[Denied]Griffs 4Th Application

[Felder 92]

b]Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:: Griff28

How old are you?:: 11

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:: Central Time USA

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:: Yes i do.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:: Im Griffen in real life,im 11 and im a great minecraft roleplayer.I play football,and basketball and i like sports.I like making new friends and have fun.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:: Im going to have football practice so ill be on for a hour each day due to having football for 3 hours.Once football is over ill be on about 4 hours everyday

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:[/b: Roleplaying is when you make your own character and put them into medieval,future or modern history oh yea and fantasy.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:: My friend has made roleplaying servers in the past I used to play on a server called Calsky Islands Rp server.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:: Using Out of Character Knowledge In Character

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:: Power-Emoting takes away the abilities of a player to prevent something bad in the roleplay.

What do you expect this server will be like?:: A great,and fun roleplay server

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:: Clasky Islands was shut down due to inactiveness.My friends server named realmofancientkingdoms got shutdown due to having a kingdom taking over the whole server.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:: Yes I have

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:: Yes

How did you hear about us?:

: My friend was talking about it

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:: I have but it was denied yesterday.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/66010-griff-3rd-application/

In-Character:

Character Name:: Marcus Felder Age: 29

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) ::Human

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) ::none

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):.

This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Marcus was born on a 70 mili wide island he went to Asulon when he was 29.When Marcus was born he had something special in him, he had a special kind of bravery. He was a funny kid to around with when he was 1-5 years old. When he was 6 he was reading stories of knights,adventures,and wars. He only wanted to be a knight when he grew up. When he was 9 his father died outside of the house shot by a arrow..

Marcus kept studieing and reading about knight,adventures, and wars. Marcuses mom was named Maria Felder. She was a very nice person and she was the baker of the family. Marcuses Dad was named Jonathan Felder, he was the farmer of the family, and sometimes a baker. Maria died with a disease and dad died getting shot by a arrows through the chest. Marcus turn 11 after 2 years of reading he went fishing with his brother Rick down at the dock. After years of taking a break he turned 18. Marcus always wanted to be a soilder but he needed to be like his father and farm for years and years. One day when he was farming a man came charging with a sword and tried to kill Marcus. Marcus had a gaurd dog named Julius. Julius charged the bandit then the bandit ran away and was never seen again.Marcus and his brothers had a family meeting. A man walked up to John Felder, the man said he took a ship to Asulon.

What are your Character's ambitions?:: To be a great soilder and leader.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):: Sword

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?[/b: Fighting enemies

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): http://imgur.com/24NOb sorry I dont know how to do the other format than but its a good link.

OPEN RESPONSE QUESTIONS

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?: I would distract the bandits by saying Marcus: Hi im looking for a place to eat. Marcus: What are you doing to that hafling!? Bandit 1: He owes us money! Bandit 2: You got a problem with it?? Marcus: Yes i do!!

Bandit 2: Well if you have a problem then fight us HAHAHA! *Marcus draws his sword*

*the to bandits have daggers* Marcus: Quit bothering the poor little halfling.. *Bandit 1 and 2 get close to Marcus* *Marcus swing his sword trying to cut the bandits arms* *he misses* *he swing his sword at Bandit 2 then bandit 1 stabs Marcuses arm* Marcus: Owwww *Marcus kicks Bandit one away then cuts Bandit 2 arm* Bandit 2: OOOWWWW *Bandit 2 drops his dagger that runs away* *Bandit 1 runs away*

*Marcus gives the halfling some gold* Marcus: I have something for you. Halfling: What is it???

*Marcus hands over a knife* *Marcus runs away* Halfling: THANKK YOUUUU

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?: Marcus: Hi there what do you have on the shopping menu?? Merchant: 9 gold for 4 iron,2 diamonds for 17 gold,and 15 iron for 3 gold.

Marcus: I will get the 15 iron. *Marcus hands over 3 gold* *a thief comes running then steals the backpack* Marcus: HEY!! *Marcus then runs after the bandit then tackles him* Thief: MY BAG!!! Marcus: you Thief *2 Gaurds walk over to Marcus and the Thief* Gaurd 1: WHAT IS GOING ON HERE??!! Marcus: This man stole the merchants backpack! *Gaurd 2 then picks up the Thief and then sends him to jail.

Gaurd 1: You can go now uhhh whats your name? Marcus: Its Marcus. Gaurd 1: Ok you can go now Marcus.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:: I would make sure there isnt a owner. *Marcus look around then finds a sign saying a mans name* Marcus: Hmmm I wonder if hes still alive.. *a man walks in* Guy: WHAT ARE YOU DONG IN MY HOME??!!

Marcus: I would like to trade!! Guy: ok what do you want to trade.. Marcus: I would like to trade 5 gold for 9 iron bars. *the man then reaches into the chest grabbing 9 iron bars* *Marcus hands over his gold then the man hands him the iron* Marcus: Thank you *Marcus then walks away*

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?: I would ask nicely for some food Marcus:I need food.. Man 1: Weve got food give me 15 gold and ill give you some 2 steak. Marcus ill give you all my money. *Marcus hands over all his money* Man 2: just give him 2 steak! *Man 1 gives him 2 steak* Marcus: Thanks Man 1: eat that all!!! *Marcus eats 2 steak then runs away* Man1: OK I HOPE IT WAS GOOD!!

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:: I would join the call and fight the bandits. Marcus: I would like to help fight the bandits *The man points to the armory* *Marcus walks to the armory* Gaurd: are you a volunteer?? Marcus: Yes I am.. Gaurd: Ok the weopons and armor are inside. *Marcus gets chain armor with a iron sword* Marcus: Where is the fight??

Gaurd:Down the road. *Marcus get into the fight holding off the bandits for awhile* Marcus: 7 left!!!

*Marcus killed 3 the rest killed the others* Gaurd: We want you to join the gaurd. Marcus: ok

That is all hope its good and get accepted

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Give examples of Meta-Gaming and Power-Emoting.

Some questions are missing. Review the application format to find them and be sure to include them next time.

If your character is 29 he cannot have gone to Asulon and must have come from there, since it is the only world currently used on the server.

Bio is disorganized and hard to make sense of. Please add some server lore, which can be found on the forums and wiki.

Broken formatting. Be sure to copy and paste the format exactly as it is without changing anything.

There are numerous capitalization and punctuation errors throughout the application that need to be fixed.

As you now have four denied applications be aware that if your next application is also denied you will be banned from applying for three months. Take time to make your last attempt the best it can be and ask any questions you may have.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[everblue2er101 906]

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