[Denied]Application Of Alianses 2#

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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:  Alianses 

How old are you?:  16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:  Amsterdam +1 UTC

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:  yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:  no

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:  yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:  My friend Sakirma

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:  http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/79781-aliansess-application/

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :  done

 

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:The act of purposing as someone else, someone you always wanted to be. someone or something.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Meta-gaming is like cheating in the game, you will do things that you can't do or know it is like: you are a Human and you are travelling through the forest. Suddenly you see a small house with a  door made by the gnomes (wich doesn't bother you IN game so not RP) and you are like going in that little house without any actions.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:

 

In-Character Details

Character Name:Alianses Flannigan

Character Race:Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Alianses Flannigan has leaved his parents because of his uncle. He was 14 years old and he was not afraid of anything, his uncle liked him and he knew that he would be an usefull assassin.

 

5 years passed and  Alianses Flannigan has been trained well but he is not ready yet to be an assassin, his uncle and his men are trying to learn everything what they've got. And later months and days passes and there are many assassinations by the men of his uncle and slowly they become rich 'civilians' and there men are growing. But the king of the Human Capital doesn't take longer so  he sends many men and smart people such as spies to search for those murders and they gathered informations where they came from and live now. The king and the noble high ranked soldiers brought all of there strong men in the night with fire and iron, they slaughtered first the people of the village from where the assassins came from, and after that they killed the assassins.

 

They thought that the 19 years old Alianses was a slave of the assassins so they let him free.

 

Now 1 year past and he is 20 years old prepairing him self and training himself.

For revenge and to be rich.

 

What are your characters ambitions?: Wealth, Power and Expertise

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://imgur.com/Bsd3L

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:none

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

 

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?I would ask what he is selling, and even if his wares had no use for me i would help the poor dwarf making his ends meet. If I had some food I would give it to him. And then I would ask him why he came to the Arethor and perhaps offer to help him.

 

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?If he doesn't know the dwarf: He will follow his way ignoring them. Does he know the dwarg: Alianses sees his friend in danger. He thinks of a plan and grabs his sharp knife, he sneakly stabs in the bag of the orc but it has no effect on him! The orc turns around but there is nothing and when he turns back he sees the human carrying the dwarf and running away. The orc is running after them but alianses has allready reached the gate and asked help of the guardians.

 

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:I help the old man up and quickly search for a new stick for him, later I would ask what an old man is doing at night on this road and advise him to go home.

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Reasons for Denial:

 

-You have not defined Power-Emoting.

 

-Your biography lacks server lore.

 

-Your ORQs are short, please try and expand on them.

 

-Your second ORQ is a little non-sensical in the way that "he sneakly stabs in the bag of the orc but it has no effect on him!" This is untrue, as Orcs may be battle-hardened, but they will still feel something after being stabbed in the back.

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