[Denied]My First Application.

[Tydras 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Tydras

How old are you?: 17

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Mountain time/ Canada

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes i do

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes i have

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes i do

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I was searching up good rp minecraft servers and came across Lord of the Craft

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying to me is having fun with other players plus not talking about real life problems and actually talking like your character would talk and socialize. example. Human "I just finished tending to my fields and crops, how was your day?" Dwarf "I had o' bit of work me self today mate."

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Umm i don't really know but umm, i think meta-gaming is talk that has to do with the set up or other aspects of the game rather than what happens in game itself.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: I'm not gunna lie I'm not sure what "power-emoting" is.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Tuldarus

Character Race: Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Tuldarus lived his childhood as a slave. He and his mother, father and brother were always just clinging to life. After his brother and father were recruited to the kings army he went mad with rage. Later in his years he and his mother recieved word that his father was killed in battle. His brother's were abouts were unknown.

He is a fit ragged looking man. With a shaved face and shaggy hair. He is 21 years old. People usualy don't walk around or be near him in his village because of his temper. His personality is that of a angry, poor young man. He doesn't like when people fuss over him. He hates bullies.

What are your characters ambitions?: His ambitions are to serve in the army in memory of his kin and fight against all evil that lay before him.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:No not really.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

"Leave me alone you scum!" Dwarf keeps waving. *Walks over and yells "WHAT DO YOU WANT!" the poor dwarf looks terrified and scurries back into his shop. Tuldarus then snickers quietly and turns around to see everyone there at the time staring at him. He then turns away and walks briskly away from the staring crowd. Oh how he hates crowds!

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

He walks over to the dwarf and orc and pushes the orc away. The orc then reaches for a knife and Tuldarus kicks him in the shin then leaps onto his back and breaks his neck. The dwarf begins to say thank you but before he could finish Tuldarus punches him in the mouth and walks away. He looks back and sees the dwarf inspecting his mouth at a nearby pond. Tuldarus continues to observe him until the drawf looks at him witch he turns away and walks on his way to a nearby town.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

Tuldarus quickly runs to the man and picks him up. He ofers the man some water and when the man refuses he insists till he drinks. Then Tuldarus picks up the coins, pockets 2 for himself and hands the rest to the man in a pouch of leather. Then he walks over to a nearby tree and breaks a branch. He then makes a makeshift walking stick and gives it to the man and runs away.

[mmat 7460]

• Your meta-gaming definition is incorrect and should be revised.
  
  
• Please research what power-emoting is and include a definition in your next attempt.
  
  
• You must post this application on the Minecraftforum thread.
  
  
• Please include server lore in your biography such as towns, etc. Also, make your biography a lot more detailed and at least two reasonably sized paragraphs in length.
  
  
• Your third open response question contains a villainous activity, thieving; which cannot be performed without a villain application.
  
  
• Your second open response question contains power-emoting.

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[mmat 7460]

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