[Denied]Application

[Elven king 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:L0rd_SuNdAy

How old are you?:15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Australia

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:yes

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:YouTube

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:none

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :yes

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:role playing is the act in which to pretend you are something

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:strategy, action or method used in a game which transcends a prescribed ruleset.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:power-emoting is used to express emotion is a game:eg."joe Scratches his nose"

In-Character Details

Character Name:Zendro

Character Race:elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:when he was a little boy(5 years old) Zendro was taken from his family by

Orcs but was Rescued by a wizard (aged 15). He has blond long hair and blue eyes. his a good fighter and has a sharp eye he has a king-Arthur like personality by age 20 he left the wizard and Headed for ASULON!!!!!

What are your characters ambitions?:to be a good Citizen and fight for his country

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:his a good Archer

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?"here you go I'll take that vase keep the change if you want you can stay at my home it's across that river as long as you don't bring orcs with you,you can stay."

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I take the bow off my back,

aim "stop I have aim put that dwarf DOWN!!!!!!"

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:"are you okay" I put the coins in a fresh bag, help him up and refuse any offer to take money as a reward

[Thu'um 530]

Denied.

You have been BANNED from applying PERMANENTLY for plagiarizing your metagaming definition and lying on your application. Your metagaming definition wasn't even right either. If you're going to use a definition off another website, please ensure you have paraphrased it and put it into your own words. Normally for plagiarizing you would have had a temporary ban, however additionally you lied on your application.

Evidence:

You lied on your application:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraft...nique-gameplay/! :yes

Verdict/Justification:

Your application has poor formatting.

Your responses to each questions are minimal, lacking depth, and they do not show adequate grammar.

Your role-playing definition is Incorrect.

Your metagaming definition was plagiarized.

Your power-emoting definition is Incorrect.

Your skin was not posted.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Your character should have a surname.

Your application lacks effort.

Your biography is too short and vague and does not meet the minimum requirements.

Your biography has no implementation of our lore.

There are many more reasons I haven't listed.

[Thu'um 530]

I have modified my verdict on this application.

[Thu'um 530]

Moved to Denied Forum