Istzaer's Application [Denied]

[Dyn 149]

Minecraft Account Name: Demonxerov2

Character Name: Istzaer

Race: Mori

Gender: Male

Age: 129 ( 645 in human years)

Appearance:

Standing at five foot seven, Istzaer shows off his red hair (dyed of course), not a bad looker, and a toned body. He has a notable scar on his left cheek, in which he proudly shows to everyone. He has a sort of shaggy hairstyle, covering some of his heterozygous eyes.

Personality:

Generally an uncaring Mori, Istzaer doesn’t generally do things unless he is specifically told to do so by someone who he can benefit from or he serves in general. He is a proud Mori, spitting down on other races that dare to insult him before striking them with his blade.

Biography:

Istzaer didn’t exactly have the childhood of most of the Mori. He was abandoned by his parents at the young age of 30 (Mori) years old. From there, he would be beaten or spat on by people before hearing about how he would never grow to become anything. He saw how the nobles lived, swearing that one day he would live greater than them all. He thought for a moment and headed off into the slums. This would mark the beginning of his training to gain his noble status.

During his years of training, Istzaer stumbled upon a rusty knife in the water. He reluctantly took it, studying it before trying it out. He proceeded to stalk and attack a pig, though it took his much effort and many poorly made strikes. Angered by this, Istzaer decided to learn how to properly use the tool. He spent weeks trying to just find out the proper way to handle it, followed by the years it took to learn how to use it. This was his beginning to his knife mastery, also using larger blades such as swords and daggers along the way.

Eventually, he was pleased with his new found strengths. He took it on himself to leave that old life of his behind, dying his hair and changing his clothing. He adopted a new name, Istzaer, as he felt his previous one would hold him back. From the shadows he emerged, ready to make a new start for himself. Where his paths will lead is currently unknown.

Your characters ambitions:

To become as respected as the nobles, live the luxurious life that he was robbed of, to serve those who deserve it.

Why does your character do what he/she does?

To get closer of his goal to become high in the society or at least to noble status.

What moral boundaries does your character adhere to, if any?

He prefers not to kill unless he has to. Murder isn’t something that goes well with your reputation unless you have a good reason to back it up.

What are some notable strengths and weaknesses of your character?

Weaknesses:

1. Istzaer has trust issues which cause him to not want to be around many people.

2. Minor insomnia due to nightmares about beatings.

Strengths:

1. Near sword mastery and knife mastery.

2. Minor commoner knowledge.

What role will your character play in Asulon?

A man who will do what he needs to to get to power, assuming the task has interest to him.

Is your character loyal or a backstabber?

If he gives you his true loyalty, then you can feel safe that he will not try to harm you unless you provoke him. However, he will sometimes fake this loyalty to get what he needs.

Are you familiar with all server/villain application rules?

I believe I am.

Evils to be considered for?

2a and 2b

Why do you as a player wish to and think you deserve to play as a villain?

To play my Mori to the best of my ability while also giving people some good RP. I think that it is only appropriate for a mori to be ready to kill anyone who crosses him. I’ve been on the server for a while, been told I do some good RP. I think that it would be nice to be able to play this character with less restrictions and allow him to kill at willl

===Roleplay Related Questions===

As your character wanders the back-streets of Menorcress, you sight a cloaked figure lurking in one of the shadowed nook behind the Brothel: a rustle of cloth is heard, and the figure ushers you in with a skeletal finger. The hooded figure imparts information involving a conspiracy to over-throw the House of Miiystra, and offers you a hefty sum of coin to partake in the planned attack. How does your character react?

Istzaer slaps the man’s hand away after examining it and determining it to be surfacer, walking off as he heads towards the noble district and heads into the Miiystra house. He decides to tell the people of the house about the attack, not liking the surfacer more than he dislikes the actual house. He then stands aside, watching the attackers be slaughtered by the prepared forces. Istzaer is sure that he will gain some reputation for this.

