[Denied]Jambo submission

[Jambo 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:thechuckman46

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Central, U.S.A

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes but wish I was the best speller in the world

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:I have play RP games in warcraft battle net and when I first played I was a natural

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes I have rechecked the rules before writing this answer and I agree

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:I was looking for a good minecraft rp sever and this came up as being a good one

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:No

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:No

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:It is stepping into a character’s shoes and acting out what it is like in the story and sometimes making it up as you go, it’s fun way to say im a nerd and you can be the person in the game for a while

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:It is when a player makes up powers out of the blue and deigns that the people didn’t know about it

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:It’s not giving people time to act

In-Character Details

Character Name:Jambo

Character Race:Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:As a young lad in a small village his father wanted him to be a soldier like him and his ancestors but at the age of 14 bandits raided the village leaving him alive, alone 1 month later he found himself at a blacksmith working on swords and armors now at age of 21 he’s looking for a place to call home wandering with his blacksmith uniform on his back and a hammer in his hand he is Jambo

What are your characters ambitions?:Looking for adventure and a pace to call home

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: not much really but that he is also adventurist

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

Dwarf: Sir will you please buy a piece of fine jewelry.

Jambo: A very interesting piece did you make it yourself.

Dwarf: Yes sir why do you ask.

Jambo: Because the craftsmanship is well done and the craving of the metal is so delegate, how much is it.

Dwarf: Its 50 misas sir

Jambo: Heres 70 (hands a small pouch of minas ans takes the ring)

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

Jambo: Stop this fighting man and lets all get a drink.

Orc: No he has something I want.

Dwarf: Know I don’t.

Jambo: And what do you want good orc sir.

Orc: His money

Jambo: And why is that

Orc: I killed the bounty and I want my reward.

Jambo: Dwarf you need to give this man his money.

Dwarf: Ok ok here take it.

Ore thows him to the ground and leaves.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

Jambo: Are you all right sir.(picks up the money and hands it to him)

Old man: Thank you son thank you.

Jambo: Do you need help going somewhere

Oldman: I’m fine but thank you for the offer

They both go in diffent directions.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

You have been denied for the following reasons:

Your Meta-Gaming definition is incorrect and your Power-Emoting definition could use some work. Your biography is too short and much too cliched. Please try to avoid the atypical, "My village was raided by bandits". Improve upon your Open Response Questions by adding actions and not just dialogue. A suggestion would be to expand everywhere in your application to add more content. Good luck on your next application!

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

PM me if you would like further explanation/help.

While you wait…Go and vote for the server to support it!

We all would really appreciate it.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

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