Joelie732's 3Rd Application

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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:joelie732

How old are you?:14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT, england

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes, and I am infact writing a novel.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: an ambitious boy, who likes creative games as well as science and

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 11 hours a week max.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:being in someone elses shoes and deciding how they live their life, without the limits of the real world.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:i've never done MC RP but i do play skyrim and other RP games.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: It is the use of out-of-game information or resources to affect one's in-game decisions.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is: It is using emotes to make an action other players cannot prevent.

What do you expect this server will be like?: A great RP experience.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Two were rubbish, one broke and the fourth i still play on.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes

How did you hear about us?: YouTube - TeamLDU's channel

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/53604-joelie732s-1st-application/#entry411882

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/61079-joeli732s-application/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/61238-joelie732s-3rd-application/#entry479089

In-Character:

Character Name:Glanvar Werjyr

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :Dwarf!

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):I don't know the dwaven sub-races.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Glanvar werjyr is an adventurous dwarf who's parents disappered at the age of two. When he was a baby he can remember his perants telling him about the land of aegis and the war between the arisen and the undead. He was taught the art of flight by his tutor aged 6. now, aged 19 he searches tirelessly for his parents.

He was once bitten by a cave spider and it is said that the venom stayed within his body and slowly turned him insane. He can often be heard rambling about cake, lies, spiders, and the one with soulless eyes. people think he belives his parents were kidnapped by herobrine but he has not cofirmed this. On his quest of spider genecide he has been known to keep several buckets of milk with him at all times.

During the time of the plague he was infected and it was thought that he would die but managed to survive. it is unknow how he survived though most assume his immune system was resistant to the plague due to the spider venom.

What are your Character's ambitions?: Glavar is determined to find his parents and will not sleep untill he has rid the world of cave spiders

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):His iconic diamond pickaxe

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? swordsmanship

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

Other Information about your Character:Has a wicked tendancy to attack without being provoked

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? "leave that poor halfling alone or else" The bandits ignore the strangers threats and continue to harass the child. glanvar charges at the bandits and swings his sword at the bandits.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? "could ya spare any food for a hungry dwarf who has lost his way, or maybe any weapons to defend myself against the creatures of the night."

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: Glanvar looks at the surrounding area to see if anybody is near then sneaks into the hut to "borrow" a gold sword.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? "Are there any scraps you could spare a younge dwarf. I will eat rotten flesh if i have to."

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: Glanvar flys over and above the bandits camp and drops amidst the bandit's camp to attack.

Anything else you would like to say?: This is my fourth application and I'm starting to get bored.

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Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied [Correct the X'ed Areas]:

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Missing Biography [ ]

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-Fabricated Large-Scale Events [ ]

Incorrect Lore [ ]

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Contradicting Statements [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Villain Application Needed [x]

Incorrect Definitions of Powergaming [ ]

Incorrect Definitions of Metagaming [ ]

Form:

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Skin:

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-Unlore-ful Skin [ ]

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