[Denied][Orc App] Zuko414's Character Application

[zuko414 5]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: zuko414

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:US Pacific Standard

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes I like to think so.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Yes I played on this server before.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Of course

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: One of my friends about 3 years ago

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Taking on the role of a character, and in this particular server, shaping his/her destiny.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Taking knowledge OC and applying it to your character as if he knew what it was.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Forcing the act's of one player onto another player.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Ashrik Duri

Character Race: Orc

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

There was a young orc named Ashrik. He joined his local militia when he was 13, yet very tall and muscular. The very next day there was a attack on his town and he was called to duty. He ran out to face the marauders with the other militiamen after quickly grabbing a sword and spear. Six marauders stood in front of about twenty militiamen, mostly consisting of Uruks including Ashrik. The marauders looked tough and were very heavily armored. One man stood behind them, then approached after the Marauders drew there weapons. Ashrik was placed on the front line holding his spear outward.

The Militia Captain ordered a charge, but no one moved. The Man kept walking and his band followed. Ashrik thought to himself,"If I am going to die anyway might as well be dying brave," and he charged forward at the man spear first. The man did not react quick enough and since he was so tall Ashrik stabbed him in the gut. He kept driving it in further and further until it pierced him. His fellow militiamen saw him and charged as well. The Man lay dead with Ashrik's spear in him and the militiamen chasing down the Marauders, who ran as soon as they saw that there leader was killed by a child. He was then promoted to Captain of the militia and under his command there village was prosperous enough to be called a Town.

What are your characters ambitions?:

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Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? Hello sir! "I do not have much money but I would like you to take this sack of twenty minas." The old dwarf looks at Ashrik and says, Why, thank you sir, I don't see much kindness like that around here."

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? Walking up to them both Ashrik says, "Hello Sir's what seems to be the problem?" The Large Orc answers first, "This 'ere dwarfie tinks it's very funny to borrer money and not pay it back." "What's his debt Mr. Orc?" "Fifty Minas" Ashrik tosses him a bag of money and he walks away." After he helps up the dwarf he to see if he's ok the dwarf starts to walk away and Ashrik pickpockets One hundred Minas from him, and walks away.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: He runs over to where the old man is and helps him up hoping he won't notice his bag of minas. The old man looks over at Ashrik and says, "Please don't hurt me!" Ashrik quickly responds, "Don't worry sir I won't hurt you I was just going to help you up." The old man peers at Ashrik before holding out his hand and Ashrik pulls him up and quickly before he notices the money on the floor says, " Let me go cut you a new walking stick over here." The old man replies, "Well thank you very much." After Ashrik sends the old man on his way with his new walking stick he goes back to get the minas. He walks away with a good forty minas.

[Skippy 2466]

Under review.

[Aryon 679]

Denied.

You will need to expand upon your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions, as they are correct, but need to be longer. You will also need to implement lore into your biography, and change your language to the Orcish one. I wish for you to change your Open Response Questions, as they are power-gamey, and you cannot use villainous activities in them. (Pickpocketing)

Please re-apply in 24 hours.

[Aryon 679]

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