[Denied]Steelbender19's Application

[steelblender19 0]

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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: steelbender19 (I wanted it to be blender... but I forgot the l... and now I'm the stupid avatar oAo)

How old are you?:Above 10... (I like to keep some of my private information to myself, secure, is that ok? But seriously, I'm not some retarded kid thats gonna be raging and crying all the time.)

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Central America

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: I'm pretty sure I do...

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes, I play LOTS of MMORPG games. Most of them, I played when I was like... 8 and stuff, I liked Maplestory n all those other related games. I still play a lot of those games now... Never gets old huh? C:

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:I saw it on Youtube and I decided to check it out.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: I don't think I have any, other than the application I put on the Minecraft Application Forum link below.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraft...nique-gameplay/!

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Defitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:To act and effect other people and things to create some kind of epic story...

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Its when you havto think out plots n plans, ways to get around your opponent and get to your goal... I think... o_o (These are my own words... I'm trying my best, I know these are... probally terrible.)

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: When a person does something to another person, without that other person, it couldn't be done like... "Player 1 kills Player 2" or "Player 1 steals 12 Gold from Player 2" (Yay, I explained that pretty well! :3)

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In-Character Details

Character Name: Hmmm... I have tons of names I can choose from: Rion, Atar, Etik... etc... I think I'm gonna go with ATAR!

Character Race: I'm still deciding, Orc or a Evil Person. I might go for undead, I might go for orc... I'll choose when I figure out how many other people are in each of those races.

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

I am a energetic young "Insert Race Here" who was always interested in the War, I wanted to support our side both economic and by manslaughter... Manslaughter, is fun, as long as your not loosing, and I can get a little out of hand with the power of manslaughter in a battle...

I'm a little taller than the average (I'm not a giant, just like... 1-2 inches to make myself look more... powerful.) with (I don't know about the hair, it'll change due to race, like orc will have some kind of mixture of green and black hair, elves, white, blond and stuff you see on MMORPGs a lot, etc)

What are your characters ambitions?: To become the top guy (or 2nd) at something.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: Heres a link! http://www.planetmin...e-with-bandana/ If you want me to change my skin, I'm cool with that.

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Have you ever played Dragon Quest VI? (6, not IX, thats 9, this is VI) The main character is kinda what I want to be. A normal young strong village boy with crazy blue hair...

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Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?:

Me: "Hello sir..." I walked up to the dwarf, curiously, as he flashed his head at my direction. "Can I see what your selling?" I asked politely.

Dwarf: "Oh... Yeah... Sure..!" He grumbled, shoving his hand through his bag and pulling out potions. "Aye... These, my friend... Are very old... and expensive... Its said that they were made by wizards many many MANY years ago... But nobody believes me though." He sighed.

Me: "How much is it?" I asked.

Dwarf: "200 Coins a Potion!" He exclaimed.

Me: I jumped back, that was a lot of cash... "Urrr... Ok..." I thought, I should go into details so I make sure I got the right thing... "Do you know what it does..?"

Dwarf: "I don't know, but it'll probally do something wonderful for a person like you!" He said, trying to persuade me.

Me: The dwarf looks awfully poor... He could use the money, and maybe... this potion's "mysterious wonder" might come in handy someday... I gave him the 200 coins, and he gave me a potion.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?:

Me: Immedietly felt a tight grip in my hand, but my sword was not there, instead there was a fist. I ran over there and slid infront of the 2.

Dwarf: "P-Please! Don't hurt me!" The Dwarf scampered, once he saw me, he ran off.

Orc: "I'll crush him with my bare hands!" He whailed, and ran at the dwarf but I blocked him off by getting infront of his path. "Move!"

Me: "You have no right to hurt that dwarf!" I snarled.

-We fight until the Orc is defeated, I had a sword, and he had fists, so it was a obvious win.-

Me: "Next time, think twice." I sighed. The Dwarf was out of sight, somewhere behind those hills behind me... And I shouldn't get into anymore trouble... So, I jumped back onto the gravel path and continued my journey.

While walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

Me: I watch the old man stumble with coins rattling at my feet, and I slowly kneel down and start collecting it back up.

Old Man: "Huuu..?' He grunted, and coughed.

Me: "Are you okay?" I asked, crawling to the Old Man.

Old Man: "Yes... I'm fine, thank you." He said as I gave him his pouch of gold back.

Me: "Do you need help..?" I asked.

Old Man: "Oh no, I just need a little help with my..." He stared at his legs, and I nodded, breaking off a branch from a nearby tree and gave it to him. "It'll do... I'll get a new one when I get to the next town." He told me, nodding his head and smiling.

[Skippy 2466]

You need to expand/fix your role-play definition, meta-gaming definition, and power-gaming definition. You can't apply for Undead, though you can apply as an orc. You shouldn't come here aiming to be the 'top 2', or whatever that means. It's about role-play, not power. Dwarves ARE NOT weak. Dwarves ARE NOT SCARED of orcs. They'll bash orc's heads in until they're dead. You also kill the orc with your nonexistent sword? Because it said in the second ORQ you didn't have a sword.

Reapply in 24 hours.

[Skippy 2466]

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