and leave going back to his adventure and return once in a while to that good bargainer.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:As a hunter and a one sneaky too he would take the golden sword and then go to the town and sell it. If the iron bars are still there when he goes back he will take them and go back to his hut/house.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?My toon will respond with "Hello I have been wandering the lands in search of a place to stay, Do you mind to spear some bread or apples?" He will work his dept off for the town folk as he stayed and eat his food that was given to him as a gift of generosity.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:My toon would respond with acting fast and agreeing to do anything to help takeout the bandits. He will listen to the leader on how he wants to deal with them and my toon would give suggestful tips and how to make a easier tactic. He then would be the one on the highest point taking out the bandits while the rest Tanks and slaughters them all.

Anything else you would like to say?:Im sorry if I have been a bother for the last four days of the application im just really "excited" as you can say to be on a real RPG server. This is the fifth if i have to do one more and fail i will have to wait three months and i really don't want that to happen. So please if you fail this make sure you be clear on why i did. Don't be formal where i don't understand. Thank you for your time.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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Thy application presents the same mistakes or errors.

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These were the main points which were horrific or disgraceful of thou application:

~Thy biography must to be worked on, be original, and use correct Lore (the destruction of Aegis and travel to Asulon), be creative and thou needs to explain thou appearance, attitude and whatever else is demanded in the question.

~Thou hath used incorrect Lore, mortal fool. One does not have dragon 'familiars' and one doesn't have 'hunter abilities'. Thou should know that this is Asulon and not use non-existant guilds/cities!

~THY MUST USE THE RIGHT FORMAT, MORTAL FOOL! Do not delete thy answers between square brackets! They make the application stunning and amazing! Not grey and bland like the one my immortal eyes have been laid upon...

~Thy character is obscenely an artifact of perfection (talents, traits, and other...) and overly powerful (kills 2 warriors from afar in less than a minute) to even be considered existant...

~This is practically a repeat of what the previous application team member said...

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Thou hath thus been blocked from applying for 3 months, we think, send us a PM if thou hast any further inquiries.

Is it not clear!?

Note- it is tradition to use the royal 'we' and old Canterlot voice, and to use THIS MUCH VOLUME WHEN SPEAKING TO OUR APPLICANTS!

[Lego XBOX 915]

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