[Denied]IverCraft's application.

[IverCraft 13]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:

IverCraft

How old are you?:

13 (in game 18)

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

European time zone.

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:

Yes I do.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:

Not in minecraft.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:

Yes I have read and I understand the rules

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:

My brother SuperNintendo1

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Yes But I could not find one.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:

To act as another person/character, usually in a fantastical sense

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:

Using information that was obtained out of character (OOC) in your roleplay

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:

(not gonna lie, I had to look this up) Saying something happened, such as Jack stabs Jill, beetween two players when actually your just forcing the event to happen (that ones really hard to describe, other than through examples)

In-Character Details

Character Name:

Rose Illin

Character Race:

Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

"When I was 8 years old my parents were killed by an group of bandits and I had to survive on my own. I am a blonde girl at 18 years old and a happy but at the same time a little sad to. I have no friends so I desided to move away and now I am looking for a home.

What are your characters ambitions?:

Do find a new home and live happy.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

(I'll attach a screen shot.

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:

No not really.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

I look down at him with sad eyes and kindly helps him by buying some of the things hes selling and if I am out of money I help him sell what he have.

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

Try to stop the two men from starting a fight but not picking any sides.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

She helps up the old man and help him pick up the minas. She then continues to help by making him a new stick.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

You were denied for the following reasons:

Your biography is too short and too cliched. Please add some more originality to your biography and stay away from the atypical "my parents were killed by bandits", trust me, it has been done a thousand times before. Add some lore to your biography and improve heavily on the length. For your Open Response Questions, add actions and dialogue, try to show us how your character would react to these situations in role-play. Expand heavily on the length of your Open Response Questions as well. To reiterate my important points: expand on your biography, stay away from cliches (nice little rhyme), expand on your Open Response Questions and your application in general to stand a better chance of acceptance. Good luck on your next application!

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

PM me if you would like further explanation/help.

While you wait…Go and vote for the server to support it!

We all would really appreciate it.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

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