[Denied]AndrewTech's app

[AndrewTech 3332]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: AndrewTech

How old are you?: 17

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: United States

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes, I have a very good grip with grammar and language.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes, I have read and agree to the rules.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Truthfully, I can't quite remember. However, I think I looked up "Minecraft roleplaying servers" on google.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: I have made no previous application.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!: Not yet, but if you want me to, I will!

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: I believe that roleplaying is the act of pretending to be someone that you aren't. Like pretending to be a priest in roleplay, but really being a clerk in real life. Failure to roleplay on a roleplay server should result in an immediate ban.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta gaming is going up and beyond what a game's limits allow, basically meaning that you make things up as you go.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power emoting is what a person could say to simulate an action that would not be possible with the conventional controls of a game. For example, "You raise your gilded sword to slice open the chest". Not something like, "You steal the dwarf's mead and drink it all". That would change the power emote into a god emote.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Rathian Scott

Character Race: Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Rathian Scott used to be the chief knight of the old King Kaecillius. That is, until that very kingdom fell to a horde of evil demons, such as skeletons, zombies, and a strange type of living gunpowder beast known as a "creeper". His king was killed in the final battle, the city ransacked and burned, leaving only Rathian and one other survivor the only people alive who can tell The Tale of the Fallen Kingdom. Rathian and his friend only survived by either sheer luck, or... possibly... from the protection of God himself. He now wonders the land in search of a new kingdom to live in.

Rathian has lightish-brown hair, and a light beard. His title would technically be Sir Rathian Scott, but he prefers to just be called Rathian, or possibly "Scotty" to his closest of friends. He is about 28 years old. As a (former?) knight, he tries to help people who are in need, doing what is right, but does NOT like orcs, since they are suspected of aiding the evil hordes.

What are your characters ambitions?: My character wishes to take his revenge on the evil hoard that killed everyone in his home kingdom. He also wishes to reestablish a town of his own, and possibly become leader of a new group of knights.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: Here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: No, not really...

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I ask him what his wares are. I see nothing but some old rusty helms and an old sword. I ask him about the old sword; he says that it was found outside the rubble of a ruined city. I generously pay him with gold for the sword and continue on my way.

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I confront the with a frown on my face to see what the argument is about. He says it's over a debt that the dwarf owed him, and that he demanded the debt repaid, or his life. The dwarf pleads with be to stop him, and that he'll give you several gold (not enough to cover his debt) in exchange for me to protect him. I tell the orc to "leave the dwarf alone", and the orc grunts and heads away from the sanctuary. The dwarf gives be a few gold bars and runs away to the nearest mine.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I help the old man up. In my bag is a spare stick, which i give to him. I pick up his money bag and hand it to him. He thanks me, gives me an ale, and heads on his way.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Explain specifically what roleplaying experience you have.

Incorrect Meta-Gaming definition. Add an example as well. You can find more info on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

There is no 'King Kaecillius' in the server lore. There are no creepers in Asulon. You cannot apply as a knight or former knight. Please expand on the bio and add some server lore, which can be found on the forums and wiki.

Broken skin link. See THIS GUIDE for info on getting a skin screenshot.

Expand on ORQs #1 and 3.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[everblue2er101 906]

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