Thorin [Pending]

[Kristar 2]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:Kr1st4r

How old are you?:15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:UTC+2 Finland

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:I speak perfect english all tho I'd give 7 out of 10 on my grammar

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:I have role played with my friends alot and RP alot in Runescape with 120 people (Clan, and i was the clan owner) but i got alot to learn.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes i have read and i agree with the rules.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:Youtube and alot of my friends play on this server.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:I have been rejected 5 time so i have waited for 11 months i think.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :Yes.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:The act of roleplaying is to play a role you have choosen or been given . To act it the way it has been created. Reacting to matters the way your character would and not the way you would.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Use of out-of-game information or resources to affect one's in game decisions. When you are told something in OOC then your character dose not know this information. In fact usual ways for meta-gaming occur by using Skype and TeamSpeak. And you cannot use the info found in OOC in ICL.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Power emoting is using emotes to empower your character in some way compared to another persons character.Forcing your emote on someone and they cannot chance the outcome due to your ''Powerful* emote.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Thorin

Character Race:Dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Thorin was born underground of the deep white mountains. Not very known among dwarves. Thorin was named by a noble dwarf who lived many thousands of years ago. At the age of 18 his father taught him about dwarven metal and dwarven crafts. He didnt aim to be the greatest warrior among his race , he aimed to be the best smith of his people.Thorin was a great lad tho he had a temper. At the age of 27 his father died and Thorin stepped for the very first time into Asulon. For 27 years he lived underground learning about crafting and mining the right minerals. Thorin didnt know much about the other races like elves and men only that elves have pointy ears and Men are 3 feet longer than the dwarves. What he really aimed to see in this new world was magic , he's father spoke alot about magic to Thorin when he was a small lad.

*First Experience* Whil'st Thorin was staning and admiring the trees and the lake side which he has'nt seen before a young sheep ran past him , Thorin almost got a heart attack when he saw the great white beast and knew that he will need some weaponry for this journey to get into a dwarf clan. So he used he's dwarven smithing skill and crafted a iron sword , a bow and 10 arrows. So he sneaked up to that great white beast and shot the beast!! Ofcorse he missed cause we wasnt good with a bow and a sword tho he had a great eye sight and he saw a caravan on the road , So he ran as fast as he could to the caravan untill he saw a zombie. He's eyes were full of fright. And remembered his fathers last words ''What ever happens , dont be a coward , Your a Dwarf and honor that name and defend our honour'' So he took up his sword , ran upon the zombie BUT he stumbled on a rock and fell! Hes eyes were blurry tho he found some strenght to throw hes sword right through the zombies head. Scared and frighten he was and ran to a near cave to find some shelter. In that cave he found a small casket and inside that casket was a Iron Axe , He noticed dwarven carvings and under that axe was a diary. There was only 1 readable page...

Day 1004 the second era

Me and the rest of the dwarven legion found a shelter under this cave .. It seems it is some sort of human mine .. can't recognize any dwarven pillars or what so ever , Lost my chain armor my sword and my bow.. only got left my axe ..ohh my dear dear axe the only weapon a dwarf is good with .. wait !? I think something is out there ....NOOOooo......

Thorin noticed blood on the page and was sure that they got ambushed , so he took the axe and made a few swings, he looked close to the axe and learned about the carvings what symbolized hes family coat of arms and had a good night sleep. In the morning he planned a way to get out of the forest. So he ran as fast as he could , straight to the road and noticed another caravan , he gave some iron to the caravan who took him to the local dwarf hold .. He had another look at the axe and walked on the path to the dwarven mines .. What happens next? The adventure begins ...

What are your characters ambitions?:To join a dwarven clan, to see magic and to be the greatest smith.

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Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:He is abit shy , and talented in smithing . But he has a temper.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

*As Thorin sees the first dwarf in Asulon he immediately runs upon him and says* Greetings brother dwarf, How are things around here? Poor Dwarf: Greetings to you friend , Are you intrested in buying new Tools? Food? Weaponry? Armor?.Thorin: Well i make most of my weapons , armors , tools myself and i just ate , so no thank you lad. Poor Dwarf: You make yourself your own armor ehh? Ohh why didnt i choose to be a smither ? or a miner ? Now i ended up in this ..Human city.. selling merchandises. I barely get 4 iron ingots per day. Thorin: Ohh so its that bad in here? We'll lets have some good old ale at the inn , I will pay for it and why dont you tell me about everything?Poor Dwarf: Oh what are you? half dwarf half elf?? You dont win a dwarf on your side by kindness. Get Out of here! *Thorin backs away and continues hes journey*

