[Denied][D] Buddy008's Application

[buddy008 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:

buddy008

How old are you?:

13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

EST United States of America. Ohio

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:

Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:

Yes

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:

Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:

I was refered to it by a friend and I have seen it in the past on YouTube and stuff.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Not Availible

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Yes

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:

Re-enacting previous events in history or fictional events

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:

It is when you know things out of character

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:

When you force an action on a person and they do not have a chance to react. Example: I walk up to the man and stab him 3 times in the chest killing him instantly.

In-Character Details

Character Name:

Maldor Martinez

Character Race:

Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Maldor was a very special child. He always was confident and selfless. He was a child of 2 merchants that were always in buissness. But when he tried being a merchant he never seemed to get any customers or never had any good items for sale. So he decided to be a fighter. He trained everyday to become the best warrior in his village, Hatchiko. He had always had a toy of a pirate so he loved to wear clothes like one.

One day at the age of 16 the day on his birthday, his village was raided by a gang of bandits lead by a man named Jango Oumar. His parents were killed during a fire that the bandits started. He managed to escape, but with no food, shelter and hardly any water. Everyday he has trained to never be like Jango or his men. He trained everyday to seek revenge on Jango but at the same time he never would hurt a fly. He learned good from wrong, and defended the poor and innocent. He lives in a small hut he made and he hunts for his own food and collects water from a stream at the back of his house.

5 years later. . . Maldor, at the age of 21 fled from the world of Aegis when it first started falling into the depths of hell. He had to fight his way through the hordes of monsters and unholy creatures. All he had to fight with was his steel knife his father bought him to defend him self at the age of 15. The challenge was great and furious. He had to ransack burning homes to get food to survive. Finally he escaped Ageis and arrived into the world of Asulon. When he first arrived he bumped into a man that inrtoduced him self as Leonardo. He said "Be very careful around here. You don't know what you will get into. You are very lucky I am a kind man." Maldor took this to heart and kept on moving through out the world

Currently it has been 10 years now since the attack on the village and he has come closer to finding the man who destroyed his village.

What are your characters ambitions?:

To find Jango Oumar and take his revenge. Also he wishes to find some one to help him fulfill his destiny.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:

No there is not.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

I walk up to the Dwarf and examine his shop. "So what ye' selling Dwarf?" I said. "Only the finest furs and pelts in the Holy Oren Empire!" the Dwarf replied with a a bit of a chuckle. "Alright then, bring me a specimen of some deer pelts, if I find them in as good as you say I will buy a few." I said with a mind and generous smile on my face. The old Dwarf goes inside his shop and does not come back out for a few moments. When he has returned he was carring 2 large deer pelts. I felt the pelts and asked "How much for both?" "I'll cut ye' a deal 40 Minas for both" He replied. I am feeling generous so I gave him 67 Minas for both and took my pelts then said "Have a good day sir!" Then I was on my way.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

Maldor walks up to the Orc and Dwarf and says: "What do you think you are doing Orc?" The Orc looks over at Maldor and says "Begone you puny scum!" Maldor looks at him with fury and starts to draw his blade. The Orc sees this and goes to punch Maldor. But Maldor used his sword to block the punch. The Orc dented Maldors sword slightly but also cut his hand doing so. Then Maldor walks up to the Orc and says "If you value your life you will leave this Dwarf alone!" The Orc gave a scowl and turned and went on his way.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

Maldor helps the man up and looks at Maldor and says "Thank you young man". Maldor gathers the coins up in a spare pouch he had and handed them to the old man. The man saud in a kind voice "Here take 10 Minas for helping me." Maldor replies with "Thank you kind sir, but let me get you a sturdy stick to walk with first" The old man agrees with Maldor. Maldor goes and fetches a stick for the old man. When he returns he hands the stick to the man and bows. The man hands Maldor 10 minas and starts heading down the road again.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Explain specifically your previous roleplaying experience.

Expand on Roleplaying and Meta-Gaming definitions, add a Meta-Gaming example. You can find more information on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

Having dead parents is extremely cliché. Asulon existed for over sixty years, so your character would be quite old if born in Aegis.

Good first try, but these things need to be fixed.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[Cappy 1599]

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