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[WearsomeKarma 15]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: WearsomeKarma

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: USA

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Hello I am 13 years old, and I love to swim! My cousin is 2nd best swimmer in New Hampshire

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: At least a hour a day

What do you know about Role-playing? Give a definition of what it means to you: To me role-playing means to act like a different character. If anyone gets confused, I say its like playing your part in a movie when your acting.

What experience have you had in Role-playing, if any?: Three years of playing Dungeons and Dragons.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: When a player uses information that he/she does not have, like when playerA hides his gold behind playerB's house, but playerB does not know playerA did that, but the OCC person controling playerB goes to the place playerA hide the gold and digs it up. I got the definition from the wikipedia BUT I DID NOT COPY IT. wiki : http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Metagaming

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is: Power emoting is forcing actions against players, you sould say you "atempt" instead of saying you automaticly did it without failure!

What do you expect this server will be like?: The server I've been looking for.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I played on a lot... I left because of this multiple reasons: Boring, Rage quit (I know right ), Grieved, Harassed, treated unfairly, Banned for killing a admin in a PVP server.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes

How did you hear about us?: Minecraft forums, Lets plays, and Google

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: No I can't access it sorry... BUT this is why I've been denied : "Messy Bio" "Wrong explonation of Meta gaming

In-Character:

Character Name: Pahprios Redyar

What Race are you?: Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): The Kingdom of Oren is a perfect place for a family. The birds speak lovely tunes, the merchants speak about trade and travels. The sun beamed on the kingdom with joy, and more joy too see another from the line of Horen to be born in the house of Redyar. Pahprios Redyar, born on a happy day, but at a bad time. The Plague has begun and Pahprios youngest and most loved of his Mother and Father must live. Nothing he does goes unnoticed by his parents. Pahprios' proudest day is coming soon, turning into a man! Although he will have the worst birthday of his life. Just a few days ago, his sister gets Ki'katta.

Pahprios wakes up late in the morning, because he wants to get this day over for his birthday. As he goes down the hallway he runs into his sister. "Lisha your suppose to be in bed..."

"I-I...I know... I'm just b-bored..."

"Lisha you sound horrible.*Pahprios attempts to touch Lisha's forehead.*"

"Don't touch me you must avoid contact..."

"Lisha let me chec-."

"Nooo...."

"Lisha I have to-"

"Nooo!!!"

Then with putting all her will on crying she faints. "Lisha! Mother, father come quick she fainted!" The sounds of footsteps echo up the hallway with speed. "What happened!?" Cries the mother.

"She walked out of the room, She sounded horrible, I had to check her fever, but she was reluctant."

"Foolish boy! You know she is Ill!"

"Mother I just-"

"Go to your room!"

Pahprios tries to persuade her mother to let him see her. Then with failer goes to his room. He thinks for along time what mother use to say. "Pahprios, remember when I told you, God then blew his own breath of existence into the hollow shell and the Man lived? "

"Yes?"

"Well every part of his breath has greatness in it, and parts of is given to Man's children, those parts vary in greatness, and you will have that rare greatness don't you forget." What a tale that was, about Elves, Dwarfs, Orcs and Humans entering the world. He always thought what the shagged man said, "And Horen, may your people one day explore the Seven Skies." Who was he? Could he meet that man one day? Was he going to go to the Seven Skies? Later that night Pahprios was having a good night sleep, then a cry moaned from the hallway. Grabbing his robe and rushing to what he though was his sister's room the cry originated. He found his mother and father looking at their daughter. "Br...rother.. It's... n-not... your...f-ffault..." Then just like that Lisha collapsed on her bed dead. "Damn you Pahprios! Damn you straight to Iblees!" Cried his father with blood-red eyes. He grabbed everything, Pahprios knew he was not welcome to his home any longer. He stops out the door, and his mother reaches for his and his father pulls her away. "Pahprios may God's breath has greatness in you! May it have greatness..." Worse than any exile or execution, Pahprios was disowned from his family, on his Birthday, and on Mother's day.

What are your Character's ambitions?: No longer loved by his family he has a aimless goal, maybe he will just search for his greatness.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): Bow (If that does not count then a sword)

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Survival

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser:

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( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):Other Information about your Character:

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? His Honor already flew away when he was disowned by his family, Saving the halflings life might do something for his honor. "Hooligans leave the elf alone! Why must you do it in public? I will put shame on you with this act! Draw your sword!" Pahprios yells, as he tries to draw the public's attention. "I will smite you to Iblees torture chamber my self!" Pahprios mutters as he charges to the two men. "What a fool! He will die from his blindness!" one warrior says to the other. Phaprios runs and tries to pick-up the past even faster. As he attempts to swing his sword at the warrior he trips over the others shoe, but manage to get a cry from the one who tripped him with his fist. He rolls to the left to get away from the two men and sees he gave one of them a black eye. "That black eye will serve you as a black spot." Pahprios says to the man. The crowd chants who ever they thing is winning. Then the man with the black eye grabs him by the shoulders and bends him over the road to a steep cliff going to the pool below the cloud temple. Then to the man, and Pahprios' surprise the hafling bites at the other warriors leg. As he trips he pushes his companion of the road and to his death. Pahprios and the hafling jump on the surviving man and manage to beat him until he cries for surrender. Pahprios helps the halfing up and leads him to the exit of the Cloud Temple.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? Pahprios looks at his goods, then when hes not interested in any of them but he ask a question "Whereas a good inn I could stay at?"

"I can't remember, maybe I could get something to help me remember?"

"I will not pay you for such a thing like that"

"Well sorry I can't help you."

"Fine." Then Pahprios walks to a other merchant to get his answer.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: He closes the chest lid. Who lives here with expensive items? It does not really matter, if he takes them if could be a trap, a trap he can not disable. There is a river that goes down a hill behind the hut, I will follow it to civilization. Then Pahprios leaves without a trace.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you in the common tongue, how do you respond? "Hello do you have a inn-" Pahprios is interrupted by a rumble in his stomach. "He must be tried and hungry the lad." the trader's wife says to him with out leaving his eyes of Pahprios. "We have no inn lad, but heres some bread and milk just follow the path behind the trading camp and you will get to civilization very shortly." The trader says as he gets those items." Thank you sir, may God watch over you." Then Pahprios walks away with a wave goodbye.[/color

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: He heads to the leader's house and knocks at the door. "Hello? I wish to help you with the town problem." Pahprios says to the door. Then it opens with the leader in front of him. So many scars cover his face Pahprios can only wonder how he got them. "Hello lad! You came at the last second! You better hurry inside, we will get the deal arranged." Then with a hand on Pahprios' back he goes inside.

Anything else you would like to say?: I tried my best on this application, and it took me two days to make it. I also tried my best on grammar, and tried to put as much lore as I could, I also took notes on it. Here are the notes I made :God then blew his own breath of existence into the hollow shell and the Man lived.

Horen one of four sons to make human

Iblees god who hated God's creations

white light erupt from the east

And Horen, may your people one day explore the Seven Skies.

Run from plague

Holy Oren empire

Monster illness Grish

Sister contain Ki'katta

If it is denied I will accept it and work harder on it.

P.S I used spell check is that cheating?

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Accepted!

This is a decent application. It may have taken you a while to apply, but now it's paid off.

Welcome to Asulon! Please wait patiently for a GM to whitelist you.

[everblue2er101 906]

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[Danny 2232]

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