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MC Username: Mythosaur2

Rp Username (be sure to include the correct prefix, look up on info thread): Do’Vzar

Character Skillset:

Axe Mastery : 40

Wrestling : 27

Appearance (age, SUBRACE, gender):

Do V’zar has a ink black pelt, orangy yellow eyes and the scars across his face (explained in the backstory) He wears black light armor.

Age : 38

Subrace : Kha’ Pantera

Gender : M

Personality:

As most other Panteras are, Do’Vzar is wild, stong minded and an eager warrior of the night. As threatening as he may look, he is friendly towards other Kharajyr, and to apes who have respect for him. He also tends to speak in third person.

Please include a short bio of your character's life: Do’Vzar has had the warriors personality from a very young age, at age 18 he went out hunting with his father for food in the Karakatuan Jungle. But it went wrong, they were attacked by a pack of wild angry wolves. His father was killed, Do’Vzar was able to make it out alive, but not without a scar. One of the wolves scratched his face with his deadly claws, leaving behind 3 cuts on Do’Vzar’s face. Once he returned to Va’Khajra, he told his mother about the loss, she was in pain for years because of the loss of her Husband. Now that he’s a full grow Kharajyr, he decided to serve as a hunter and guard of the city, to protect its Sacred meaning.

Character's ambitions: He wants to protect the city of any kind of threat, therefor wants to join the city guards.

_---Situational Rp Questions---_

1.

As you travel through the Karakatuan jungle, you spot a human trespassing on your nation's lands. He approaches you, obviously distressed, and asks for any food, water, or shelter that you can provide, then tells you that he has been lost in the area for days without any proper supplies. How do you react?:

“The strange man approaches Do’Vzar”

Do’Vzar : Stop Ape! What are you doing in our sacred place?!

Stranger : Please, I’v been lost in these forests for days without food. I’m feeling weak and hungry.

Do’Vzar : Hmmm, Do’Vzar isn’t sure if the Ape speaks the truth, but you don’t look very good. Here, take it and leave.

“Do’Vzar hands the stranger a few loafs of bread”

Stranger : Thank you! Thank you very much! May your goddess bless you for your kindness!

Do’Vzar : Now get out of here, other guards may not be as friendly as Do’Vzar.

Stranger : Ye, yes, thank you kind one, But one more thing, how can I get out of here?

Do’Vzar : Follow the wall, go to the main gate, and follow the path from there, It should take you back to known lands for you. Now go.

Stranger : thank you kind sir, I will not forget it!

“The stranger goes away and follows the wall unseen”

2.

As you romp through the lands of the "apes", you come across a tavern. Inside this tavern, a Dwarf notices you and starts gawking at you, then begins to speak.

"Oi! I gots a bowl of cream for you, Kitty! Ha! I'd bet you would make a nice throw rug, wouldn't ya, ya mangy furball?!"

He continues act generally as racist as possible. What do you do?:

“Do’Vzars pupils widen, as he is ready to attack a prey”

Do’Vzar : Aaaah, Do’Vzar find your “small” jokes amusing.

“The other people in the inn laugh”

Dwarf : Ooh, the Kitty’s got claws!

Do’Vzar : Yes, Do’Vzar has claws indeed, did you just notice that form such “short’ distance?

“As the other people start to laugh again, the dwarf loses his temper”

Dwarf: Shut ye mouth cat, before I make a rug outta you!

Do’Vzar : What is is? Running “short” on temper?

“The dwarf grabs his stuff, and goes out of the inn in anger, leaving Do’Vzar and the other people laughing at him.”

Bartender : Good one lad, would ye like a drink?

Do’Vzar : No thank you, Do’Vzar has somewhere to go.

Bartender : No problem, that dwarf has always been a bastard to everyone, glad we got that out the way.

“Do’Vzar walks away form the tavern”

3.

One of your fellow Kharajyr and a close friend of yours comes to your dwelling in the middle of the night and begins to pound on your door. After you let him in, he confesses to killing another Kharajyr over a slice of cake. What do you do in response?

“The friend sits down on a seat, looking terrified”

Do’vzar : What have you done friend?!

Friend : I am sorry, I don’t want to be arrested! You know what happens to murderers!

Do’Vzar : Do’Vzar is sorry friend, you know the rules, our goddess forbids these crimes.

