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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:Zachzilla1211How old are you?:I am 13Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Central Time ZoneDo you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:I believe I doHave you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:NoHave you read and understood and agree to the rules?:YesHow did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:Petridagamernerds videosLink any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/user/44159-zachzilla1211/page__tab__topicsHave you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Playing as a character you created with his/her own history and to play as if you where them.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Playing as a character you created with his/her own history and to play as if you where them.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:It's when someone will emote something that prevents someone from reacting to that emote.

In-Character Details

Character Name:FaroneCharacter Race:HumanCharacter biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:As a baby he was put up for adoption. He was adopted by a human named Urik. He named him Farone. He raised him and taught him how to harvest, when to harvest, when to plant and so on. He loved him as if he were his real son. One winter his father got sick with a horrible disease.Farone went from town to town to find anything to help his father.

Ignoring his father's disease they moved farther and farther away from the citys that had been taken by the undead. When Mogroka banished Vardak and the portal opened his father's sickness got even worse. They hid with a group of peasants. Soon they were found by undeadmost were killed including his father. When they finished the boats he was one of the first to get on one. When they reached Asulon he didn't know what to do.

He became a alcoholic, he would get in fight's from time to time and would get in trouble with guards. Eventually he went to the Cloud Temple to start a new life. He is 33, his skin is a peach color, and has blue eyes and usually has his black hair.

What are your characters ambitions?:Farming, having a mug of ale now and then, and training with a sword.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:http://www.planetminecraft.com/project/my-lotc-skin/Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:No

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?How has your business been so far. I would love to see what a have. Do you have any patchs for my shirt and leggings.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?Oi! Whats the problem here. You should back off before any guards come, I might take matters into my own hands *unsheathing a sword slightly to show the orc.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: Are you alright *Farone picks up the minas and helps the man walk* "I'll go get someone to help." *Farone leaves and comes back with another stick* Here you are. *Farone helps the man up*.

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