_Dakon_

[Skippy 2466]

Out-Of-Character Details

Alternate Minecraft Account Name: _Dakon_.

Already Accepted Minecraft Account Name: Skippy_Irongut.

How old are you?: 14.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Dakon.

Character Race: Dark Elf.

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Dakon was born many years ago, in Aegis. More specifically in Laurelin, the Elven capital of Aegis. He was not spoiled as a child, and had to work for what he wanted. He wanted a new blade? His father made him work for the money to buy one from the market place. This made Dakon hardened and tough as he got older. He became more independent, also as he grew up.

By the time Aegis was destroyed by Iblees' wrath, Dakon was no longer with his family. He had left on his own, into the Verge to flee from Aegis. He was a roughened dark elf, with many scars upon his chest, and ripped clothing. Even now in Asulon, he lives away from the other elves, the other races, he is a loner.

What are your characters ambitions?: Dakon does not have any ambitions set in stone. He just wanders, and does what he must to survive.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Nope.

Open-Response-Questions

Anwser at least two of the below questions with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

Dakon silently walks through the city of Arethor, watching his back in case of knights. He turns his head to the loud dwarf, and peers down at his wares. He knows if he buys anything, it would draw too much attention to himself and would be hanged due to him being a dark elf. He continues to sneak towards the gates to leave the city.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

Dakon quickly notices the fighting that is taking place in front of him. Looking at what he is equiped with, an iron blade and some leather rags, he decides it is not the smartest idea to take on the savage orc or the rowdy dwarf. Dakon walks off the path, making his way around the two hidden by the trees.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

Skipped.

[mmat 7460]

• I feel your open response questions could be expanded further, they appear to be brief and seem to be rather evasive of the actual RP that the questions are supposed to portray, they are also rather brief and lack the amount of detail that is required.
  
  
• Your biography could be expanded upon as it is quite brief and does not really go into much detail on your character and what made him the way he is. What event caused him to have these scars on his chest? Etc.

Please try again in 24 hours.

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[mmat 7460]

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