[Denied][D] Blockmaster's Application

[Abyssus 487]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Blockcraft1234

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: United States Of America

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: On this old RP server I used to play on, it was going to get shutdown and people on the forums said they were moving here

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: I believe it has been deleted, it was over a year ago or close to it

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Yes

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is the act of taking the role of a character you have created and taking his/hers roles or jobs

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Using out of game information to benefit you in the RP environment

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:The act of "Roleplaying out" ridiculously powerful things, such as saying "Casts a Giant Flame spell and burns down the town"

In-Character Details

Character Name: Guarger

Character Race: Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Guarger came from a farmer family on the outskirts of Asulon, the nearby monastery delivered Guarger when the time had come, for the first 2 years life was good for Guarger, but soon bandits running from the law had soon invaded the forest where Guarger and his parents had lived, the monastery urged Joseph(Guarger's father) and Elizabeth(Guarger's mother) to leave the farm and take refuge in the monastery till the danger of the bandits had passed, Joseph refused and the monastery soon locked up, bandits had been seen outlining the farm, for the first couple of days the bandits were seen but did not bother Joseph as he had been working on the farm, but he did not know that secretly they were planning to invade his farm, at twilight the bandits would attack day after day after day, Joseph put up quite a fight, but by the end of the week Joseph was tired and was becoming weary, Joseph quickly ran inside during an attack and told Elizabeth to take Guarger to the monastery, Elizabeth did as told and knocked on the big wooden doors and left Guarger there, she ran back to see her husband one last time, the next day the monks heard crying outside the walls and opened them to find Guarger, they quickly took a small party and ran to the farm, all that was left were charred ruins of a farm, along with the dead bodies of Guarger's father and mother, Guarger was then raised by the monks for the next 16 years, he earned quite an education and swordsmanship, as long as many other skills, though he seldom left the safety of the walls of the monastery, by the time he was 18 he had long brown hair which covered his left eye, blue eyes, a tough body set, he wears black pants and a checkered bluish-greenish shirt and is very adventerious, his curiosity always got the best of him, by this time the monks knew it was time for him to head into the dangerous mainland of Asulon, Guarger was excited that he would finally leave the walls, he gathered up his stuff and headed for the nearest landmark, The Sanctuary.

What are your characters ambitions?: His ambitions are commonly to cure his curiosity, explore new places, and to one day become a powerful official

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/668808/me/(tell me if I need to change anything)

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: No

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

I walk up to the stand and observe the dwarf's wares, I see cooking utensils, broken pieces of wood, pickaxes and sword's, I ask the man why he sells things no one wants and he tells me "It is all i have, please buy something" I reach into my pocket and pull out 5 Mina's and hand them to the dwarf and I proceed into the city.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

I walk up to the Orc and ask him why he is threatening the dwarf, the Orc responds "Stay out of this filthy human" I walk in between the Orc and the dwarf shielding the dwarf from possible harm, I put my hand on my sword ready for a possible fight, the Orc however does not go for his sword and steps back, "Have it your way you stupid human" and the Orc begins to walk away, the dwarf looks at me and quickly saids "Thank you so much sir please take these" he hands me 10 Mina's and heads the opposite direction of the Orc.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Mina's falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenseless man. What does your character do?:

I look upon the man with pity, I pick him up and hand his broken walking stick to him, I put my knees on the ground and pick up his fallen Mina's and I tear a piece of cloth off of my shirt and wrap the Mina's in it and hand it to the man, I then walk the man home, when I get to his house he saids slowly "Thank you sir" "Please take these Mina's as a thank you gift" I accept the gift and walk away.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Add a Meta-Gaming example of your own creation.

Human characters should have last names.

The bio is one run-on sentence with no periods. Please make it at least two paragraphs.

Skin link doesn't work.

The first Open Response Question could be expanded on slightly.

The second ORQ is highly unrealistic - few angry Dwarves or Orcs would simply walk away from a fight.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

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