Monkeycoffee´s 2Nd Application

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: MonkeyCoffee

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:CEST (Holland)

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Indeed I do

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:Im a normal person who loves playing games with friend and other fun and nice people.

Im in (After vacation) in the second grade of Middle School and when not learning and making homework I occasionally play games.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:On a normal week 2-5 hours, in vacation 3-8 hours.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:I havent done much of roleplaying yet but I feel very attracted to it and want to learn more about it.

What I feel about roleplaying is that you can turn into another person and do anything you want.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:I have roleplayed in World of Warcraft, which was very fun!

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:Meta-Gaming is when you use knowledge that is not available to your character, for example, asking someone something and calling them by their name, even when you just met the character, that is Meta-Gaming.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:Power-Emoting is when someone types something like: "Bob steals Gary's dog". The person 'Gary' cannot prevent this action.

What would be the right action is: "Bob tries to steal Gary's dog". This allows 'Gary' to respond to this action.

What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect this server to be really amazing and awesome, I heard some good things from my friend Redcake11

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:To be honest, I have never played Minecraft with roleplaying, I hope that doesnt affect my application.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes I did

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: I will follow all rules and accept any punishment.

How did you hear about us?:I heard this from my friend Redcake11.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/64030-monkeycoffee%C2%B4s-application/

In-Character:

Character Name: Elessar Súrion

What Race are you? :Elf

What Sub-Race are you?: Dark Elf

Biography: Elessar was a young elf with white hair and red glowing eyes and was around three years old when he was left behind by his parents in a distant Elven settlement.

The Elves took care of Elessar, telling him that his parents left him behind to, once he's grown up, defend this settlement which was continously sieged by Orcs.

Then on one day when he was older he heard some Elves talk: "That boy, Elessar, how did he end up here, he isnt a normal Elf, he is a Dark Elf, those dont come from here. ?" The other Elf answered: " His parents left him behind, they didnt expect a son and never wanted children. Elessar was shocked...they lied to him! After he heard that he packed up his stuff and left to Normandor, the capital city of the Elves to aid his Kingdom and learn what happened to his family.

Traveling to Normandor he passed by the ruins of Laurelin with undead roaming around.

Staying small to not get noticed, he found a corpse with a pretty sharp iron sword laying on the ground.

Since the person is dead he took the sword with him, and right on time, 2 undead ran at him whilst casting a spell.

Elessar, swinging his sword he cut the heads off of the two undead, blood dripped out of their necks, attracting more undead.

Fireballs were thrown at him, Elessar ran away as fast as he could, finally finding a road with some guards patrolling.

When the undead saw the Guards, they backed off, Elessar being relieved that he survived that, he saw a road sign saying [<---NORMANDOR 1 MILE].

He could jump of the joy he had, he was so close!

What are your Character's ambitions?:Eldessar wants to aid his kingdom to victory, either by war or diplomacy, by economy or murdering, he wants to help!

He is also interested in 'smithing' and he wants to become a famous smith.

What is your character’s favorite tool? : Elessar's favourite tool is a Sword which he has always with him, so he can draw his sword when needed.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Fighting and crafting.

A screenshot of your skin :

Other Information about your Character: Gifted with magical abilities which he doesnt want to learn nor know about, he likes "Hacking and slashing" too much.

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?: One of the Warriors: "C'mon you little s***, give us your money now! " The Halfling: "Please, I dont have -Warrior kicks him-..ough..anything!

Elessar: "Hey, what are you two doing!?" Warrior: "This is none of your business, go away! Well maybe it is my business, I wont let someone get beaten in the open!" Elessar Shouted. -Elessar gets kicked- "Ohh its on now!" The two warriors draw their swords and so did Elessar although he only had a stone sword.

When the two Warriors were trying to attack Elessar the halfling ran away searching for guards, with succes.

The guards came and the warriors ran away, leaving Elessar with a blue eye and other wounds...

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

"Greetings merchant, what types of wares do you have?"I got some new herbs from a far away land, interested?" "Not really, do you have any food, my food supply is getting low" "In fact I do, got me some fish from that fisherman over there,2 Minas for a fish" Ok that seems like a fair price, I will take 3 fish" "That'll be 6 Minas" -Elessar hands over 6 Minas and the Merchant 3 fish- "Happy trading with you" "Indeed, and this food will keep me aive for a few more days". I say goodbye to the merchant and walk away.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:I wouldn't take it, it is not mine and not my right to take it. Whilst walking away I see a bandit trying to steal the items. I draw my sword and when he is not looking I put the edge of my sword next to his neck and say: "Leave and dont come back or else" He does as I say and I walk away with a good feeling.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? "Greetings traveler" "Hello good sir, I am in dire need of a new sword, do you have a new sword that I can trade or buy?" "In fact I do, that necklace of yours looks interesting, trade my sword for your necklace?" "I found that thing on the ground somewhere, its probaply worth nothing." "Okay we have a deal" They hand over the goods. "My wife will love this necklace." "Im glad you like it" Whilst saying that I walk away...

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: I would help, even if I didnt get a reward, I will always try to help people and my kingdom.

"Do you need any more people?" "More people the better" "Good, I wanna kick the butts of those bandits!" "A little rough, but I like rough" "Umm..., I dont know how to react on that.." "No not that way, well anyway, lets go!" Once they reached the bandits, a fight started and a few lives had been lost.

Back at the town everyone got their reward, they got to the Inn and had a drink!

Anything else you would like to say?:

Im sorry for the color, something did go wrong, and im sorry if this hasnt been 24 hours after my first application since I dont use PM and AM

[Dante 206]

Denied.

Your biography showed more effort, though it's extremely harmful to our lore. There are no elven settlements written in lore, that would turn away a dark elf and there lacks a reason to do so. They are widely accepted, and as a matter of fact the leading figure of Malinor is a dark elf. If you need any help on elven lore, feel free to message me about the matter.

We don't follow miles in Asulon, and this bit of your biography isn't necessarily a necessity.

Laurilen was a city is Aegis, not Asulon. We sailed from Aegis for a good bit of time, and the fact that it was only a mile away breaks lore a good deal. Also, it is not inhabited by Undead anymore, as only a very selective few of them lie in Asulon. A child cannot kill two of them in one swipe as it is power-gaming.

We elves follow a Princedom, not a Kingdom. Small note, though it shows you've read the lore.

You cannot be born with magical abilities, as it is an acquired trait. Further use of magic requires a magic application, once you've been accepted into the server.

"A little rough, but I like rough" "Umm..., I dont know how to react on that.." "No not that way, well anyway, lets go!"

This bit was not in any way necessary, so I'm uncertain as to why it was in your application, though the rest of your open responses I did like.

[Dante 206]

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