[Denied][Orc] Server Application Anawkin52

[Anawkin 247]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Anawkin52

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: USA/ eastern standard time

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes (Asmalur and XRPcraft also a few other just can remember the names)

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Friend from other RP server

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: i believe 3

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! : Yes

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: roleplaying is pretending to act, do or be something you are not.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Using OOC knowledge to help your player IC

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Using emotions to take power from another player without a fair response

In-Character Details

Character Name: Ragal Bonesplitter

Character Race: Orc

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Ragal grew up in the baren lands of the desert in a tribe consisting of most of his family and a few family friends. The tribe lived mostly of hunting prey in the baren lands, so most orc younglings grew up as hunters there. Though Ragal strived in his hunting training and was a noteworthy shot, Ragal wanted to pursue a warriors life. When Ragal was old enough to be considered an adult of the tribe he left the clan in search of finding a tribe that could teach him to fight. After a few days of wandering with little food Ragal stumbled upon what seemed to be an orc tribe. He walked over to inspect, he was met by two orc guards who asked what he was doing here. He told them he was looking for someone to teach him how to fight. The orcs muttered and argued with each other but eventually said he could enter and should look for the armory to find the trainer

Ragal walked past, greeting many orcs and soon reached the Armory. there he saw two orcs wrestling in a mud pit. He walked on and found an orc pounding on a chest plate of iron who said to Ragal "Oi! what you be doinz here boy?" ragal responded "I be lookinz for da warrior traina! Do uz know were e' iz? the orc stood up and said "Oi! Dats me I'm Vraggnar Bloodspiller, traina of dis camp ata' you ant'?" Ragal told him and Vraggnar accepted but hold him it would take a couple of years to get him to be "good 'nuff" . So Ragal trained for years, winning some mud pit fights and losing some but never the less he finished and was approved as a warrior. Soon after Ragal was accepted, he went and grabbed his stuff in the dwelling he had been living in while he trained with the tribe members. He said his goodbyes and hieved of to make his way back to his tribes campsite. Only to find the camp was abandoned he searched the tents only to find what seemed to be an orc. Ragal thought "Des can't be orcs daz to skinney!" but then realized the struggle for food in the days he left. Ragal wept for a few hours but then left knowing he couldn't have prevented this so he gathered his knapsack and went off again in search of a new home.

What are your characters ambitions?: To be one of the best orc warriors and to find a new home where he can thrive.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Only that he he is ill-tempered

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? Oi! stunty whataya got for sale? the poor dwarf tells him iron ingots and gold ingots, "A'ight I'll take um twenty two iron an' 'ive gold" 'ow much do' stunty? The dwarf tells him $50, "Fair'n'Nuff I'll take em" *Ragal gives him the money* "The Dwarf hands the minerals to ragal" "Good Buzinezz, Stunty" *Ragal walks off

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? "Aye! Let me clobber da stuntiez noggins to! Ya cant 'og em all!" The other orc argues but eventually lets Ragal "clobber" him. *Ragal smashes the dwarf on the head with his club repeaditly "Oi! (sings) clobberin noggins is so much fun, clobberin noggins is so much fun! Indeed!" "Oi! I've 'ad enough of 'em you take em'" *Ragal walks away singing the clobberin noggin song

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: *Ragal looks at the man then looks around, "So, old wrinkley can me have ya coin?!" (jumps up and down) The old man doesnt respond. "He must be dead, oh joy now i got all 'em Minas for me self!" (grabs bag of Minas) 'We'll me guess you want mez to have it so bye!" *Ragal rns down the street giddy to buy a new sword

[Queen of Aegis 174]

- Biography lacks server lore ( think of locations, orc lore, etc.)

- 2nd ORQ: You are not allowed to commit villainous acts without a VA

- 3rd ORQ: You are not allowed to commit villainous acts without a VA

- All ORQ's are too short

- In your screenshot of your skin it shows some xray mod, these are not allowed on our server. If a GM catches you using it (and they will if you sue it) you will be permanently banned from the server

You may reapply in 24 hours after this post

If you have any questions feel free to PM me

~BoomBox~

[Queen of Aegis 174]

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