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

*As Thorin walks on the road he sees a LARGE green/gray skinned beast and a full armed dwarf with a long axe , he walks closer and hears the dwarf saying* Get your filthy face out of my way!! *Thorin hears the orc saying something in a weird accent* No! Give me the shiny shirt first!! Dwarf: Over My dead body *swings the axe* Thorin runs to aid the dwarf* But immediately the orc stands up! Hes eyes red as fire and swings his club onto the dwarf! He flew against a abandoned house . Thorin took his axe out and ran against the orc to give some time to the dwarf to recover! So Thorin swinged his carved axe on the orc and wounded the orc ! The Orc went furious and swinged his club against Thorin and was about to kill him untill the other dwarf climbed the house and jumped on the orc and made a final swing that changed the orcs life ! Dwarf: Hehe there there lad , that was a fight to remember , It was a great deed brother! Now, i need some able fighting dwarves on my side would you join our great clan? Thorin: Yes ! I've been looking for one , But what was that gray beast?? Dwarf: Ahh a newcomer ehh? They are called the Orcs , nasty ones . Our great clans worst enemy . Lets go and retell the story in the great halls of our clan!!

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

Thorin sees the first man on hes travels in this new world and sees the helpless man and pulls the lad up and carrys him to a near stone chair. Whilst picking up the old mans bag he sees the coins , his heart starts beating really hard , his dwarven instinct shows up. And he grabs the coins. When he turned the other side he saw the old man smiling at him and Thorins heart brakes , sadness. Thorin gave the coins to the Old man. Oldman:ahh there thank you dear boy. My old bones are done . Im just gona wait for a caravan to pick me up . Hey heres 2 coins for you. Thorin: oh most generous of you . Tho do you need any company whilst waiting? I'm in no hurry. Oldman:OO yess my dear boy. Come sit here i got a story to tell . When i was as young as you I....*So they talked around 3 h till a caravan picked the old man up and Thorin learned a valuable lesson Today.!

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Put on Pending.

This is, for the most part, an outstanding application. I'd accept it straightaway, but there are a few things that need to be fixed first. You must post on the Minecraft Forums before you can be accepted. Also, please change the reference to the Dwarf who lived 'many thousands of years ago', as this is not possible given the server lore is not that old. As well, the only worlds your character can come from are Aegis or Asulon, so you need to change the places where it says otherwise. If you can edit your application and make these changes satisfactorily within 24 hours you will be accepted. If not, you will be denied.

Pending, awaiting necessary changes. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[Skippy 2466]

Over-Ruled by Dwarf

At the age of 18 his father taught him about dwarven metal and dwarven crafts.

Your character is about 2 seasons and 4 years old, which would make him just a toddler/baby. A toddler/baby is unable to learn about dwarven metal and crafts. It's unrealistic.

At the age of 27 his father died and Thorin stepped for the very first time into Asulon. For 27 years he lived underground learning about crafting and mining the right minerals.

This is still a dwarves' child years, and I highly doubt a child could live in the wilds all by himself, mine and craft, and hunt. It's unrealistic for your character's age.

What he really aimed to see in this new world was magic , he's father spoke alot about magic to Thorin when he was a small lad.

The ONLY way a dwarf can learn magic is if he's a member of the Irongut Clan, which your character is not apart of. Just letting you know this.

So he used he's dwarven smithing skill and crafted a iron sword , a bow and 10 arrows.

Um, what? So, your character just happened to have an anvil, hammer, lava, water, metal, sticks, and feathers to make all this? Not to mention string...

So he ran as fast as he could to the caravan untill he saw a zombie.

The Undead don't exist in Asulon, this is invalid.

You also shouldn't live "in that random cave". Your character should live in one of the dwarven holds, found on the wiki. For dwarven traits and guidelines, go here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/56452-dwarves/

Your grammar was... not pleasing. Please improve greatly on your spelling. Our players would rather role-play with an adept speller than a person who makes mistakes often.

Also, a side note.

Hes eyes

You spell his, not hes.

Reapply in 24 hours. Also fix what Ever said to fix.

[Skippy 2466]

Moved to Denied Forum