[Accepted]Neemiescott's 4Th

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Out-Of-CharacterNeemie

Minecraft Account Name:neemiescott

How old are you?:16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:10 Hours+, Brisbane, Australia

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes, I have a firm grasp on the English language and it's grammar.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am a high school student who lives in Brisbane and loves gaming, especially RPG's. I have a gaming PC that I spend my time on when not doing assignments or playing hockey. I try to spend atleast an hour a day on my computer so that i do not miss anything. I have good grades at school especially in English and Maths and always hand in assignments on time so that i can get on my PC. I am a generally modest, compassionate person who does not boast much.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:6-10 Hours weekly, depending on assignments, homework and chores.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:Role Playing to me is to leave this world (metaphorically speaking) and step into a fictional characters shoes. It is a way to have fun by leaving your OOC behind and adopting your IC as your personality. "Role-playing refers to the changing of one's behaviour to assume a role, either unconsciously to fill a social role, or consciously" (Google Dictionary I agree with google dictionary's definition.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:I have been playing RPG's for as long as I can remember, I have played a variety of MMORPG's and other minecraft RPG servers that have not given me the feel for a good RPG that i want. I have also played the latest 3 elderscrolls games, and a variety of other RPG's including Lord of the Rings online, World of Warcraft, Star Wars the Old Republic and Runescape.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:Meta-Gaming, is when someone uses OOC knowledge to give them an unfair advantage to a game. In other words, using an type of information that was not received from the game to allow you to complete a certain quest. e.g. Receiving co-ordinates from an OOC Friend, watching a youtube video or reading a walkthrough.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:Power emoting is giving an unfair advantage towards others in typed actions. Such as "Bentarob stole Neemiescott's wallet" a more fair way is to say, "Bentarob attempted to thieve Neemiescott's wallet" give just as equal terms to both people involved.

In your own Words, define what Out of Character (OOC) is:Out of is when you are acting as a real person, not your in game character e.g. Dwarf/Elf/Orc.

In your own Words, define what In Character (IC) is:In Character is when you are acting as your online person, not your real person. e.g. Dwarf/Elf/Orc.

What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect the server to a fun server for me and my friends (some of whom are already accepted) that we can level up and play together on, with quests and allowing us to pretend to be other people, not ourselves.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I played on the Yogscast RPG Server, which got closed down. Many of my own personally hosted servers, Imdeity (left because of reset and did not want to start again), EnderBros, (left because my friend who owns it removed world guard permanently), UberMinecraft (Did not like the community) and several others.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes I have read, I understand, and agree to follow the rules of this server.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:Yes.

How did you hear about us?:Several friends of mine, who have been accepted, were having an online party, which I attended, and watching them, liked what I saw.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

Previous Submission

There is another but that is linked in that submission

In-Character:

Character Name:Neemie

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):Wood-Elf

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Early in the morning, before the sun had risen into the sky, there were screams coming from a small villiage called Aerul in the forests of Malinor. Orcs were attacking the villiage. Neemie's Parents, Eshae and Aelita, put him in a basket and hid him under the boards of their house before they ran from the Orcs. Leader of the Orc army that was attacking, Oc'Nor, entered the house looking for gold and possessions to loot. He heard crying coming from under the floor boards. Underneath he found a small born new born baby. He wore a wooden leaf with Neemie carved into it around his neck. Oc'Nor took the basket back to their camp somewhere in the wilderness. Their Oc’Nor raised him until he was of a suitable age to begin combat training. When Neemie was only 5 years old, Oc’Nor and the other orcs taught him how to use a bow, how to hunt and track, the importance of stealth, and trained him to run fast so that he could get away from enemies. Neemie loved Oc’Nor like a father, and followed all of his requests. Neemie was hunting by himself at the age of 13 and was reguarded highly among all the orcs. At the age of 14 he was turned into the orcs main source of food, he hunted whichever animals and scavenged any berries and fruits that the Orc leaders and chefs wanted him to.

Neemie grew into a fine young Elf, He rather tall for a wood Elf, extremely fast, and was a rather big build from all of the working out, and hunting he had done. Although he was a ruthless hunter, he was still a humble Elf, not taking too much credit for anything he did, and blessed the body of everything he killed before he left them. Neemie grew stronger everday and hunted for the food that he returned to the Orc cook, Nes’Rul. One day, when Neemie was 20, he was returning the deer and rabbits that he had hunted to Nes’Rul, he overheard her and Oc’Nor talking. “So are the rumours true? Was he really found when you raided Aerul. If he found out you destroyed his villiage he would be devastated” said Nes’Rul. “Yes the rumours are true, but I don’t want a word of this told to him” replied Oc’Nor. Neemie dropped the deer, and ran away from the camp. Leaving behind everything he ever knew. When the sun was just about to go down, he found a nearby waterhole to get a drink from and wash himself in. He had never taken pride in his appearance before now. He looked at his reflection. He had long blonde hair which he put into a braid down the left side of his face. He has eyes as black as night and has a fairly narrow face, with pointed ears.

