[Denied]AlexFabrizio Server App

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Minecraft Account Name: AlexFabrizio

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Eastern Time

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes and English is my primary language

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes I have been on many roleplay games and have been in school show.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes I have.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: My friend told me about it and on a youtube video trailer of LOTC

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: None yet i believe.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is a fun way to take on a whole different person/character and be both creative and imaginative wit your friends or other people.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: A reference that you can use to improve your gaming experience. An example is Gaining knowledge from Out-Of Character.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: In roleplay, it means trying to take control over the plot and other characters to try and win. Example would be pulling out a knife if you are tied up.

Character Name: Blade The Sword Expert

Character Race: Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

As a little boy, Blade, had an unusual name. When he was about 10 he learned how to wield a sword and learn combat and many other useful skills. One day he went out to explore the realm of Asulon and got lost. Then he saw a giant city and decided to live there. Blade had no money so at the age of 12 he got a job as a blacksmith. After working for 2 years he bought a proper sized home. So after a couple of months Blade grew tired of the same old house so he decided to explore the rest of Asulon.

Ceru Guard (Present day) and went to try get into he guild. If he made it in he would be so happy. (We shall know in-game)

My character's ambition is to get into the Ceru Guards and maybe become a king's knight.

Screenshot- Currently Steve will have skin in short time. (And no im not using a cracked version if you are wondering)

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: He is very curious and is willing to help anyone out. Enemy or friend.

Open-Response-Questions

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?:

I would go up to him and buy some of his items to help the poor guy out.

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?-

Blade would jump into the fight and try break it up. If it does not work, either defend himself or walk away with the dwarf.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

Blade would help the old man up and give him his minas. If he offers minas Blade would refuse and tell him he needs it more.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

You were denied for the following reasons:

Your biography doesn't make much sense, how do you learn to wield a blade at 10? More importantly, who taught you? You make it seem like you're almost self taught. Another instance of unreal-ism is your profession as a blacksmith at 12. I'm sorry, but that's not really likely, you can apprentice as a blacksmith but you wouldn't likely be one at that point. For your Open Response Questions please add more depth and detail, be sure to make each one include actions and dialogue. For your next application, fix the formatting as I found this extremely difficult to read. Good luck on your next application!

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

PM me if you would like further explanation/help.

While you wait…Go and vote for the server to support it!

We all would really appreciate it.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

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