[Denied] Bjerrn's Application

[Bjerrn 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:taur101

How old are you?:18

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Sweden GMT +1 Hour

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes i have

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:I was roleplaying when i used to play WoW

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes i have

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Went on google and searched for minecraft servers and found it on a top 10 list

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :No but i will when i've made an account there

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:It's when you take the role of a made up character and pretend that you are him

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:It's when you take OOC information and use it for your advantage during the roleplay

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:It's when you use god-emotes like insta-kill someone

In-Character Details

Character Name:Bjerrn Mountainback

Character Race:Dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:Bjerrn belonged to a house of smiths and miners. After have been found guilty of murder on his own father Bjerrn was exiled and stripped of his house and title only to find out later that it was actually Bjerrn's younger brother Gornak who set him up to gain the seat of housemaster. Now after Bjerrn has been exiled to the surface he traveled to find his a friend of his fathers, a mountain dwarf named Dogruin of a house of warriors who would teach Bjerrn how to wield an axe like a true warrior and help him on his path to regain his honor, title and house and also get revenge on his brother and he will not let anyone or anything stand in his way of completing his goal.

What are your characters ambitions?:To regain his honor

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:http://i.imgur.com/XJHYM.png

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?Come buy fine trinkets and clothing! shouted the shop-keeper, Do you sell furs? I asked. Is there anything in particular you're looking for? He asked in a creepy way. I need something warm for i going to see the mountain dwarfs, i said to the shop-keeper. Ah here we go, a fine bear fur. I don't have any gold to pay for it but i can help you with something in return for the bear fur. I can work with that, he said, giving me the fur and then walking into the back of his shop...

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?ORC!! if you want to fight, fight me! i shouted while drawing my axe. Go away dwarf, this has nothing to do with you, the orc said and continued to threaten the dwarf. I charged at the orc with my axe high but he was fast and blocked my attack. You should have walked away when you had the chance, dwarf. I won't leave a fellow dwarf. I said while swininging my axe trying to hit the orc. HA! this dwarf is a thief and deserves nothing but death, the orc shouted while avoiding my attacks. The only one here who deserves death is you!! I yelled as i swinged my axe towards his neck...

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:Are you okay old man? i asked as i helped the old man to his feet. Stupid stick! he shouted while looking at the broken stick. Let me get this for you, i said as i reached for the spilled out coins. You may keep the coins, i won't need them anyway where i'm going. the old man said and walked away never to be seen again... oooh spooky.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Need to post on the Minecraft Forums before you can be accepted.

Expand on Power-Emoting definition. Add examples for it and Meta-Gaming. You can find more information on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

Please expand on the bio and make it at least two paragraphs. Add some server lore, which can be found on the forums and wiki.

Skin needs to be a screenshot and not the template. Use THIS GUIDE as a reference.

Expand slightly on the Open Response Questions.

There are several capitalization errors throughout the application.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[Cappy 1599]

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