Appletart300's 2nd App

[Appletart300 8]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:Appletart300

How old are you?:15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:U.S.

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes, quite. It i the only language I know how to speak.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Yes, I play runescape and I do many other roleplaying games.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes, I read the rules and I do agree to them.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:Internet/Google

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:N/A

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is to act as a person or take on another role other than your own. Whithin the role of this character you explore a world and experience challenges.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:meta-gaming is basically chatting out of character. I'm pretty sure.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Power Emoting is explaining what your character does. For an example: [Harry jumps over Johns Table].

In-Character Details

Character Name:Althalos

Character Race:Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Personality: Althalos is a young man full of chivalry and honor. He has a heart for good will and not for evil, destruction and most of all; Orcs. He mainly struggles with technology and getting along with most dwarves. Althalos is a well mannered man but still when able to always wants to go off and adventure. Not very greedy, yet he has helped countless people suffering off the streets.

All in all he is a well respected man of chivalry.

Bio: Althalos grew up in a small village where everyone knows each other quite well. He had a family, and best of all; those who loved him.

It was at the young age of 9 that he watched his father go into a war and never come back. Althalos would from time to time ask his mother when and what happened to Pa. All she told him at that time is that he won't come back for along time. With the death of the father the mother had a hard time to obtain her sons health. The mother ha to take matters into her own hands. She traveled toward Elven country and decided to marry an elf named Lambien. He was a respected elf and Althalos loved him. By this time Althalos was at the age of 15 and was able to go out on his own. His step father taught him many skills that would keep him alive in the world. After everything had died down and his family was settled Althalos left his home and decided to adventure as far as his map could take him.

What are your characters ambitions?:To explore the world and to take revenge on his father.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:http://i.imgur.com/iwSiG.png

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: He has a dream to restore chivalry to dark times as these.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?I walk up to the poor dwarf and fell pity for him. I spare him a few coins and walk away. Before I get far he thanks me and gives me an amulet that he says will guide me to my fate. Thank you my good dwarf. I walk away looking further into the city.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?I grasp my handle, readying to equip my sword Just then the Orc, out of rage; charges me. " Go young dwarf!" , I yell. The orc gets into slicing distance so then I swing my sword at him and he dodges and then I bring it in for another try. This time it his the orc and he falls to his knees. Then I slayed the foul creature in one swift movement without hesitation.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I pull up the old man and I give him a bag of coins but behind his bad I grab to pay for lunch. He says thank you and gives me 5 more Minas. I feel terrible after what I did so I went to a shop where he just went and said to the shopkeeper, "Take these 8 Minas and give it to him the next time he comes. God Bless".

Thank You

Althalos/Appletart300

[Hylian the Heretic 233]

Denied.

Metagaming and poweremoting definitions are incorrect. There are guides on the forums to help you :)

Bio does not contain enough server lore and doesn't describe your character enough.

ORQs are too short. You've got the right idea, but your 2nd contains power-emoting and killing requires a villain app, something you may apply for when you've been accepted.

[Hylian the Heretic 233]

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