Akiosh's Application V3

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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Akiosh

How old are you?:15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Mountain Western, USA

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: As a 15 year old I most likely don’t have the best grip on it but I do for my age level.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Just a little but I have watched others role-play on your server.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes I agree to them all and will look back to them to make sure I don’t break 1.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: People on youtube mostly, though I did find your website on google.com.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/72902-akioshs-application-v2/page__p__595302__fromsearch__1#entry595302 My first was removed.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:I have.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: The act of roleplaying is the act of acting in a premade character with other people that have done the same. (in the fact they made premade characters.) And creating a story.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: This would be the out of game things that affect your in game experience.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Forcing others to do your will without their consent.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Symyr of Oren

Character Race: Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: I have lived a hard life, Because of this I have blue eyes that look like they have seen to the ends of the world, I am tall with scares all over; hidden underneath my clothes. I am a parent and farmer. By day I am just your average person. And a monster hunter by night; at a young age was trained to fight the worst of creatures, I had to be as My home city Oren was taken by undead. I have seen things that would make grown men quake with fear. Only a few people can do what I have done. I have been forced to be a ranger.

I am currently trying to stray from this life, as all I want to become just an average citizen. But the world does not need an average person, but a worrier; I will rise to any occasion as long as my family is kept safe. I must keep my son Gwaddyn, Wife Georn, and daughter Addreddry safe from the evil of I will not back down until this evil is over; I do know i can’t do this on my own. I have personally not taught my son how to fight as I believed he never would have to. I will make allies, slay the enemies of Oren, and make sure that no one hurts those I dear. I am not just the average man, I am Symyr of Oren.

What are your characters ambitions?: To help others, protect this land, protect my family, and Make sure this evil never rises again.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: . http://akiosh.imgur.com/all/

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Having to leave my family is very hard for Symyr as he does deeply care for them.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? Hello dwarf I see you have food for sell, may I purchase some from you? (the dwarf agrees but seems suspicious of me.) I say, “Dwarf there is no need to worry as I see you’re struggling to make you living here in this new city, how much is your apple as I will pay you twice as much for everything I purchase from you. (The dwarf looks at me in disbelief and replies.) “Sir you are so kind to me, I cannot take that money as I should be the one to help you on your travels.” I reply, “Thou can’t give me merchandise for free, not as you are now and not ever as I will not accept it. I will pay you a handsome price and we shall meet again, how about you owe me one? (The dwarf agrees to this and we go on our marry ways)

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? Orc dwarf, why must thou fight? (The Orc and dwarf tell me the story as the dwarf called the Orc a dumb scallywag.) Dwarf just because the Orc aren’t the brightest race doesn’t mean they have no brain. I have happened to meet many Very intelligent Orcs in my day. (Lie) Plus I hear they are great in battle, as are the dwarfs. I believe you could go on an adventure together, as in fact am I why don’t you join me? (The Orc and Dwarf tell me that they would love to join me, but can’t as they have no weapon.) ( I tell them) we can find a store and I have more than enough to help them.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I help him grab his money as others are trying to take it, then I buy the man a cane as I walk him home. As we converse I find out that he was once an adventurer. He tells me about his stash of nearby Minas up to the thousands. I trust this man and go to his stash that is two towns over, when I find out its booby trapped as he said. I avoid them all with just a few cuts and bruises, But come to find out it’s been raided, but the looks of it many years. As I make my venture out I see some shimmering in the river… The river is loaded in Minas loads and loads of minas.

[Queen of Aegis 174]

Things you need to improve on:

- Please fix the color next time it was very hard to read for me

- Biography needs more detail

- I can't see the skin

- metagaming and powergaming defenitions could be expanded on

- ORQ need improvement

- ORQ's lack dialog of the other persons and from you at some points

If you have any questions or need any help feel free to PM me

You may reapply in 24 hours from this post

~BoomBox~

[Queen of Aegis 174]

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