[Denied]Hyren LightBlade.

[shadowwy 0]

Minecraft account name: shadowwy

How old are you: 16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Finland

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes, I do.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes, I have been playing in many RolePlay servers.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: I do.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I found in Minecraft forums and

I were looking the perfect RP server.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!: I think I need to do this.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: You create a whole new story what you will will be whole new character what you need to be.

example this, Hyren LightBlade is an full RP character and in-game I will play as Paladin who helps the innocent.

Normally player plats RP and follows the game/server Lore.

the defination "RolePlay" binds in few things,

~Story and Lore

~the Quests and side lores/stories

~Races, classes etc, the characters literally.

~the creation of character and it's story(s)

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: It means that you can't use OOC information while IC, example:

Someone tells in OOC that his walking a road soon. Then you go and make a trap there, It's un-acceptable.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power-emoting, or God-emoting is act of forcing the result of Rp.

simple huh? example,

player-X kills player Z.

or Player-X just stabs Player-Z

Simply you do RP, but you do it that you know the result of it already.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Hyren LightBlade

Character Race: Human

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Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Ran from home and became Paladin.

He have light skin and his quite long.

Age: 25

Appearance: Iron armor whole time on and helmet with golden trims, his quite long and he likes to wear Leather boots. He have white tabard red cross on it.

He uses iron or Diamond armor, and his ceremonial armor is from Diamond leggings and rest of gear is gold.

Personality: He have lived by the rules of Paladins so he doesn't know better than be honest and loyal.

Usually his cold but polite as his own ways.

His warm hearted and very friendly to people who he feels as good friends, and His very VERY loyal to friends, espesially for his mentor.

History: He were born In Arethor, in rich merchant family, his parents wanted Hyren to be an scribe of an old wicked man, so Hyren ran away from home to Arethor.

As his travels he met an old paladin, who became his "mentor", and they moved to Alras

When he was around 16, he killed his first enemy in combat, and cause of that, It was an orc in Cloud Sanctuary, when orc were disturbing monks and dwarf, he got many wounds and it toally weren't easy to kill that orc, and Hyren didn't never forget it, and he still have the weapon what falled from that orc.

Then after many years when he filled 20, His training was done and he was free to leave, he traveled to Kal'Alras and tried to make impression on Kal'Alras King. he didn't get accepted to army cause of his past, so now he just travels and tries to find people who needs help, and goes from city to city trying to make impression on commanders and captains in the army.

of course his looking new friends and places to live when he next time visits.

What are your characters ambitions?: He wants to be a Commander in the army and meet the king of Kal'Alras

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: He sometimes drinks with Dwarves while visiting there, and he likes to be with the druids and just relax.

Hyren were born in South, but his parents and family are from North.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

"You're new here?"

"I'll buy that thing over there, oh and you need a drink?"

"cause I need someone who I can spend money with."

"here's you 100 Minas!"

"I'll recommend you to everyone, and hopefully you'll be rich someday!"

:You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

"Could you please leave without any of us needs to hurt?"

*orc refuses*

"Then I see I have no choice than make you to leave, dead or alive, so please choose."

*orc refuses again*

*Orc starts to get ready for a fight*

Orc bursts and tries to get Hyren inside his deadly arms, but Hyren jumps side right in time that Orc smashes an pillar to small pieces.

Hyren run back of orc and jumps, but too late cause orc have turned right way and hits with bones crushing power to Hyren's helm.

*Helm falls down to water*

Now Hyren takes new startegy, cause seems like orc is too powerfull and fast for him, so he asks if they could continue outside, and orc accepts it.

*cold win blows outside Santuary*

"Now, let's see whos better," Hyren shouts.

Hyren runs to hide on forest, and orc runs aswell to woods, Hyren tries to lure him on a cliff and push him there while orc is furiously attacking on Hyren.

Long they fight, but Hyren's strategy finally works, and orc falls down to cold waters.

Hyren walks slow back to Sanctuary wounded, and monks heal him and feed him for reward.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: "Old man!, are you okay, do you need help?", Hyren screams almost in panic.

"Yeah, I quess I'm still in pieces.." old man says, trying to catch his breath.

"where are you going for, my friend?" Hyren asks

"To capital, Isn't it just behind that big tree?"

"Yes, I quess, well I can take you there where you can rest, and I'll try to find those good and popular Elven Walking sticks!" Hyren almost shouts.

"Well thats why I have traveled so long as here, heh heh..." Old man laughs.

"and of course cause of the Elven cider, I heard it's best in the world!"

"Thats what I have heard aswell", Hyren agrees.

*Hyren finds an place for old man and goes to find LumberJack*

"Do you know anyone who could make very strong Walking sticks near here?", Hyren asks.

"Yes, I know one! just down corner there!" Elf adiveses,"he makes the best Sticks in whole Malinor!"

*Hyren bought an very expensive Stick and leaves it next to old man while his sleeps, night comes and Hyren Dis-appears strangely.*

It was pleasure to make apllication! (again)

[mmat 7460]

- Your grammar and general use of good English could use some work in some parts of your application.

- Your biography is a bit stale and boring, use events from the server and other detailed events which have happened in your character's life to make it more detailed.

- Your second open response question contains powergaming.

- Your first open response question could be greatly expanded upon.

Correct these errors and try again in 24 hours.

[mmat 7460]

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