Friend : I though I could trust you!

Do’Vzar : time for you to leave.

“Do’vzar hits his friend cold on the ground, and brings him to the palace. The next day he was sacrificed to Metztli”

Do you swear to follow the Tlatlanni and uphold his law, and do you swear to hold Metztli and all of her actions as sacred? Do’Vzar swears to follow the rules of Tlatlanni and shall follow them no matter what. All Metztli’s actions are sacred and heretics shall be punished.

Please include a screenshot or 3D render of your character's skin

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Thank you for your time!

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This is a denied from me.

-Expand on your bio. Go into greater detail on your character's life, at the moment there is only minimal info.

-Perhaps find a more personal ambition, as city life of the Kharajyr has sort of gone down the toilet. Have a more 'personal' ambition.

-Try and fix a few of the spelling errors.

-Expand on your last situational RP question.

Re-apply in 24 hours and I or another KAT member will view it again. Good luck!

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MC Username: Mythosaur2

Rp Username (be sure to include the correct prefix, look up on info thread): Do’Vzar

Character Skillset:

Axe Mastery : 40

Wrestling : 27

Appearance (age, SUBRACE, gender):

Do V’zar has a ink black pelt, orangy yellow eyes and the scars across his face (explained in the backstory) He wears black light armor.

Age : 38

Subrace : Kha’ Pantera

Gender : M

Personality:

As most other Panteras are, Do’Vzar is wild, stong minded and and eager warrior of the night. As threatening as he may look, he is friendly towards other Kharajyr, and to apes who have respect for him. He also tends to speak in third person.

Please include a short bio of your character's life:

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(Here is the text version if you are unable to open/read it)

Do’Vzar has had the warriors personality from a very young age, at age 18 he went out hunting with his father for food in the Karakatuan Jungle. But it went wrong, they were attacked by a pack of wild angry wolves. His father was killed, Do’Vzar was able to make it out alive, he only broke his wrist. Once he returned to Va’Khajra, he told his mother about the loss, she was in pain for years because of the loss of her Husband. Over the years he learned certain techniques for hunting, within these, he learned to love the art of axe wielding. He went out in the jungles to train this skill quite a lot.

When Do’Vzar was 30 years old, his mother disappeared, last thing she was doing was fishing in the pond at the edge of the city. Do’Vzar and his brother were old enough to live on their own now. They both went out looking for their missing mother, sadly they did not find her. Three years later, when Do’Vzar was hunting, he heard the howling of wolves again. He learned to listen and understand what they meant. Apparently, the leader of the pack was calling out for the others to eat. Do’Vzar went to look out of curiosity, and found dead bodies being ripped apart by the wolves. He waited for hours until the wolves were gone. Once they were out of sight, he climbed down the tree, and searched the bloody remains of the corpses, his eyes fell upon a small cave with what appeared to be a Kharajyr Skeleton inside. He searched the skeleton and found something, It was his mothers moon amulet, this was the corpse of his mother. He was outraged, and waited for the wolves to come back. It was night when the beasts regrouped, and Do’Vzar was ready to start the attack. The leader o fthe pack picked up a scent in the bushes, he howled and the Wolves charged at the person in the bushes, when they dragged him to their cave, Do’Vzar saw who it was, it was his brother. He jumped down, took 2 wolves out with arrows, then swung out his axe, ran up to the leading wolf, and attacked him. The black pelted wolf was an equal match to Do’Vzar, when he jumped on top of him, he scratched his face with his deadly wolven claws, leaving behind 3 cut wounds. Do’Vzar was able to take a swing at the wolf head after some struggling and was able to slive off the wolfs head. Once he stood up, all blood covered, he released a panther like growl towards the other wolves, scaring them away.

When he looked at his brother, it was already to late. The wolves already took his life. He took the body, and layed it next to the remains of his mother. Later he sealed off the small cave entrance with large stone and prayed to Metztli to give them a good afterlife. He had the Moon amulet in his hand and put it around his neck, even until this way he still wears the amulet. Now he roams the Jungles of Karakatuan, hunting for food and for the savage wolves that remain.

Character's ambitions: Just like his father, he wants to become an excellent hunter, who knows the treacherous jungles like his back pocket. to hunt down the remaining wolves is also a target for Do'Vzar.

