[Denied]My Application

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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:zach211w

How old are you?:I am 13, but at february 3rd I will be 14!!!

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Pacific Time

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes I do

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:I love rpg like zelda,skyrim also I am a total lotr geek!

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Of course I do!

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:From my cousin and friend that plays.

[Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:Yes I have but I can't seem to find it.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!I will as soon as I can.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Roleplaying is when one takes the role of a other person,place,or thing example:The lotr cast roleplays as a character from middle earth.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Meta-gaming is when one uses irl or out of game info to figure out something in-game example:My friend gives me cords on a raiding server to a base so we can meet there and raid them.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Power-emoting is a cheap way of fighting in roleplay such as:Player 1 chops off player 2s head immedietly.See Player 1 cheats and wins automaticly by not letting player 2 respond.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Mirland

Character Race:Wood Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:Once Mirland was a very happy boy in a bueutiful town surrounded by a peaceful wood.His parents were very kind and the town had a fair king.He loved going with his dad to chop trees down or going with his mom to the shop.But one thing he loved doing is pretending to explore the distant lands which only he heard stories of.Though everything wasn't so peachy and nice all the time.His parent's got devorced because of his dads new drinking problem.So he grew up to 110 with his mom alone.

One day he was tired of staying here and thinking about the stories he was told.So he bought some food,a tent,torches,a knive,furnace,and a pick and was suddenly running outside in the middle of the night to go exploring!He brought one of his childhood friends that he was also adventourus.Every night they would go hunting and eating and singing and sleeping till they got to the capital.They recruited on the way till they got to the capital and there paths splited (I can't say all the paths so I'll just say about Mirland).Mirland went to join the army he was trained by someone.The trainer learned that Mirland had great aim and should be a sniper, but he was also great on horseback!Later in his years he saved a 12th in command and got countless money,a nice elven bow,and the rank on general.He tdecided he was getting bad and more badder in battles so he hang up his bow and went home.But he wasn't expecting it to be taken over!Though this is all I can provide for Mirlands journey because it is not quite over he has mre years to come of adventure that is why I want to be with you guys!

What are your characters ambitions?:To be a great adventurer!

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Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:Mirland is very tall and smart.

Open-Response-Questions

Anwser at least two of the below questions with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?I would walk up to him and ask him what is the best horse he has he would show me his stable and I would ask if I could try riding one.He would say yes and I would ride around on every horse until I found the perfect one.He would ask for 30 minas and I would give him a sack of 50!But as I walk away he checks the sack and says wait this is 50 minas!!!I would just say "Keep it".

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?I would sneak up behind and try stabbing him, but he hits me down so I quickly bring out my bow so I could get him before he gets me I miss because of my nervousnes then all sudden he would be pinning me on the ground when suddenly the dwarf swings his axe at the ork from behind.But the ork sees him from behind!He quickly blocks the axe the dwarf falls down and I try to get up with all my might and jump on him and grab his head and chock him!Finnaly the ork was down and I help the dwarf up and I brought him to the doctor.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:As I peer down at him I see that he has a weak cane and I help him up and tell him to lean on my shoulder we walk back to the dwarfs shop and I ask him if he has a elven bamboo cane.He says "Yes I do" I look at his price and it's 10 minas so I buy it for the man but as I am going he remembers me and says "Hey you were the one who gave me the one 50 minas when the horse was 30 minas I say "Yes that is me sir" he responds "Ohh thank you I was able to get a room in the inn thank you!!!He hugs me and I say "Well no THANK YOU you make me smile everyday because of your bravery I barely have any courage I just have luck" he hugs me even harder and I smile and try to hint to him to please stop when he finnaly does I say "Farewell!" and I ride off on my horse to my camp spot!"The End.

I would love to join your awesome community thank you for reading this is zach211w signing out bye!!!

[LeRenardNoir 413]

You were denied for the following reasons:

Your biography must contain some server lore. Add things like events and locations from Asulon, and try to add how your character got to the current island, Elysium. Please expand upon your open response questions, add more dialogue and actions to help improve upon the length. Make sure they are a good one paragraph in length

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

PM me if you would like further explanation/help.

While you wait…Go and vote for the server to support it!

We all would really appreciate it.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

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