[Denied]Cosmicjawa Application

[cosmicjawa 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:cosmicjawa

How old are you?:16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:eastern time zone (USA)

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:yes

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:planet minecraft

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:none

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:N/A ihttp://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:to act in a game

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:method of gaming

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: forcing your feelings on others

In-Character Details

Character Name:elsii

Character Race:Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

elsii is a elf he grew up in a tribe of other elf' .at the age of 4 many realized he was different his eyes glow'd blue and he was very smart,quick,and stealthy and at his age acted very intelligent,witty,cool calm and collective but with all these differences his tribe loved and accepted him. as he grew he studied on his skills at the age 6 his village was attacked by a enemy tribe and killed his parents and friends they took him prisoner noticing his difference they left his village in pieces while in his cage he made himself a mask to hide himself from others. they keep him in a cage he is 21 now. he is there ... he is ready ...

What are your characters ambitions?:to help those with problems

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:http://minecraftpvp.com/profile/cosmicjawa

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:he learns quickly ;)

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?(as usual study the situation) if he is friendly i stop by his shop and ask him if he would like to sit down and have a drink. i would ask him about his situation and why he is there if he answers correctly i would help him in a way i believe orderly maybe even try out being a employee as long as i get to keep with my studies

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? i would study the situation if i think it is right to do so i would talk to the orc (not before setting a trap) for him ask whats going on if violence purse im rdy to fall back and strike from the shadows and use my trap lure him in to it. but i would not kill anyone i would only injure them and help them to safety.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:i would gladly smile help the man up give him his coins and help him to the next town. then i would have great talks about wise universal things i would ask for his knowledge of my quest and would vist him many times.

[Thu'um 530]

Greetings Applicant, I regret to inform you that your Application has been Denied.

Justification/Reasoning:

- Your Application Overall lacks effort.

- Your Role-playing Definition is Incorrect.

- Your Metagaming Definition is Incorrect.

- Your Power-emoting Definition is Incorrect.

- Your Biography is short/vague, and does not meet the minimum requirements of two paragraphs.

- Your Biography does not have any implementation of our lore.

- Your skin is not role-play standards, as it does not look like an elf.

- Your Open Response Questions could use more depth.

Please re-apply after a period of 24 hours with the necessary amends.

Do not get discouraged, as with perseverance you will get it!

Salutations,

Thu'um.

[Thu'um 530]

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