[Denied]My Second LotC App Pls Let me in!

[DarkTreeant 7]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Ubersupernova2

How old are you?: 12

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: UTC-7

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes i do

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes i have

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes I understand

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I was looking for good rpg servers and found this

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/69660-my-lotc-application/

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Role-playing is when you act in character and be them. You would talk like them and never give away who you really are.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta gaming is when you give ooc info in game and give away stuff about you.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power-emoting is when you get overactive for doing one little thing.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Finrod Noltari

Character Race: Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Finrod was born in a town that was constantly being terrorized by the slayers, who took money or killed. At a young age, he said plenty of stuff that could have killed him, but his mother taught him to be quiet. From then he put on a mask of emotionless feeling. Then,one day, his mother was attacked and killed. By then, at age 13, he had been working with his father at the blacksmith and was as strong and healthy as an ox. When he heard the news, he quickly came to his mother. But, it was too late. He vowed that he would kill whoever did this.

The next day, a stranger came by looking for an apprentice in the art of the bow. Finrod immediately wante to come, but feared his elf ears would scare him off. He then covered himself in a cowl and strode up to the man "I wish to be your apprentice," he said. "Well, take of your cowl and lets see what you look like." "You take of your cowl first," Finrod said. He did and was surprised to see that the stranger was an elf as well. He took of his cowl and the stranger knew him immediately. "Why, your my brother son! I'm your uncle, Faeranduil. I haven't seen you since you was a baby. How do you do?" "My mother is dead," said Finrod. With pity and admiration, he took Finrod under his wing. Four years later, he has no memory except that he was destined to save the world from an unspeakable evil.

The beginning of his true life... Has begun.

What are your characters ambitions?: He wishes to rid the world of evil and bring peace to the land.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: Please look at the attachments to find it.

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Nothing much except that he is ready for anything. He expects the unexpected.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

"of course I will buy something dwarf," He would probably be surprised that I know he is a dwarf. "I will not tell anyone," he would be relieved and would tell me the best stuff in the shop. I wouldn't take his best, but take something around average, like an apple that isn't to sweet or sour.

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

I would step in and say, "Whoa, take it easy! We can resolve this in a non violent way. Now, orc, just tell us what happen. The you, dwarf, will tell us what happened." The orc and dwarf will tell their stories and I will see that some parts are different and question those parts. One would be bound to break and spill. Then, the problem would be resolved.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

I would protect him and help him pick up his stuff because as all people know, elves are friendly as long as your nice. He would offer a reward but I would say, "No need. I will make by. I do not need anything. Keep it. You will need it more than I." Then, I would buy him a new walking stick to help him on his merry way back home.

If you don't like the spaces, I needed to spread it out a bit so I could see what I did. Don't count this as a penalty against me.

[Wizard 125]

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[Wizard 125]

Denied.

Please fix your power-emoting definitions.

First open-response, it would be easy to tell he is a dwarf since he is shorter than everyone else.

Second OR, no orc and dwarf would just tell you their story, they would just hash it out, their hate is that strong.

Bio needs accepted lore, slayers are not a group ingame. It does not follow a clear path either, why did he not remember anything?

[Wizard 125]

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