[Denied]Darksouls Good Copy Application

[darksouls 0]

]Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:mrwitchdoctor

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:(UTC+10:00) Brisbane/Australia

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes I do

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:yes i have played on multiple servers and video games involving roleplay

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes i understand and agree to the rules

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:I was searching for a good roleplay server and lord of the craft came up straight away

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:i have made 2 but they where either out dated or missed information

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? Yes i have posted it My name is mrwitchdoctor

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: creating and narrating a character of your own creation and acting in away that fits with the atmosphere or lore of the area you are in

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:using knowledge of a game to influence your own actions within the game

in a usually unsporting way

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:it is forcing the result of someones actions on another character (power-emoting is heavily frowned on in most roleplay games and servers)

In-Character Details

Character Name:darksouls

Character Race:elf (dark elf)

Character biography: a young elf brought up into a land torn apart by war a war that took his fathers life and his mothers happiness 4 years after his fathers death he left his home town to find away to end this terrible war he went out to far away lands to find allies to help him on his quest.

after 3 years searching he still had nothing he returned to his home town shocked to find it in ruin it had been raided by the undead there where no survivors so with his heart full of anger he left and he went to the farthest land he could reach to find enough power to destroy these creatures and he will not stop until they are erased from the world.

personality: he is angered but in heart he is kind and merciful but is ruthless when dealing with the undead.

appearance:tall dark grey skin blue eyes white hair cloths are black maroon white and grey

What are your characters ambitions?: he constantly seeks allies and hates being alone because it reminds him of the family he lost

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: This is an image of my skin but is not a screen shot i was unable to copy the URL of my screen shot

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: No

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I walk up to the dwarf give him some minas for the item he is selling give him a kind smile and sit on a near by bench

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I tell the orc that dwarves are not the enemy turn your anger on the undead who raid our towns and kidnap our people.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I pick up the poor man rest him against the trees i get a cloth rap it place the minas inside tie the top up give it to the man then i break a tree branch so the man can use it as a walking stick i then help the man up and take him to the nearest in so he may rest.

[Skippy 2466]

Your meta-gaming definition doesn't clearly define the term. Your biography needs to follow our lore. Undead aren't in Asulon, so it is lore breaking. You need to largely expand on your ORQs and add detailed actions and dialog.

Reapply in 24 hours.

[Skippy 2466]

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