lagarto26 Application

[Elijahh 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:lagarto26

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Pacific Time Zone

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Pretty Good

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Average

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:My Friend appletart300

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:none

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :yes

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Where You Get the choice to make good or bad decisions

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:meat gaming is to exceed what the original game can do

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:is to give a result of one player doing to another

In-Character Details

Character Name:Kato

Character Race:Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:Kato's race is elf, he is 5 feet 8 inches and is very fast,Kato is one of the most attractive elfs in asulon.Kato is 13 years old and has his best friend appletart300 who is also an elf. When Kato was 3 he learned to use the power of magic for health restoration, when he was 6 he shot his first arrow with a bow.

Kato is a wealthy man who plans to start a village with appletart300. Kato is also planning to start a revolution for all elves. Kato is truly the chosen Elf.

What are your characters ambitions?:Wants to be a wealthy elf, start a village

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:I think i explained enough in my bio.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?To give the poor man some food and by some of his products.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I would Kill the orc, and mug the dwarf for money

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:Help the old man up to his feet.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Roleplaying definition needs to be expanded. Incorrect Meta-Gaming and Power-Emoting definitions, they also need examples. You can find more info on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

13 is extremely young for an Elf, as they are not considered past childhood until they are around 20. Your character cannot know 'appletart300', as this is not a player and not a character. Your character cannot know magic entering the server, this requires a separate application. Your character cannot be the 'chosen Elf'. The bio needs to be greatly expanded on. Please add some server lore, which can be found on the forums and wiki.

Need to provide a skin screenshot and not the template. See THIS GUIDE for more info.

Orcs are extremely difficult to kill, and your character would not be able to murder or mug without a Villain Application.

Expand greatly on all Open Response Questions.

There are several punctuation and capitalization errors throughout the application.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[everblue2er101 906]

Moved to Denied Forum