My 3Rd App

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Minecraft Account Name: razor_haxor How old are you?:16 Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Central time/USA. Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I enjoy playing minecraft.I prefer RP servers like this one.I am in a video crew. our channel is BDHH100. How much time could you be on the server weekly?:5 hours Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying is like a fun acting experience to me....but i guess it could also be used to see if a person is worthy for something...like to act out a problem to see how the person would respond. What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: i have had some....mainly on minecraft servers and couple with a friend on Runescape messing around. In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: its mainly strategy like chess,or LOTR....mainly games but id aloso say IRL warfare. In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is: i use it all the time. you write out something with word to explain whats happening...like an emote.for example, "razor_haxor sneaks around petridagaernerd". What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect fun and games...but also strict roleplay like marriage,castle fighting and ive seen a new language. What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i usually play alot of servers that are good....i have play mineswarm/roleplay,ecocitycraft/economy... i normally only leave servers because i no longer find them to be fun,or i dont leave them and the go down. Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes,at first i had no clue, but after reading the rules and looking at the races i understand. Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: yes, and allways i respect RP servers. How did you hear about us?: PetriDaGamerNerd/youtube and a marriage video on lotc Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: yes, but all i got wrong were spacing it out so i had to redo and i will make another one if needed. Character Name:(lyon the unknown)i am sticking to Roleplay basically no one knows my name. What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :I am Human. What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):None. Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):My character was a young boy who lost his parents at the age of 7.he has green eyes and dirty blonde hair.after the supposed accedient he had to be raised by his grandparents.his grandmother died at the age of 98 when he was 16.after being old enough to move out he went to find work and prepare for the new life...since his grandfather was very old he visited on regular accoasins. but one day the young man couldnt visit his grandfather because of a girl his grandfathers house was burnt down...after returning to find his dead grandparent he searched for any remains,he came across a cupboard filled with letters from the boys parents.....his parents new they were indanger and sent the boy to his grandparents..the letter included money and a name...."Raduel"...Raduel was the killer of the boys parents...after searching elsewhere the boy noticed another thing.it was under the bed he slept he never new what it was before and never botherd to open it it was a box containg clothes of his father.his father was a hitman/assasin. after time passed lyon got friendly with the girls and since he lost his parents at a young age he was a smart ass. he also got into many fights but now since he is mature at the age of 19 he wears his fathers clothes that are brightly white and darkend grey. What are your Character's ambitions?: to help people in need and to fight off the darkness of the night,but mainly to get revenge on Raduel. What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):Bow. What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?: Archery. A screenshot of your skin 2012-07-17_15.20.46.png (120.26K)

Number of downloads: 2 Other Information about your Character: he is quit stealthy. Open-Response-Questions.Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? he walks up to the warriors and asks then to stop.after being told to go away he pulls an arrow out of his quiver and puts it closely to the warriors throat and asks him again to stop and leave.if it doesnt work then he would grab and use his knife and quikness to either hurt or if it come to death kill the warriors,after he helps the halfing and returns anything stolen and takes the halfing to the nearest town. Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?"you can offer me nothing i am looking for someone","but you can point me into the nearest food shop,good sir. Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:he would leave them be...knowing that there may be a man/women that lives there. "just because it looks abandon doesnt mean it is" he would say. Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? "Good day sir, i am lost and hungry and i have no money, may i sit with you and may i have any scraps".then he would ask where the nearest town is. You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:he accepts the offer and and takes the strategic position the gurad told him to go. Anything else you would like to say?: after reading this application forum i already know that i am going to have fun on the server. it sticks to RolePlay and has you make the story. please consider my effort, and i left a picture of my skin in the attachments i made it for my character hope you like it and it suits him. and i am sorry for the mistake on the first application.

[Taiga 764]

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I'm sorry, but your application has been denied due to a bad formatting issue. Please check out other applications for an example of what I mean.

Errors include a cramped together form, in which is impossible to read. Please rectify this error and repost in 24 hours.

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Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.

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[Taiga 764]

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