2Nd App For Deastoryer

[Deastoryer 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: Deastoryer

How old are you?: 16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Eastern Standard Time U.S.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I don't like to describe my self cause I don't like to make my self look good or bad. And if one describes there self it is open to lies most likely. But I guess I have to, Good, Nice, Love RPing, and Friendly unless you provoke me

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: alot about 4/7 days and that is full as in playing time is 4 days but over all 7 or 6 days.

What do you know about Roleplaying? It is fun But It is a way to escape from life to another one and have fun and be who you want whitch is why it's Roleplaying

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I love Skyrim and oblivion the one before it and Like to play all kinds of rp game Cause Im in those fantasy books Like LOTR Whitch I also play (The Lord of the Rings).

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Metagaming is when I obtain other information through an outside source such as a map or wiki or forum and use it to help my character obtain knowledge he shouldn't have. It's obtaining knowledge for an unfair advantage.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is: When someone says an action that forces someone else to do something. The first person would give an action that would force the second person involved to do something with out their consent.

In your own Words, define what Out of Character (OOC) is: Me as a real live person. When I speak as Jonah, and not my character. I may ask something about the game or server that has nothing to do with my character so I must use ooc so I don't metagame.

In your own Words, define what In Character (IC) is: The character I've created. I act as though i am the elf and I only give answers and act as though he would.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect it to be real roleplay as in Every one plays a part such as king warriors advetures and so on with villages between the castles and borders between lands of races

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Alot of servers but none RP and I left some of them because of bad Admins and support and not a good set up

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes, and I can't use teamspeak

How did you hear about us?: Minecraft Forums

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: I have not made a previous application.

In-Character:

Character Name: Pritchard

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) : Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): No Just a human not viking Human just regular

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):This will be long.Pritchard Was just a boy when they started watching him, he showed great skill in the feild of a Ranger which have been thought to practice Dark arts because of there uncanny skill in stealth shot with a bow and combat, not to metion speed and wits, but back to Pitchard. He showed great skill and potental and when he became of age to pick his trade he wanted to be a knight but was to small and "scrany" as the battle instructer had but it, next was battle horse apprentice and the instucter said he would get trumpled, and so on on this through the Diplomat cook and Speakers. And it had seemed that no one would take him till a shadowy figure steped up from a shadow, know one knew was there but the Baron and said he would take him. After years of Apprentice-ship he was tooken into the Ranger corps of 50 and started his Journey to become a legon in history. In this story he has scouted and saved his kingdom by infreltrating and finding the enemys plan to killing assins trying to kill the kings daugter. But when his own apprentice is captured and the knig refuses to do anything about it because of the weight of after war when people ran into hiding and must be found and caught. So Pritchard goes into a bar at night and causes trouble guards come to take him out he coments a treson and insults the king so his arrested and took to him. Which is punishable by death but scince he is an old friend and see's the trouble going on in his heart he banishes him. So after banishment he goes to find his apprentice and to stay in this new place with him in hope to be what he once truly was. And starts his Journey in this new kingdom (Server)

What are your Character's ambitions?: To keep this kingdom safe in war, Assinations, to bandits and theifs and to be loyal and a all out hero to his king and his people

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): Bow Which is what a ranger is known for but they are also experts with throwing knives and a sax knife the always carry.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Archery, Stealth, Close Combat, wits, Speed and Tactics

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ): http://www.minecraft...0494/tfr-other/

Other Information about your Character:

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? He would shoot and arrow (from the shadow of the trees after seeing proof) in the ground close enought just to make them jump and scared he steps out and orders them to stop or be tooken to jail if it fails he would soot the one in the knee and as I said he is trained very well cause he never misses a shot or where he aims he already has another on pulled back in seconds and has the guy stop in his tracks, but if the gets close he drops his bow and pulls out his sax knife and kills him for attempted murder of a Kings Ranger.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? I would either ignor him or politlly turn him down and walk away depending on my mood, or if I am in need of some Ill buy some with out any eye contact to remain a Rangers renouned mystery.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: Ill shall ignor it For Rangers don't wear swords and arn't trained in them but would investigat and see who it belongs to, watch over it until someone returns, or if in a hurry will walk away.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?As they don't seem harmful, I ask them "do you have food to spare an old Ranger I'll pay a pretty coin for it." And move on, But if they don't hand take the deal I would sneak in with know noise and steal a little amount and put a bit more coin than it's worth there.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: I will help but won't accept the coin cause it's my job to protect the Kingdom and and paid a good amount any way.

Anything else you would like to say?: Are there already some Ranger's out there and if so how do I contact them and also Is it possble to build your own kingdom cause I would like that and have people apointed to places.

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED [X]

Put on PENDING [ ]

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

[[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]]

Out of Character:

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Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

-Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [ ]

-Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge of the World [X]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [X]

-Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [ ]

-Unreal Scenarios [ ]

Bouts of Powergaming [ ]

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Conflicting Answers [ ]

Character is Cliche [ ]

Requires a Villain Application [ ]

Open Ended Responses Require Elaboration [ ]

-ORQ 1 is flawed [ ]

-ORQ 2 is flawed [ ]

-ORQ 3 is flawed [ ]

-ORQ 4 is flawed [ ]

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--All ORQs are flawed [ ]

Form:

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Skin:

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Other Comments:

Primarily, your biography is lacking in any indication of lore knowledge. Please be advised, in order to join our server, some knowledge of lore must be presented to prove that you have understood and are accommodated to our server's adage. Please read the lore on the website, forums, and/or the wiki to take a glimpse of what our server has done for the past year. Then, implement some lore knowledge that is valid such as city names, nations, and large scale events. Also, please be advised that all lore that is /current/ must pertain to Asulon, not Aegis. Having your character being born from old cities is fine, but be aware that all current adventures your character will embark upon will be in Asulon.

Here are some useful links:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/wikka.php?wakka=HomePage

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=10

Secondly, the places mentioned in your biography are not actually featured in the server and therefore, renders your application's biography as void and invalid. Please be aware, it is imperative for an applicant to be familiarized with key locations in Asulon as it is common knowledge. If one's character were to not know of some basic knowledge, it would seriously corrupt and destroy roleplay, even going as far as to ruining your character's past, present, and future.

After fixing that, please wait 24 hours from this denial.

I wish you good luck on your next application!

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If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account! <3

You come to Asulon to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.

Don't post another application in a period of two (2) days. It ruins our organisation methods.

Definition of Metagaming and Powergaming : http://sm-rp.forumotion.com/t32-powergaming-metagaming-ic-and-ooc

[Taiga 764]

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