[Denied]Hyren LightBlade.

[shadowwy 0]

Minecraft account name: shadowwy

How old are you: 16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Finland

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes, I do.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes, I have been playing in many RolePlay servers.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: I do.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I found in Minecraft forums and

I were looking the perfect RP server.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!: I think I need to do this.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: You create a whole new story what you will will be whole new character what you need to be.

example this, Hyren LightBlade is an full RP character and in-game I will play as Paladin who helps the innocent.

Normally player plats RP and follows the game/server Lore.

the defination "RolePlay" binds in few things,

~Story and Lore

~the Quests and side lores/stories

~Races, classes etc, the characters literally.

~the creation of character and it's story(s)

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: It means that you can't use OOC information while IC, example:

Someone tells in OOC that his walking a road soon. Then you go and make a trap there, It's un-acceptable.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power-emoting, or God-emoting is act of forcing the result of Rp.

simple huh? example,

player-X kills player Z.

or Player-X just stabs Player-Z

Simply you do RP, but you do it that you know the result of it already.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Hyren LightBlade

Character Race: Human

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Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary.

Age: 25

Appearance: Iron armor whole time on and helmet with golden trims, his quite long and he likes to wear Leather boots. He have white tabard red cross on it.

He uses iron or Diamond armor, and his ceremonial armor is from Diamond leggings and rest of gear is gold.

Personality: He have lived by the rules of Paladins so he doesn't know better than be honest and loyal.

Usually his cold but polite as his own ways.

His warm hearted and very friendly to people who he feels as good friends, and His very VERY loyal to friends. His interested in Ancient magic and likes to read books from it.

History:

Hyren 13th Birthday, Arethor.

Hyren just filled 13, so now he could go to real work, his parents wanted him to Scribe for an old wicked man, but Hyren wanted to join army and become Paladin.

Hyren, and his parents argued about this many days, and then Hyren got enough of it and decided to run away from Arethor, and start new life as traveling warrior.

Hyren now 14, Traveling.

Hyren had been traveling warrior for an year now, and it wasn't a bad life,

he just escorted an old man to city, and he got food and paid some Minas.

Then when he was in Cloud Sanctuary, everything changed...

an Orc was disturbing the local monks, and Hyren as might be known, defended them.

The orc and Hyren fighted long, but finally Hyren won the orc and everything was okay,

except one thing, and it was that Hyren became more carefull and he didn't cause the fights on purpose, he only defended the ones who needed help.

Hyren now 20, Arethor.

Hyren was now 20, and it was Festival of Ale, and he was visiting his old friends in Arethor,

and of course his parents...

and how might be known, his parents raged alot when heard that Hyren is traveling warrior,

and more when they heard that he killed the old wicked man whos scribe Hyren were going to be.

He walked one morning in the streets of Arethor when he noticed an old poor Dwarf merchant,

he saw an shiny sword in his stall, and decided to buy it.

Hyren gave much more money than needed, and they became friends.

later the day when Hyren and old dwarf had gathered some money with selling the dwarf's stall empty,

they went to celebrate the Festival of Ale, many of other dwarves joined them and they drank all night.

Hyren woke up little dizzy in streets and of course, the dwarves stealed everything they found from him, all Minas and gear.

after that he decided to not trust people that much.

Hyren now 25, Malinor.

An old man walks towards him.

His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, Hyren sees the Minas splitting to ground.

"Old man!, are you okay, do you need help?", Hyren screams almost in panic.

"Yeah, I quess I'm still in pieces.." old man says, trying to catch his breath.

"where are you going for, my friend?" Hyren asks

"To capital, Isn't it just behind that big tree?"

"Yes, I quess, well I can take you there where you can rest, and I'll try to find those good and popular Elven Walking sticks!" Hyren almost shouts.

"Well thats why I have traveled so long as here, heh heh..." Old man laughs.

"and of course cause of the Elven cider, I heard it's best in the world!"

"Thats what I have heard aswell", Hyren agrees.

*Hyren finds an place for old man and goes to find LumberJack*

"Do you know anyone who could make very strong Walking sticks near here?", Hyren asks.

"Yes, I know one! just down corner there!" Elf adiveses,"he makes the best Sticks in whole Malinor!"

*Hyren bought an very expensive Stick and leaves it next to old man while his sleeps, night comes and Hyren Dis-appears strangely.*

What are your characters ambitions?: To become stronger defender of the weak ones, and make even town and organisation for it.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: He sometimes drinks with Dwarves while visiting there, and he likes to be with the druids and just relax.

Hyren were born in South, but his parents and family are from North.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

He walked one morning in the streets of Arethor when he noticed an old poor Dwarf merchant,

he saw an shiny sword in his stall, and decided to buy it.

Hyren gave much more money than needed, and they became friends.

later the day when Hyren and old dwarf had gathered some money with selling the dwarf's stall empty,

they went to celebrate the Festival of Ale, many of other dwarves joined them and they drank all night.

Hyren woke up little dizzy in streets and of course, the dwarves stealed everything they found from him, all Minas and gear.

:You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

"Could you please leave without any of us needs to hurt?"

*orc refuses*

"Then I see I have no choice than make you to leave, dead or alive, so please choose."

*orc refuses again*

*Orc starts to get ready for a fight*

Orc bursts and tries to get Hyren inside his deadly arms, but Hyren jumps side right in time that Orc smashes an pillar to small pieces.

Hyren run back of orc and jumps, but too late cause orc have turned right way and hits with bones crushing power to Hyren's helm.

*Helm falls down to water*

Now Hyren takes new startegy, cause seems like orc is too powerfull and fast for him, so he asks if they could continue outside, and orc accepts it.

*cold win blows outside Sactuary*

"Now, let's see who's better," Hyren shouts.

Hyren runs to hide in forest, and orc runs aswell into woods, Hyren tries to lure him on a cliff and push him there while orc is furiously attacking on Hyren.

Long they fight, but Hyren's strategy finally works, and orc falls down to cold waters.

Hyren walks slow back to Sanctuary wounded, but victorious.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: "Old man!, are you okay, do you need help?", Hyren screams almost in panic.

"Yeah, I quess I'm still in pieces.." old man says, trying to catch his breath.

"where are you going for, my friend?" Hyren asks

"To capital, Isn't it just behind that big tree?"

"Yes, I quess, well I can take you there where you can rest, and I'll try to find those good and popular Elven Walking sticks!" Hyren almost shouts.

"Well thats why I have traveled so long as here, heh heh..." Old man laughs.

"and of course cause of the Elven cider, I heard it's best in the world!"

"Thats what I have heard aswell", Hyren agrees.

*Hyren finds an place for old man and goes to find LumberJack*

"Do you know anyone who could make very strong Walking sticks near here?", Hyren asks.

"Yes, I know one! just down corner there!" Elf adiveses,"he makes the best Sticks in whole Malinor!"

*Hyren bought an very expensive Stick and leaves it next to old man while his sleeps, night comes and Hyren Dis-appears strangely.*

[LeRenardNoir 413]

You were denied for the following reasons:

I feel you are close, but not quite there. You haven't really improved upon what iMattyz asked you to in your last application, your second open response question still contains power emoting. Improve slightly on your biography as it seems kind of random, not really explaining your character.

Since I feel you are close, you will get one more chance at applying.

I suggest you check this guide to server applicants out.

While you wait…Go and vote for the server to support it!

We all would really appreciate it.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

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