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**NOTE: As is said in description, this is my second application. I failed to notice the rule of not using magic until at least 1 week of being a member of the LoTC server. I must say i am disappointed of myself, since i am keen to always read the rules thoroughly. I am sorry.**

Minecraft Account Name: Gabb_von_scab

How old are you?: 14.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Sweden.

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: I am very good at english, even though it is not my first language. Just don't expect me to be flawless at it.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Aye, and i have been a member of three other Minecraft roleplay servers.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I searched for a good roleplay server, and i found this one in a server list. I thought it was worth checking out!

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: I have made none.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!: I have.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: It is having a good source of imagination, and use that source to be another type of person, be it another race, sex, or personality.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta gaming is when you know something OOC that you in-character would not know. For example: a friend tells you on skype the location of an awesome treasure stack! But your character does not know were it is, does she/he not? He/she have to discover it first, by someone telling them or the location being written in a book.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: It is when someone does a RP move that is highly overpowered and "kills" people just like that, for example "Casts a fireball on you, and you die".

In-Character Details

Character Name: Dylan Geirsson.

Character Race: Human.

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Dylan is a odd fellow, always keen to hide his face underneath masks or long hoods.

No-one is quite sure where he came from, only that a group of farmers one day found him near the fields, a tall, brown-haired man, wearing a white, strange mask. When they had woken him up, it was certain that he was not "normal": Once asked about where he came from, he would be deathly quiet. When questioned about his name, but he only muttered one thing, repeatedly: "Dylan, Dylan, Dylan" so that was what they called him. Even if he could be quiet as the grave, when people were not looking, he could suddenly giggle, draw figures in the ground, or being what looked like bored to death. Dylan acted just like a child. Also, when looking into what little he had on him, the farmers discovered alot of cloaks and hooded robes in different colors, though primary red, black and blue. When the blacksmith, a big, muscular man in his mid 50's, became tired of Dylan and decided to throw him out of the village, Dylan did something no-one ever suspected. He rose and stared at the brute for a moment, took a rake lying nearby, and hit it on the blacksmith over the head.

He falled to the ground and hit his head on a rock, made some pained noises, and then finally died.

The farmers, shocked and disgusted, went to attack Dylan immediately, only to discover that he was gone. When they started to search, they discovered that the blacksmith's house was burning. The outcome was inevitable: only ash remained when the fire was put down. The family, however, miraculously, was spared. But the youngest child, a seven-year old girl named Juliet, told her mother of a hooded stranger who had warned her of the fire while she was sleeping, and how he handed her a purse of gold, enough for them to make a new home.

Strangely enough, the town guard had sworn that he saw the same figure around the house mere minutes before the fire.

What are your characters ambitions?: Dylan's ambition may seem to vary on the situation: One minute he may be saving your life, the other he have sold you to the enemy for a toy train. His "neutrality" may be a fraud, though: He seems to have an obsession for arcane artifacts and, even if he does not use it, has a high interest of magic.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Here are the three guises Dylan usually takes:

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file://localhost/Users/gabrielrivanoeckerdal/Desktop/Dropbox/2012-09-20_15.49.15.png

file://localhost/Users/gabrielrivanoeckerdal/Desktop/Dropbox/2012-09-20_16.16.26.png

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Dylan may be a good ally to have on the battlefield, but never trust him with anything personal: Dylan tends to keep to himself, and his "true" ambitions seem to be a mystery to most. He is afraid of all higher beings, and seems to wish to gain their power for himself. A death wish, in other words. He have some training in the art of the bow, and it is his most common choice of weapon. Also, few see his whole face: Most of it are covered by either a hood or his weird-looking mask.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I will see if he has anything worth buying, like a good book, or some food. If not, i will buy him something to eat, while i take a sandwich for myself, too. If he has things worth to look at, i do same thing. But afterwards, i buy him something fancy, and while he is looking at it, i take some of the things i like, and then quickly runs away.

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? If bored: I will do nothing, and look at what will happen. If i want to be alone, I try the diplomatic, fool-proof way: buy the Orc a drink or two and convinces both of them to go home. If i want to have some fun: i put myself in the middle of the argument, and watch the Orc's temperament amusingly rise. But if i feel helpful, i pat the Orc on the back, turn around and tells the dwarf to run, while i head for the hills!

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I will help him, but secretly takes a few coins, not too much, but still quite a bit. Then, i help him to the nearest inn, and uses my newly-found money to buy him some healing herbs and food. Hopefully i will win his respect, and then i am sure my trouble will be worth it in the future.

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Things you need to improve on:

- All defenitions could be improved on and expanded on

- You commited villainous acts in your bio and 3rd ORQ, which is not allowed. To steal, kill or burn houses down you need a villain application that you may apply for after you have been accepted on the server for a full week.

- Bio needs to have the appearance desribed in it, just like his age and personality

- I could not see the skins, try uploading them with imgur, imageshack, etc. or try and attach them in the post

- The ORQ's are short and need to be expanded

- The ORQ's need dialog, I assume you talk irl too so it would be normal if your character would too unless hes a mute.

You may reapply in 24 hours from this post

If you have any questions or need help feel free to PM me

~BoomBox~

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