Endersteve Application To Join

[N/A 5]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

TheBioverse.

How old are you?:

14 (I can assure you I am mature enough though.)

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

I currently live in Bahrain.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

I believe my English language and grammar are sharp.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am from India and am also an artist who is interested in sketches as I am taking it for GCSE aswell. During any passtime I usually read manga, watch anima, sketch or play video games.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

Each day I could be on for at least an hour, if not alot more, due to it being the summer break.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

I believe roleplaying as a way to begin a new live and shaping your new self into what you want him/her to be completely, I also think it is a way to create a world where you can be in control and more expressive of yourself.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

I have roleplayed on LOTRO but I first Roleplayed at the age of 10 when I found DND.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Meta-gaming to me means gathering out of game information to help my ingame character.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:

I belive the term power-emoting means when another character does something and you follow that to give yourself the result of that action.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I think this server will be packed with serious roleplayers who are willing to stick to the storylone and not mess around during important events.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I have left many servers due to the admins being unreasonable and unjust and the roleplay was never exiciting or the plot was just horrible and boring, servers include herocraft and many others.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes I have.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

I do promise to follow and and abide by the rules and laws.

How did you hear about us?:

I heard about you when I was leaving herocraft.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

No, this is my first application.

In-Character:

Character Name:

EnderSteve

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :

Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

I was cursed as half Ender, I think that classifies as a subrace.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

EnderSteve is of average human height, has brownish skin and a blue eye on half of his body, the other half is covered in a smooth black coating, and his eye glows green as a sign of his envy towards the uncursed and healthy humans, it is also a sign of dark and unholy magic of sorts, but EnderSteve is not aware of this, but deep inside, a feeling a longing and sadness lingers for he wishes to return to his home and family, but he cannot due to the current condition he is in. He has a very dark personality and is usually merciless against the evils that roam the wilderness or even towns. He believes himself to be a silent protector and a guardian, not a hero. He feels that he is better off alone than in a group. He was also hunted down in many towns as a monster, so he was forced to wear a helmet or a leather hood in public, to hide this face. His misfortune has caused him to break off his connection with God as well, for he realized after a year of countless prayers, that he was going to have to make his cure, not pray and beg for it

He was once Steve of the Craftsman clan, one that existed over the ages, but the clan soon fell after the invasion of a mysterious new hostile race by the name of the endermen. Steve was one of many soldiers who were fighting in the war, but one day on the battle field, he came across a peculiar object, a pearl. He wondered what it was, and why the Enderman had it, so he planned to take it back, but then he head something, whispers, he looked around him, there were nothing but trees and grass, he could not even spot his comrades, he then looked back in his hand and was amazed and horrified at the same moment, the pearl was giving off some sort of strange black gas. Steve realized that he was tempering with something he should ignore, so he tossed the pearl away and he saw it siaring across the sky, and as it hit the ground, poof! Steve was pulled at the speed of light itself towards where it had landed, and he landed face flat towards the ground, he then slowly picked himself up and ran, back to his barracks, glancing back at the pearl on the ground. Later that night while he slept he could hear even more whispering in his head, yet he could not make out the language or even the words, but he knew the pearl was causing this, so he got up, grabbed his sword, his leather tunic, food, and set off to find and destroy the pearl. After fighting off many zombies and skeletons and the occasional creeper, he finally found the pearl, so he drew his sword and jammed it right inside the pearl, and suddenly, the ground started to shift and give away and steve fell into a covered up ravine. As he reached the bottom he realized he was at the brink of death, and that he did not have enough strength to climb out, so he cried out in despair, and then he saw it, levitating in the air, the pearl, and this time, he understood the whispers, "You seek salvation. It can be yours, at a price." "Anything! Please! Just don't let me die here!" Steve cried out in tears. "Very well then, you have chosen the path of the ender, one from which you may never return!" Before Stevecould ask what that meant, the was a bang and the pearl exploded, scattering black smoke evverywere, and the smoke was absorbed into Steve, and when he regained consciousness, he was in a new realm completely, one carved out of white stone and scattered with obsidian pillars, not to mention endermen, but in the sky he saw it, with its wings flapping in the dark black sky, a dragon, a beast of myth and legend, and it spoke, "Live now, arm yourself, and fight me, for your full soul, and once I am defeated, you shall be no longer Ender." Then Steve awoke, he was on the fresh morning dirt and grass, and beside a lake of fresh blue water, he looked at himself and saw the dragon told the truth. He was now half ender, forever cursed to roam the lands as a freak, a monster and an abomination, unless he found a way to defeat that dragon. He realized he could not go back to his home in his current state so he wandered off into the wilderness, in search for his cure.

