My 2nd Application

[Kiki 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: ilovecupkake

How old are you?: 11

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Oklahoma

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:No

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes i have

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:Minecraft Forums

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/73038-application/

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Role playing is when you perform an act as a person.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: It is a character's characteristics.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Forcing the result if one character's actions on another character's actions

In-Character Details

Character Name:Kiyu or Kiki

Character Race:Orc

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:Kiki is a 12 year old girl who loves adventures. She lives with her friends on Destiny Islands, but somehow, she teleported to the World of Asulon, staying there until the time is right for her to leave. Kiki has red hair and blueish-greenish eyes. She was really young when she lost her sister, Aqua to the darkness. Kiki is an expert sword wielder. She wields the Sword of Hope. Kiki is full of darkness, heart and blood, but she somehow maintains a light spirit.

What are your characters ambitions?:To keep her friends safe and fight the darkness.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://postimage.org/image/hq6k1zset/

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:The skin might change soon

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?" I think that you should take a break instead of working so hard. I will take your place and you get some rest"

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?"I don't think that we should get so violent here, so, remain calm and don't fight"

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:"Are you okay? Here, let me help you. Next time, be careful"

[Wizard 125]

Denied.

Definitions are wrong and need examples.

You need a longer bio. You cannot not make up your own places such as "Destiny Islands".

Open Response need to be way longer.

This app needs a lot of work, and I would not apply until it is beefed up a ton.

[Taiga 764]

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