_---Situational Rp Questions---_

1.

As you travel through the Karakatuan jungle, you spot a human trespassing on your nation's lands. He approaches you, obviously distressed, and asks for any food, water, or shelter that you can provide, then tells you that he has been lost in the area for days without any proper supplies. How do you react?:

“The strange man approaches Do’Vzar”

Do’Vzar : Stop Ape! What are you doing in our sacred place?!

Stranger : Please, I’v been lost in these forests for days without food. I’m feeling weak and hungry.

Do’Vzar : Hmmm, Do’Vzar isn’t sure if the Ape speaks the truth, but you don’t look very good. Here, take it and leave.

“Do’Vzar hands the stranger a few loafs of bread”

Stranger : Thank you! Thank you very much! May your goddess bless you for your kindness!

Do’Vzar : Now get out of here, other guards may not be as friendly as Do’Vzar.

Stranger : Ye, yes, thank you kind one, But one more thing, how can I get out of here?

Do’Vzar : Follow the wall, go to the main gate, and follow the path from there, It should take you back to known lands for you. Now go.

Stranger : thank you kind sir, I will not forget it!

“The stranger goes away and follows the wall unseen”

2.

As you romp through the lands of the "apes", you come across a tavern. Inside this tavern, a Dwarf notices you and starts gawking at you, then begins to speak.

"Oi! I gots a bowl of cream for you, Kitty! Ha! I'd bet you would make a nice throw rug, wouldn't ya, ya mangy furball?!"

He continues act generally as racist as possible. What do you do?:

“Do’Vzars pupils widen, as he is ready to attack a prey”

Do’Vzar : Aaaah, Do’Vzar find your “small” jokes amusing.

“The other people in the inn laugh”

Dwarf : Ooh, the Kitty’s got claws!

Do’Vzar : Yes, Do’Vzar has claws indeed, did you just notice that form such “short’ distance?

“As the other people start to laugh again, the dwarf loses his temper”

Dwarf: Shut ye mouth cat, before I make a rug outta you!

Do’Vzar : What is is? Running “short” on temper?

“The dwarf grabs his stuff, and goes out of the inn in anger, leaving Do’Vzar and the other people laughing at him.”

Bartender : Good one lad, would ye like a drink?

Do’Vzar : No thank you, Do’Vzar has somewhere to go.

Bartender : No problem, that dwarf has always been a bastard to everyone, glad we got that out the way.

“Do’Vzar walks away form the tavern”

3.

One of your fellow Kharajyr and a close friend of yours comes to your dwelling in the middle of the night and begins to pound on your door. After you let him in, he confesses to killing another Kharajyr over a slice of cake. What do you do in response?

“The friend sits down on a seat, looking terrified”

Do’vzar : What have you done friend?!

Friend : I am sorry, I don’t want to be arrested! You know what happens to murderers!

Do’Vzar : Hmmmm, Do’Vzar has an idea. There is a tunnel under my houe that leads outside of the city. Grab your supplies, and you can get out through there.

Friend : Thank you Do’Vzar.

Do’Vzar : Quickly, get your supplies before Do’Vzar changes his mind.

Friend : Right, I’ll be back.

“Do’Vzars friend goes to his home to get his supplies, when he returns form his house, the guards are standing in front of Do’Vzars house”

Guard : Have you seen your friend around here, he has committed a crime?

“Do’Vzar sees his friend running out of his house”

Do’Vzar : No, Do’Vzar hasn’t seen him for a while, what has he done this time?

Guard : He has murdered someone, we have to look for him, thank you for your time.

“Do’Vzar closes the door, but wonders what will happen to his friend.”

“The next day word goes around that his friend has been arrested, and will be sacrificed to Metztli the next day. Do’Vzar goes to the public sacrifice, and prays to Metztli to spare him some pain.”

Do you swear to follow the Tlatlanni and uphold his law, and do you swear to hold Metztli and all of her actions as sacred? Do’Vzar swears to follow the rules of Tlatlanni and shall follow them no matter what. All Metztli’s actions are sacred and heretics shall be punished.

Please include a screenshot or 3D render of your character's skin

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Thank you for your time!

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Accepted!

Nice touch with the bio there~

Put in a modreq for your race change. And have fun!

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Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.

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Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.

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