What are your Character's ambitions?:

To cure himself so he may return home as himself.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

Sword

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

He is a skilled swordsman from his experience in the war.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

http://desmond.imageshack.us/Himg13/scaled.php?server=13&filename=endersteveprifilepic1.jpg&res=landing

Other Information about your Character:

He owns a wold he called Cerberus who he treats as his familiar.

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

I would walk over to the scene and nod to the halfling to leave, whilst at the same time grab the hild of my sword and whisper in a grim tone "I do believe you gentlemen were about to leave, am I correct?"

If they refused to leave and wanted to pick a fight, I would wound them to the point of death, then leave them to bleed to death, or try to run away. I would also loot them for anything of worth.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

I would first browse the stall to see if there was anything of worth to buy, then I would inspect the merchant to see if he was a legitimate man, for he sounded too posh for a man running only but a small stand, finally I would buy some food and be on my way, while slyly pick pocketing some iron ingots, he seems rich enough to be able to sustain himself .

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

First i would inspect the grounds and trees around me to see if it was a trap, if it was a trap or ambush I would simply kill all those who dared to attack me with superior swordsmanship, then proceed to take the loot to sell to the previous merchant.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

I would wearily approach them, suspecting a trap or another ambush, if if all seemed well, I would pay them for food and shelter for the night.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

I would first ask about the reward, and if it seemed plentiful I would accept and hunt down the bandits, possibly looting them after slaying or capturing them for any valuables they had on them.

Anything else you would like to say?:

I do hope you approve my application to joining your realm, it seems well developed and very active and I would be thrilled to join you.

-EnderSteve

[Cappy 1599]

Reasons:

• Your power-emoting definition is confusing.
  
• You cannot be half Ender.
  
• Large lore inconsistencies in the biography. There is no End in Asulon, nor is there an Enderdragon. There are no creepers. There was no invasion by Endermen.
  
• You need to include more server lore in your biography. Show us that you are at least a little familiar with the places and major events of our world. You can research the lore on our Wiki here.
  
• Your skin is obviously unsuitable. The fact you cannot be half Ender aside, you cannot use the default skin.
  
• What is a "wold"?
  
• You cannot enter Asulon with knowledge of magic or magical abilities and items. You can enter with ambitions to learn magic, but all training and learning must be done in role-play, on the server.
  
• Your character is rather a "Gary Stu/Mary Sue" character. This generally means they have many skills and strong points, and very few balancing downsides. Click here for more information on what it means and how to fix this.
  
• Powergaming in your Open Response Questions. Since your character cannot be a super-powered Enderman, you would have extreme trouble defeating two armed men at once in combat.
  
• Villainous character and villainous actions in your Open Response Questions. Actions such as unprovoked murder (seeing two men harrassing a halfling does not count as provocation) and thievery require an accepted villain application to commit. Make sure you read over the villain rules (here) so that you are aware of what you can and cannot do without applying for a villain application.
  

If you have any queries relating to this application, please do not hesitate to PM me on the forums!

You may reapply in 24 hours from the time of this post.

Why not browse the forums or read up on some helpful guides while you wait?

[Cappy 1599]

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