xXMetalPizzaXx's Application

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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: xXMetalPizzaXx

How old are you?: 10

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: No but I think I will be good at it with some practice.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: My brother, Pengepi told me about it.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is living the life of another made up character like they would live it.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta-Gaming is using out of character information in character like if you hear orcs in OOC talking about attacking a village you can't go to the king of whatever village it is and say "Prepare from an attack from the north-east at 3:00pm on the 20th of the first seed."

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power emoting is saying something like "Jimbob Joe stabs Bob Hankerchief 300,000 times instantly killing him." Instead you would say "Jimbob Joe swings his sword." giving the other player a chance to say "Bob Hankerchief blocks his attack."

In-Character Details

Character Name: Ulkmer

Character Race: Dwarf.

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Ulkmer is curious exitable funny and loves beer. When he gets into drunken brawls he always wins. He has ginger hair, a bushy beard andis quite poor.When he was a little boy he was fascinated by clocks, the time and the sun and moon. His father was a clockmaker and was very happy with his job and loving family. Ulkmer used to help out his father and watch him work.

When Ulkmer was 23 years old his mother grew sick and passed away. His father was having a rough time and eventually went missing. The local people eventually stopped searching and said he was dead, but Ulkmer thought he was still alive somewhere like out wandering the wilds or something. Right now Ulkmer is 29 years old and followed his father's footsteps and became a clockmaker he tried out making swords one time and was guite good at it he practiced and practiced helping out blacksmiths untill he got a job as a blacksmith. But some new swanky blacksmith came into town and Ulkmer was put out of buisness.

What are your characters ambitions?: to make swords and clocks and make lots of money. He also wants to find his father.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://imgur.com/QWCsV

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: No that's it.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I say "Hello have you any bread for sale?" The shopkeeper reaches for something beneath his counter and pulls out a big loaf of bread he says " this is all the bread I have I'm running low and need some more. Actually could you go out to my field and harvest my wheat and bring it here please." I then says alright but I will need that loaf." the shopkeeper then says "okay it's a deal." when I reach the farm he notices something in the crops it looked like it was taking them. It emerged from the wheat and unsheathed an Iron sword It pointed the sword at me and said "Go away b'fore ye get yerself inte' trouble!" I say "Stop! Drop the wheat it's illegal to steal!" The thief drops the wheat and charges towards me. I quickly unsheath my sword and swing it the tief dodged and attacked me he just grazed my cheekbone leaving a small scratch I swing my sword at his chest, killing him on the spot. when I get back to the shopkeeper with the wheat I say " you do not know how hard this was." taking the bread and walking away.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I walk over and say "hello what seems to be the problem?" The large orc says " He stole My magical necklace!" I say "I'm guessing your a shaman then." giving the dwarf time to run away the orc says "why did you do that?" I say "Well I know by the look on both your faces if he had it he would have given it back and thieves don't wear rich looking clothes."

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I help the old man up and gather his coins I put them in my spare bag and give them to him I take him to the closest shop and buy him a new walking stick the man says " Now sonny h'much did that stick cost ye? I can pay ye back." I say " its fine you be careful now dont want you falling over again, bye."

[LeRenardNoir 413]

You were denied for the following reasons:

Your biography could use some detail. Please add some server lore to your biography. Some notable server events and places/landmarks that could add some more immersion to your biography. Your first open response question is fine, I would recommend adding more detail to the second and third open response question. Fix these things and you'll stand a better chance of acceptance, good luck on your next application!

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

PM me if you would like further explanation/help.

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We all would really appreciate it.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

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