Your character finds him/herself watching the Alure d'aphyon: the several fighters within the void maze wield only sticks as they prove their prowess as warriors by battling to the death. One of fighters happens to be a close companion of yours, and you witness him being strategically cornered by three of the other fighters and beaten to death. While the crowd cheers in celebration of the violence, and the death of your friend. How does your character react?

Looking down at the body, Istzaer growls. “I could’ve still used him for work” he thinks to himself before walking away, remembering the faces of those who attacked his friend. As he waits outside the entrance, he notices the leader of the three. Lurking in the shadows, Istzaer makes sure to find out where the man lives by trailing him. As the man tries to close the door, Istzaer stands there, his arm holding it open. He swings the door wide open as he walks inside, knife in hand, and proceeds to attack the man. The man grabs what he can, a metal bar from repairs, and smacks Istzaer’s shoulder. Istzaer growls in pain before lunging the knife forward at his neck, causing the man to bleed out shortly after. Istzaer sheathes the knife and walks away while holding his shoulder, muttering some curses under his breathe.

As you turn the corner into a dimly lit alley, a pair of young female rothe [slave/cattle] instantly run up to you. They are begging for a donation of either coin or bread. How does your character react?

As Istzaer looks at them, he remembers his own struggles. He tells them that if they do not make anything of themselves, they will always be nothing but filth. Istzaer then takes a small amount of loaves from his bag and throws it to them before walking off.

A male and female rivvil [human] and a rivvil child seem lost amidst the alley-ways of byr'shuk [outsider-market]. The woman walks with a long staff, and the man appears to have a scabbard at his side. How does your character react?

Istzaer raises a brow at them, leaning against a wall, as he watches them stumble around before the woman finally decides to talk to him. She decides to ask for directions in which he decides to ask for minas. The man becomes angered and draws his scabbard, holding it up to Ist’s neck. Istzaer raises a hand and points them down a dark alley, knowing that it is really a dead end. As the man turns, Istzaer grabs the knife from his belt and stabs down on his skull repeatedly until the man falls with a sickening thud. After sheathing the knife, he glares at the corpse once more before walking off.

Two guards try to break up a fight between your acquaintance and two members of another qu'ellar [house]. Your 'friend' slays one of the guards as he approaches, causing the others to draw their arms. How does your character react?

Istzaer stands at the side, trying to talk them all down. As the two rival members and guards attack his friend, Istzaer merely stands at the side. He knows that he can’t help the friend and won’t try to be a hero to save him. Istzaer watches the scene unfold before walking to the body of his friend, closing his eyes before he stands and exits the scene.

A screenshot of your skin:

[Amethain 25]

Appearance:

Standing at five foot seven, Istzaer shows off his red hair (dyed of course), not a bad looker, and a toned body. He has a notable scar on his left cheek, in which he proudly shows to everyone. He has a sort of shaggy hairstyle, covering some of his heterozygous eyes.

~~ Heterozygous simply means a dominant and recessive Allele. Heterozygous Definition If the eyes are different colors I would assume you mean Hetero-chromatic.

~~ It is very short, I can hardly imagine this character much less would I care to come in contact with such a under-formed person.

~~Mori are fastidious groomers, if he intends on being noble appearing unkempt is quite counter-productive.

Personality: Generally an uncaring Mori, Istzaer doesn't generally do things unless he is specifically told to do so by someone who he can benefit from or he serves in general. He is a proud Mori, spitting down on other races that dare to insult him before striking them with his blade.

~~He is a proud Mori, therefore he has ones whom he generally serves...

~~This is incredibly short and I see almost no personality. All I see is he is proud. I see nothing on many other aspects of a person's personality such as; is he outgoing/reclusive, mature/immature, dominant/deferential, apprehensive/confident. I would like to see a great amount more detail in this area.

Biography: Istzaer didn’t exactly have the childhood of most of the Mori. He was abandoned by his parents at the young age of 30 (Mori) years old. From there, he would be beaten or spat on by people before hearing about how he would never grow to become anything. He saw how the nobles lived, swearing that one day he would live greater than them all. He thought for a moment and headed off into the slums. This would mark the beginning of his training to gain his noble status.

