[Denied]Doom321 Third Application .

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b]Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

Doom321.

How old are you?:

13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Australia

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes, I do but I make the causal mistake time to time.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I'm a teen who likes to role play on servers, the hardcore ones because I enjoy the in depth role playing, I'm also a part time cook and, not to brag but my food is delicious! Its like heaven in your mouth.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

Maybe after

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Roleplay, Its just something that I love, you get a alter ego and you play him/her out the way you want, like your another character.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

I started on this server which I cannot remember its name but it had some good sense of role playing, we had factions and the plugin called MCMMO, I got the rank blacksmith, repairing weapons for the faction I was on always got attacked, we failed some times and succeeded sometimes, I eventually became Superior Blacksmith.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Its OOC, out of character information, Like you tell your best mate or best friend where your

location or you super secret base OOC.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:

Your are forcing your actions on to other players, like *Murders (player)", This gives the player

no option to react or even do something to protect himself, and what did he killed the player with?

In your own Words, define what Out of Character (OOC) is:

Its just you not talking like yourself.

In your own Words, define what In Character (IC) is:

Everything you say is what your character says.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I went on the server to look around, And saw these two people starting a fight, they went and strike each other, using proper grammar, They did things like "Joe fails to block, leaving a gap to attack", and I was stunned, so I expect this server to be what people say, "Cool"

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I would tell you, but I forgot its name, This was 1 year ago since I played on that server.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes, I did read the rules

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

Yes, I did, and I will abide the rules and laws.

How did you hear about us?:

Google

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

Previously made application

In-Character:

Character Name:

Avo Bridgewall

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :

Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Wood Elf

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

By the age of 12, Avo was given his books to read and a bow to hunt and a pat on his back from his father.

Avo was the oldest in his family living in Malinor with a decent looking little shack, Avo went on daily hunting parties with his friends and father, taking home large deer and sometimes a rabbit, Avo always took home a rabbit, since he was useless with the bow, but somehow remarkable with the sword.

In 110 years Avo turned into a young man, with a height of 6'2 and with nice thick brown

hair, Avo said goodbye to his mom, dad, friends and his two brothers and sisters as he travelled far away from them to seek fortune in the land beyond...

What are your Character's ambitions?:

Reading all his fantasy books and the study of ancient hero's, Avo wanted to become a man with glory to shine off his name.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

His iron sword.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

Swords and Hunting.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

Other Information about your Character:

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Avo begins to pick some rocks up, while glancing at the thugs occasionally, When Avo picks two heavy rocks he then quickly sneaks behind some trees, Attempting to hit a thug, Avo throws one of the rocks to the thugs head, Missing by a inch, Avo quickly gets behinde the tree again, but this time the thugs are aware that someone is here, Avo takes a quick glance, as the thugs see him they drop the halfling and move towards Avo, Avo then gets up and bolts away, tripping over some vines but he does manages to get away,

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Avo looks at the posh man, saying "Let me take a look at what you got", Searching through his wares Avo notices a book called "The Life on a Human Farm" and since Avo likes to learn, he goes through his rucksack to find his silver, after he finds them Avo then quickly places his money on the bench while taking the book.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Avo looks at the sword, he was stunned by the sheer quality of the sword, but apart of him says "No" while his greedy part yells "Yes!" Avo is left to decide, Avo then stop glaring at the sword and begins to leave the shack, Whispering to himself "I made the right choice"

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Avo weakly smiles at the common folk, Admiring their carefree life like what he use to do in Malinor, But coming back to the real world, Avo ask if he can have some bread for he is terribly hungry, The common folk then whisper to each other, coming to the conclusion of yes, they give him a big piece of bread which Avo greedily Munches on after he is given the bread

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Looking at the post, this would be the first step into the his journey of becoming a man, He gladly signs up, then after five minutes later Avo is now marching towards the bandit camp, with a grin on his face and his sword ever ready, Avo is becoming a man, and his first step to glory.

Anything else you would like to say?:

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Clarify Meta-Gaming definition. More info can be found on the forums and wiki, but make sure to put it in your own words.

Please expand on your characters bio - you have a one hundred year gap unaccounted for.

No skin screenshot.

Expand on the ORQs.

A good attempt that mostly needs tweaking and more details.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[everblue2er101 906]

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