[Denied][D] Toontown1Fan Application

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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:

Toontown1fan

How old are you?:

14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

United States

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:

Yes because English is my first language.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:

Yes, I have played on countless roleplaying minecraft servers.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:

Yes, I have read, and understood the rules.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:

I was looking for better roleplaying servers, and many websites on the internet have pointing me in the direction towards you.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: None, this is my first application :D

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!: As soon as I have completed this application I will post it immediately. :)

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is when you take the role of a character and become that character during the game. I believe that this makes the game more interesting and gives it more depth, to the game.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:

Meta-gaming is when the video gamer uses outside information that effects their playing and their actions in the virtual world. This usually means the game is more in-depth and completed therefore making it more fun to play. :D

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:It is when a player inside a virtual world, does something that another player has not agreed. For example, a player killing another player, or stealing items: Diamond sword, Iron Sword, Fish etc.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Gaelasel

Character Race: Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Gaelasel was born into poverty. Gaelasel’s parents were always buying expensive armor, houses and other luxury’s that they could not afford, so they went bankrupt. They felt bad that Gaelasel had such a horrible life so they always gave her the most food every mealtime. Eventually Gaelasel’s parents died of starvation. Gaelasel, the only child was strong and brave. She went out into the public and survived the best she could. She danced and entertained the other elves and was paid for it. She was happy to be still alive, but she wanted more to life, so she set out into the unknown world for an adventure that would change her poverty and life.

Gaelasel is strong and very brave. She has one downfall, her stubbornness that leads to successful battles as well as extremely stupid ones. Gaelasel is very tall (even for elves), and has long brown hair. She wears poor torn green clothes, but believes that an elves character is the most important. Gaelasel is at the prime of her life and wants to make the most of it.

What are your characters ambitions?:

Gaelasel’s ambitions are to live life to the fullest, always take risks, and to help others that are in the same position that she is.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Here it is, I put it on an attachment. :D It is the one that LotC forums (the elf female) had with a few changes that I made with MinersNeedCoolShoes.

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: My character is very good with bows and a remarkable dancer. :D

Open-Response-

Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

My response is to help this poor dwarf to the best of my ability. I understand what position he is in and since he is poor, I will help him even though he is a dwarf. I will buy as many of his wares as possible.

What excatly happens:

Gaelasel:Hello there dwarf.

Dwarf: Hello please help me and buy from me please!

Gaelasel looks at his clothes and sees that they are are torn up. Gaelasel realizes that this dwarf is in the same position that she is and decides right then and there to help him out.

Gaelasel: Its ok, I will help you. Here I will buy as much from you as I can and give you some food. I wish you luck in the world, and I am truly sorry about you poverty.

Dwarf: Thank you! Thank you! Bless you! You will not be forgotten.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

Gaelasel will fight in the battle because she will jump into any risky and daring situation. The fact that there is no help nearby is irreverent, that just makes it more interesting.

What excatly happens:

Gaelasel sees the orc.

Gaelasel: Hey orc! Why dont you try beating up somebody your own size?

Orc: GRRRR! Your going to pay for this!

Gaelasel charges at orc and does some fancy elf moves that kill the orc.

Orc lies dead on the ground.

Dwarf: Thank you, thank you!

Gaelasel shrugs his praise off and goes on her merry way as if nothing every happened.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick, looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenseless man. What does your character do?:

Gaelasel helps the character back up and hands him back the bag. However, Gaelasel does take a few coins, but only enough just to feed her for the day. He helps the man find his way back to where he is heading. She vowed to find the man and return the money she has stolen when she is able.

What excatly happened:

Gaelasel: Hello!

The man does not reply and instead falls to the ground when his stick breaks.

Coins spill from his bag as he fails to the ground completly helpless.

Gaelasel: Uh oh! Here take my hand.

Gaelasel helps the man up.

Gaelasel secretly takes a few coins, just enough to feed her for the day.

Gaelasel gives the man the rest of his coins back.

The old man: Thank you!

Gaelasel helps the man back up and find his path.

Gaelasel leaves and vows to help the man and return the money she has stolen.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Meta-Gaming definition is only half correct. Also requires an example of your own creation.

Having dead parents is extremely cliché. Please add some server lore to the bio, which can be found on the forums and wiki.

Skin needs to be a screenshot and not the template. Use THIS GUIDE as a reference.

Powergaming in the second Open Response Question, killing the Orc so easily.

Cannot steal in the third ORQ without a Villain Application.

Good first attempt.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

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