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[reallynewperson 0]

Minecraft account name: reallynewperson

How old are you:13

Time zone/country:Pacific/USA

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:I could say I have

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Yes I have played other role playing games such as DND

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes

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How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:I am not sure anymore its been so long since I found it

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:My original apps seem to have been deleted

Have you posted this application on Mine craft Forum?: I'm about to

In your own words, define what the act of role playing is:In my own words role playing is self explanatory you take up a role and delve deep into playing as that defined character

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:I am not sure

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:I am not sure

Character Name: Vorn

Character Race:Dark elf/ night elf/drow

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Today i will be telling you about Vorn the drow. He comes from a small poor family.

Running away at 12 years old seemed to be the highlight of his childhood. His "parents" were both human so he assumed he was adopted.After facing many hardships and denials (including having to kill his adopted father) he became a dark and quiet 26 year old.

He seems to be 5'3 with dark skin and violet eyes. He wears a clean red shirt bearing his symbol.His leather breaches wearing 4 large strange stones. His white hair flowing. He may save a few many a time no madder who it is.

What are your characters ambitions?:To find his birth father no madder the cost.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:http://imageshack.us/content_round.php?page=done&l=img854/7707/20121116221105.png

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:No

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?:"what are you selling dwarf"I say "Only food" the poor dwarf says.I give him a few coins for some bread."thank you kind dwarf." I walk away. Later I come back to buy some more food.Seeing that he is still there I place coins down not saying a word."what l you be buying drow" "bread" "alright". He hands me a piece of bread and 1 walk away.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?:I stalk down to see if the situation will escalate to where i need to help. The orc pulls a club from his back. Seeing this i run unsheathing my sword and cut the orcs right arm well he is holding the club.With orc blood on my sword I continually slash at him.I notice some movement out of the corner of my eye. After killing the orc I look to where the dwarf was and see he had run away.I

laugh.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenseless man. What does your character do?:I help the man up then fell a sharp puck on my leg.It was a knife. The old man was a wizard using a spell to disguise himself. Out of sheer rage i three the man 3 feet into a tree.He gets up with ease and just barley misses me. Then i felt very hit. He had struck me with a fireball.luckily he struck the plate that was my symbol. I ran up to him pulling out my sword and dismembered his head.Smiling at the deed

I rush to pick up the coins seeing that that had been stolen. I yell"DAMMIT"

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Need to provide Meta-Gaming and Power-Emoting definitions and examples. You can find more information on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

There are no night elves or drows on the server. You may apply as a Human, Elf, Orc, Dwarf or one of their sub-races.

Cannot apply as a murderer, as this requires a Villain Application. Greatly expand on the bio and make it at least two paragraphs.

Skin could be improved.

Powergaming in the second and third Open Response Questions, defeating the opponents so easily.

Expand on all ORQs. They should read as small stories, with action and dialogue.

There are punctuation, spelling and capitalization errors throughout the application.

Broken formatting. Copy and paste the application format from HERE exactly as it is without changing anything.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[Cappy 1599]

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