[Denied]Azengul's 1St Application

[Azengul 1]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: Azengul

How old are you?: Im 13 years old but I am a very serious roleplayer.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: City of Porto Alegre, Brazil GMT -3(timezone)

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes I do, I guess having a mother that teaches English helps.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I enjoy reading and roleplaying and several books inspired me in roleplaying such as Tolkien's Lord of the Rings.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:Weekly? I'd say about every day from afternoon all the way until late night.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Basically being someone you're pretending to be, for example if I am a Dwarf i must talk like one and act the way my character would.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I have roleplayed in a bunch of servers in Star Wars: The Old Republic.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: This means that you can not use out of character knowledge in character OR doing very implausible things such as speaking out of character while in IC.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:

This means that you are not allowed to rp in a way that gives you an unfair advantage and/or your character is not capable of.

Example of power gaming: Bill: *bill ties up bob and shoots him multiple times until he is dead.*

In your own Words, define what Out of Character (OOC) is: When you're not really roleplaying and simply talking like any other normal person.

In your own Words, define what In Character (IC) is: Its acting like your character during conversations of course in the IC chat.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect this is going to be an exciting server with a very nice community and a ton of fun.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on Legendary Craft but it was too much pvp and griefing for me so i left.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes, I do.

How did you hear about us?: Well when I saw candle's videos and PotatoOrgys Let's Plays.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:No this is my first application.

In-Character:

Character Name: Azengul the Hunter.

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) : Dwarf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): None

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Azengul, a dwarf with a very uncommon name, was born in Aegis and is more than 77 years old but has a very hardy constitution and a strangely enough a missing eye.After the destruction of Aegis he flew to the new lands in search of riches, fame and glory be it as a mercenary or a noble he will achieve his goals at any cost.Azengul was trained by his father since a very early age in blacksmithing, sword fighting,the use of axes and hunting but due to the natural hardiness and mining skills of the dwarves he is also a very skilled miner.

Azengul is now searching for his fame and glory in this strange land of Asulon and thinks that when he has enough money he will most likely settle down and build a farm, but sometimes money is gained at a severe cost.

What are your Character's ambitions?: Fortune, glory and prestige.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): Swords, pickaxes and axes.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Mining, blacksmithing and hunting.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot): I will attach it with the application.

Other Information about your Character: Azengul did not receive a very good education so he is a very rude man sometimes, other than that he never backs down from a fight.

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?: Azengul sees the two orcs harassing the halfling and instantly unsheaths his axe and prepares to a fight yelling '' What ye damn orcs be doing with this little man?!'' they respond '' Go away gazat! '' firmly believing in his axe fighting he attacks the orcs if he would succeed he would give the stolen money back to the halfling and then go to the nearest inn.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?: ''I have no time for this nonsense trader let meh go... wait a minute well actually... i would need this sword repaired could you do that for me'' ''Ah yes well its a bit old and rusty but i guess it will cost 50 minas do you have the money?'' ''Yes I do thank you meh fellow man '' .

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Azengul would notice the hut, but he killed a group of bandits and the spoils were too much for him to carry any additional weight from that hut so he would simply ignore the hut and follow the road on his way to the nearest town.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?: '' 'ello friend I need some money for someh ale in the nearest town is there any work around the camp?'' the man would say '' Ah yes, actually there is some work'' Azengul would then do all the avaiable work around the camp and would part ways to the nearest town.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Azengul would imediately enlist to support the guards bringing with him his trusty axe, his sword and his pickaxe and would bring some light armor aswell and his potions with him.He would follow the guards to the bandit's camp and after they are eliminated he would bring some of the spoils with him and waste some of the money in ale.

Anything else you would like to say?:I hope my character is good enough so i could get accepted in this awesome server.

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Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied [Correct the X'ed Areas]:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [x]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on the World [x]

Open Ended Questions Need Refining [x]

Illegal Character Abilities [ ]

Unrealistic Events [ ]

-Fabricated Large-Scale Events [ ]

Incorrect Lore [ ]

Power/Metagaming [ ]

Contradicting Statements [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Villain Application Needed [ ]

Incorrect Definitions of Power-emoting [ ]

Incorrect Definitions of Metagaming [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Incorrect Formatting [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [x]

-Unlore-ful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:Please add more lore to your biography and add more detail to your biography and ORQ's.

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