[Denied]Mimsywish

[lazer953501 1]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:mimsywish

How old are you?:24

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:MST

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Yes

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:A good friend of mine Just introduced me to the game of minecraft and after a couple days of play he mentioned this site to me

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:N\A

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Role playing is taking on someone or something elses mind, either scripted or not, and playing as is you were them.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Meta-gaming is the utilization of "out of game" information for in game purposes. For example, I have just logged into the puplic teamspeak and heard that we were going to be attacked.After I logged into the lord of the craft world, I proceeded to inform all of my guilds members about this information. Because I warned my guild with information I have learned outside of the lord of the craft world, I metagamed. [Comment] I despise metagaming

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Power-emoting is the use of your characters power in a non-realistic way. Example, I am a Human and in no way can say this statement: *Punches orc in the face and sends him flying across the world*.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Jim Hunter

Character Race:Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

My name is Jim Hunter. I am twenty years old. I was born in Asulon and raised by my father Jeff Hunter. He worked as a carpenter in the capital of Oren. My father spent all his time raising me to be a good man. "Always be humble and never lose hope." he used to tell me. My mother died while giving birth to me and thus my father spent every waking second to teach me the way of the world.

My father and I decided that we would go on an adventure one day into the woods. We gathered enough supplies to last us for a few days. My father however; did not tell me that this was my path to becoming a man. After he taught me some basic survival skills we created camp and rested for the night. I awoke the next morning to find him gone. The only thing left was a stone crafted sword and a small piece of paper that read, Son I have left you the supplies and this sword. It is time for you to embark the great journey on your own. Find your way home son, I will be waiting. I began my journey.

I saw many things during this great struggle and met very strange people. I also had many struggles. One I remember the most. I just finished making a house out of clay when I was attacked in the middle of the night by skeletons. I went straight for my sword and for got the number one rule, keep your sword handy at all times. I was shot at. The arrow barely scratching my leg as I leaped to one side. I Rolled into the clay hut and found my sword. I waited for them to come in. They did not. I peeked outside to find all the skeletons dead and no one was there.

I finally found my way home. I found my father in bed sick from an arrow shaft in his leg. He was feverish and losing his life. He told me that my mothers last request was that I live life to my fullest and that she wanted me to become a good strong man, one who was helpful to all of the world. My heart as heavy and my mind set on these words. My father passed a day later. Heart broken and yet filled with ambition, I started my new life in Asulon.

What are your characters ambitions?:To work for a good life and help others in need

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:Attached

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:My character is a helping soul and very proud. He is outgoing and will throw his life on the line to save others.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? "Sir, my money is short but I can spread the word of your wares to others that I meet"

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?I would first ask what the argument is about and hope that we can come to an agreement so that no blood will be shed.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:My character will tend to the man first before grasping at his coins. After the man is properly situated, I would then pick up all of his things and hand it back to the man.

[Thu'um 530]

Hello,

This is an excellent application. Unfortunately, you have but one flaw.

All of the criteria is met but the Open Response Questions. They are a bit lacking, being only about 1 sentence each and not that detailed. I suggest upon your next application you put a bit more detail into them and have fun with them. They allow you to express and develop your character. :)

I really wish for you to re-apply, and you may after a period of 24 hours.

- Thu'um.

[Thu'um 530]

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