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[Sky_Lord554 3]

Out-Of-Character Details

Alternate Minecraft Account Name:markacker84

Already Accepted Minecraft Account Name:sky_lord554

How old are you?:21

In-Character Details

Character Name:Arbane

Character Race:Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:When Arbane was young his mother left to be with another man, and he was left to live a live of hardship with his father Gaelin. His father was a warrior and taught Arbane everything he knew from Archery to Horseback Riding. After all the years training, Arbane was a person you wouldn't want to get in a fight with. He was now a great warrior who was a trained assassin.

A couple years later Arbane, went on a journey to the land where no other elf had been before. It took him days, and the weeks more after. He stayed there for 3 years and he learned he didn't want to be a person who fights for the fun of killing, he wanted to be a warrior who fought for honor and integrity.

What are your characters ambitions?:Arbane's ambitions are archery, traveling, exploring, Axe Throwing, and his most favorite is Battle.(Favorite weapon is a sword)

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:The skin is attached, and couldn't get a in- game screenshot.

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:No not really

Open-Response-Questions

Answer at least two of the below questions with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?I would tell the orc to leave. If he said "yes" then I would help the dwarf to get better and stronger. Then I would give him money to keep on his journey. If the Orc says "no", then i will have to fight him. After I would help the dwarf and give him money to be on his way.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: First thing I would do was to help him up. I would clean up all of the minas and give them to him. I would camp the night with him and hunt food for him. When sunrise comes I would carry him to the nearest inn and get him food and clothing. After I would pay the inn to let him stay there until he was well again. I would search around later for a brand new walking stick with intricate designs on the shaft. After he got well, I would say my goodbyes and leave for home.

This is the attached skin

[mmat 7460]

• I feel you could expand further on your first open response question. Perhaps go into more detail about the situations that your character has been put in to flesh his personality out more.
  
  
• Your biography contains no official server lore, such as place names, etc.
  
  
• You character seems to be a bit GodModded. - 'He was now a great warrior who was a trained assassin.' and 'His father was a warrior and taught Arbane everything he knew from Archery to Horseback Riding' This screams out to me as something that a person would powergame with on the server, you should be gaining this type of prestige during roleplay on the server, rather than already having had obtained them in your application. Also, assassins are villainous, and villainous activities cannot be performed without an accepted villain application.

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[mmat 7460]

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