During his years of training, Istzaer stumbled upon a rusty knife in the water. He reluctantly took it, studying it before trying it out. He proceeded to stalk and attack a pig, though it took his much effort and many poorly made strikes. Angered by this, Istzaer decided to learn how to properly use the tool. He spent weeks trying to just find out the proper way to handle it, followed by the years it took to learn how to use it.

This was his beginning to his knife mastery, also using larger blades such as swords and daggers along the way.

Eventually, he was pleased with his new found strengths. He took it on himself to leave that old life of his behind, dying his hair and changing his clothing. He adopted a new name, Istzaer, as he felt his previous one would hold him back. From the shadows he emerged, ready to make a new start for himself. Where his paths will lead is currently unknown.

~~I see no biography here, I see a short description of his past. It merely talks of his parents abandoning him and the rest is simply nonsense about him finding a knife and talking of him taking years to learn how to use it.

~~What of his family? Will they not recognize him upon his return and reveal who he is? Did he know anyone in the past, could they identify him?

~~Who trained him in the art of a blade? Slicing pigs and cows is incredibly different from fighting another being. Also training yourself you cannot possibly expect to have the skill or tact of those who hone their skills upon one another.

What moral boundaries does your character adhere to, if any?

He prefers not to kill unless he has to. Murder isn’t something that goes well with your reputation unless you have a good reason to back it up.

~~ He prefers not to kill unless he has to. Yet, multiple times you talk of killing without a second thought. Just look in the spoiler here

His Personality.

He is a proud Mori, spitting down on other races that dare to insult him before striking them with his blade.

Your own reason for wanting a VA.

To play my Mori to the best of my ability while also giving people some good RP. I think that it is only appropriate for a mori to be ready to kill anyone who crosses him. I’ve been on the server for a while, been told I do some good RP. I think that it would be nice to be able to play this character with less restrictions and allow him to kill at will.

The answer to the second of the VA questions.

Looking down at the body, Istzaer growls. “I could’ve still used him for work” he thinks to himself before walking away, remembering the faces of those who attacked his friend. As he waits outside the entrance, he notices the leader of the three. Lurking in the shadows, Istzaer makes sure to find out where the man lives by trailing him. As the man tries to close the door, Istzaer stands there, his arm holding it open. He swings the door wide open as he walks inside, knife in hand, and proceeds to attack the man. The man grabs what he can, a metal bar from repairs, and smacks Istzaer’s shoulder. Istzaer growls in pain before lunging the knife forward at his neck, causing the man to bleed out shortly after. Istzaer sheaths the knife and walks away while holding his shoulder, muttering some curses under his breath.

The answer to the Fourth VA question.

Istzaer raises a brow at them, leaning against a wall, as he watches them stumble around before the woman finally decides to talk to him. She decides to ask for directions in which he decides to ask for minas. The man becomes angered and draws his scabbard, holding it up to Ist’s neck. Istzaer raises a hand and points them down a dark alley, knowing that it is really a dead end. As the man turns, Istzaer grabs the knife from his belt and stabs down on his skull repeatedly until the man falls with a sickening thud. After sheathing the knife, he glares at the corpse once more before walking off.

What are some notable strengths and weaknesses of your character?

Weaknesses:

1. Istzaer has trust issues which cause him to not want to be around many people.

2. Minor insomnia due to nightmares about beatings.

Strengths:

1. Near sword mastery and knife mastery.

2. Minor commoner knowledge.

~~Near sword mastery upon pigs as far as I can tell from your bio.

I will be rather blunt with you and I understand you have been playing a Mori character for a while. I think the application is pathetic, just like your prior one. I would certainly have denied it had I taken charge of it. Hearing of your prior role-play I am severely disappointed in the quality of this application.

This Application is...

[Danny 2232]

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