Neemie sold the rabbits he was carrying for a decent cloak and a dagger that he carried on his belt. He kept the bow that he was given from the Orcs and made arrows out of bones, sticks and feathers. Then made his way to the Sanctuary of Cloud Temple to begin his journey to find his parents and become a better person.

What are your Character's ambitions? His ambitions are to be reunited with his parents and get vengeance on the Orcs. He also dreams to become the best archer in all of Asulon.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

Bow and Arrow, but after leaving the orcs, he has taken an interest in Sword's as well.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

Archery and Stealth Predominantly but is also a skilled parkour runner (free runner)

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

I am still adjusting this skin a bit, not quite happy with the cloak. But here is what it looks life at the moment.

Other Information about your Character:Not much more that needs to be covered.

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?"HEY!!! Cut that out, what did this halfling ever do to you?" asked Neemie. "Nothing, but we are guards appointed directly from his majesty, the King" replied the guards. The guards continue robbing the halfling until Neemie runs over and pulls the smaller guard away from the hobbit. The guard stabbed Neemie through the thigh, but his determination pulled him through. Neemie violently swings the back of his sword at the guards. He bopped the guard an the helmet, but it appeared to do nothing. The other guard ran in terror as the two had a sword fight. Neemie took a hit to the shoulder, but kept fighting. Neemie nearly tired said "The king will punish you for killing me, an innocent person who is trying to uphold the law when the guards are breaking it", The guards looked at eachother, and decided to run away as not to get in trouble. The halfling took Neemie to his hobbit hole, dressed his wound and thanked him for his services.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?"Just passing through thanks", Neemie says cheerfully. "Please I insist you have a look in my shop, and since you are my first customer today, I will give you a half price discount". Neemie, fell into his trap and followed him into the shop. Immediately after entering the door locked behind him. A knife is put to Neemie's throat, Neemie grabs the merchant's hand, struggling violently, they wrestled over the knife. After a while Neemie manages to pry the knife out of his fingers. There was a long hand to hand fist-fight. Both are heavily wounded and beaten to a pulp. Neemiescott struggles to his feet and demands to be let go. The merchant agrees as long as the fighting stops. Neemie takes the key from the merchants hand, unlocks the door and runs into the woods.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: Neemie walks into the small hut, calling for residence, he notices a chest round the back of the house. He slowly creeps up to it. Inside is a few iron bars and a golden sword. He gives the sword a swing then sheaths it, leaving behind some gold and an apology note to the owner. He continues on his journey.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?"Greetings Brother” Says Neemie. “You look weary, my friend” Says the Dwarf, “My name is Jobo, I have been delivering gold and jewels to from the Mines to the jewelry stores for years. I am lucky I stumbled onto you, you don’t look so well”. “I have been lost for several days now without food and my compass is broken” replies Neemie. “Well why don’t you come with me and we will take you to an Inn. If you entertain me enough along the way, I might even pay for your stay” the Dwarf says kindly. “Oh thank you so much, I will never forget this Jobo” says Neemie. The began on the path when suddenly a pack of wolves lunge at the Dwarf, Neemie quickly knocked an arrow onto his bow and shot the wolf dead in it’s tracks. Taking out the Wolves one by one Neemie defends Jobo. Neemie helps the Dwarf to his feet. “How can I ever repay you?” Asks Jobo. “By Taking pity on me and helping me along my way you already have”, Neemie says.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:Neemie who had been robbed by these same bandits not long ago wanted vengeance. He agrees to follow them. The fight was long and tiring and many of the guards had been slain by the bandits but Neemie volleys of arrows at the bandits and hoped that he could hit the archers at the back. Many Volleys later, the fight was over and Neemie was tired beyond compare. The guard offered Neemie large amounts of Gold for his help, but refused payment for his help, instead, went up to the Bandit that robbed him’s dead body and took back his money. He asked for a meal and continued on his quest to find his family.

Anything else you would like to say? Only that from past experiences, am big on rule following and keeping in character to make the event more enjoyable for everyone. Oh, and thank you to whoever reads this. And please do not Deny this if you can't see my photo, just PM and I will edit this, for some reason it hasnt been working all the time for me.

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Your application has been...

Accepted!

You've clearly put a lot of time into your application, have asked lots of questions and have accepted what advice was given. This final app is now quite a bit above average and shows great promise.

Welcome to Asulon! Please wait patiently for a GM to whitelist you.

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