[Denied][D] Pyras Application

[Pyras 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:truffle521

How old are you?:13 soon to be 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Australia

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:No

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:From Potato Orgy (a youtuber)

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:None

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Roleplaying is the act of playing in a world as if it was real but reallly isnt

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Meta-gaming is when the video gamer uses outside information that affects their playing and their actions in the virtual world. An example would be looking up a map of where everything hidden is on the web.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:When a player carries out actions onto another player without their approval. For example Player A killed Player B, or Player C Stole diamonds from Player A

In-Character Details

Character Name:Jace

Character Race:Elven

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:Jace was born in a tyrranous family and was expected to kill any enemy on sight. But Jace was not like that he was kind and not evil like the rest of him family. He was whipped and beaten till he ran away. He has white hair with a scarred face, he is quite tall with tattered clothes. he ran away at only 7 years old now 13 years later he is 20.

What are your characters ambitions?:To right the world and defeat evil for good

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:its attached

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:Despite a kind nature Jace can get very angry quickly. His best weapon is his bow.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?I would like to buy a bow,Could I look at your finest bow.He takes me into a storage room where in a chest he shows me a bow that is made of solid wood and emerald tipped arrows. The price was quite hefty but I paid it to help the poor dwarf out. As I left I gave him a tip of 10 Minas.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?I go over to the Dwarf and Orc and try to understand what has happened between them. They don't tell me so I break them apart without trying to harm either one of them then I send them on their ways

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:I help the man up then run to find a stick for the man then he says "My Minas could you please pick them up?" I pick them up and find a small sack in his bag to put them in. He says "Thank you youngling" then preedes on his journey.

No alterations should be made to this format without consulting with the Application Team

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Need to post on the Minecraft Forumsbefore you can be accepted.

Explain how a seven year old managed to survive without a family. 20 is still fairly young for an Elf. Please expand on the bio and make it at least two paragraphs. Add some server lore, which can be found on the forums and wiki.

Expand on all Open Response Questions. They should read as small stories, with action and dialogue.

An excellent first attempt that mostly needs more detail.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[Thu'um 530]

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