[Human App] Dustin_2000's Application

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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: Dustin_2000

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: America

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Since english is my first language i speak it very well

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am funny and great to hang out with. I love to play minecraft

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Usually if my schedule holds up i play from 4 to 10

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: I know the basics of roleplay but i would like to learn more on this server.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I have played on a few roleplaying servers so i know what i am doing.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: It is taking knowledge that is not available to there in game person in order to give them an advantage. Here is an example say Billy is told by someone that Sid is high level swordsman but a very low in archery.Billy can take this information that he would have not had if he was told by that person.This is unfair to Sid because Billy would have never thought that Sid had a low level in archery and this gave him an advantage.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is: Power emoting is taking away the ability for other to counter a action like Bill kills Sid. As you can see Sid is not able to fight back and auto looses this battle it is unfair because he did not have a chance to fight back.

What do you expect this server will be like?: A server were i can have fun roleplaying with other people.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I used to play a roleplaying server called silentcraft were you could be a werewolf or a werewolf hunter but the population turned from mature people to childish kids trying to role-play with no experience at all.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes

How did you hear about us?: Petrimace

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

In-Character:

Character Name: Dimitri aragon

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) : Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Dimitri Aragon was a archer at birth. When he was a child his father gave him a play bow so he practiced every day with it.He was also very acrobatic as he would practice jumping off of things like trees and small shelters.He is 21 now and ready to adventure along the road and practice his archer skills. He looks just like his father.His skin is a light color and he is about 6 foot 1 about a average size. He is a noble warrior and is wise in battle. He knows when he can not win a battle and is not the one to go straight to a battle unless it is necessary to settle an issue.

What are your Character's ambitions?: Dimitri wants to join a kingdom and protect it from all invaders.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): Bow

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Archery

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( Out-Of-Character

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? Dimitri is walking and spots a halfling being harassed for his money by to armed warriors. He sets up on a rock in the distance and pulls out his bow. He sets up his arrow and aims at one of the warriors.He lets the arrow fly.The first warrior collapses with a arrow in his back. The next warrior looks to his side and sees his partner on the floor with an arrow in his back. The same fate falls upon him as Dimitri takes another shot and it also hits his mark.The halfling confused at what just happened runs away.Dimitri then continues walking along the road.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? : "Do you have any bows."Ask's Dimitri."No but we do have lightweight cloaks and hoods"the merchant replies."No thanks.I already have a cloak and do not need another"Replies Dimitri."Ok, Nice doing business with you sir"Says the merchant."I shall be on my way now bye"Replies Dimitri beginning to walk out of Alras.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: Dimitri is wandering and comes across a house that looks abandoned. There is a chest so he looks inside it.There is a gold sword and and iron bars.Nothing of worth to me i shall be on my way.As he is walking out he a orc is walking towards the hut.Dimitri knowing that if the orc sees him there will be trouble and sneaks away.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? "Hello sir what are you doing on this side of the woods sir"Ask's the trade leader."I am lost and very hungry, could you spare any food and a map so i can find my way." The leader replies "i think we can spare you some food and a map but do you have anything to trade for these items.Dimitri replies "I have a extra bow that i made if that is enough.The leader replies"I think that will be enough to pay for the food and map."Dimitri give them the bow and they give him the food and map.He is able to find his way back to Alras.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: He is eager to join and enhance his archery skills for money.He joins the group and they set off.They soon get there at night while the bandits are partying over a raid.Dimitri and another archer set up near the entrance in the bushes.There are two drunk guards at the front both sleeping. Dimitri and the other archer draw there bows and both take a shot the other archer hits his mark while Dimitri strays off a bit hitting the wall.He pulls up another arrow quickly and hits him the second time.The warriors charge in and kill the rest of them.They return to town and Dimitri gets his pay and wanders from the town.

Anything else you would like to say?: ):

Other Information about your Character:

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

You need to provide an actual definition of Roleplaying. You can search the forums and wiki to find out more, but be sure to write it in your own words.

Your character cannot be an 'archer at birth.' Please expand your bio so it as at least two paragraphs. Add some server lore, which can be found on the forums or wiki.

You dispatch the two warriors in ORQ #1 too easily. Expand on the situation and reduce the powergaming.

There are spelling and grammar issues throughout the application that should be improved.

You can reapply 24 hours after this post. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

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