[Denied]*elf*'s Application

[*Elf* 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: tpatch

How old are you?: 10

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: United States of America

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes, my best subject is grammar and English is my native language.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Not online... But I do roleplay games with my friends in their yard all the time.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes, I have read and agreed to the rules.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: the Internet.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: http://www.lordofthe...3s-application/  (I know I am logged in as a different person... I couldn't figure it out)

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraft...nique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplay is a type of game where everyone has a role, a place.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta gaming is when you take stuff you know from outside the game, and put it into what you do in the game.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power-emoting is doing something and giving the other person no chance to react to it.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Hilela

Character Race: Wood Elf/High Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Lily's family has lived in Normander her whole life, which isn't very long considering she is only 130. She is imaginative, extraverted,  tall, pretty, talented, and a good fighter, she can always be counted on to come to the call, wether its needing a good laugh, or for protection. She has a short temper, but can contain it in meetings and when she sees fit. She loves horses because of their sense of leadership, loyalty, trust, and strength. They remind her of her father, who died in war when she was six. Her parents are pureblood elves, with a ancestry of high elves, her mother is a wood elf though, and she looks very much like her mother, but with light skin. Her mother gave her a headband with a gem embedded within it and she wheres it with pride everywhere she goes. She now lives in Normander.

What are your characters ambitions?: To live a full life, and to help her friends, family and city anyway she can. She hopes someday she can go to war, and avenge her father. Someday she hopes she lives to have a life of worth, and to be remembered by all elven kind.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:
/Users/lisa/Desktop/ElvenScreenshot.png 
(Copy and paste this into your direct URL browser, then click search, it will bring you to a screenshot of my skin)


Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Not really.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?
I walk up to him with a cloak on.
Lily: Hello, good dwarf, I am wondering if you have a good golden sword, and I am willing to give you a minimum of 60 minas for it.
Dwarf: I have one in the back my good man-
I take off my hood
Lily: good lady, you mean.
Dwarf: Yes, yes, so sorry m' lady.
Lily, muttering: you should be.
Dwarf: What was that?
Lily: Oh, nothing.
The dwarf brings out the sword, which is in good shape, and easily worth 70 minas.
Dwarf: That'll be 50 minas.
Lily: 50!, Oh, I mean, here you are. Great doing business with you.
I take the sword and give the dwarf 55 minas.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?
Lily: Step away, Orc.
Orc: Go, young lady, you have no place in a man's arguments.
Dwarf: Yes, m' lady, I don't want to see you get hurt on my account.
I draw my sword, gazing into its blade as if I am checking my reflection.
Lily: I'll have you know I am a master elven swordsman and archer, and perfectly capable of joining in a "man's argument"
Orc: I am perfectly capable of hurting you, you know.
The Orc puts his hand on his blade.
Dwarf: This really isn't nessessary...
Orc: Be quiet dwarf!
The Orc shoves the dwarf into a nearby barrel of cheese.
I sprint to the dwarf, supporting him, and run, with him, down the Oren Road, into a inn he can stay in for the night. I give him 20 minas so he can stay at the inn, and leave him be.


Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenseless man. What does your character do?:
I rush to the man, and help him up.
Lily: you need a new walking stick, don't you?.
Old Man: would you help me find one, m' lady?
Lily: Gladly.
I searched the mossy ground for a good, strong, wooden stick. Finally, I came  upon a golden metal rod, left behind by some merchant. I return to the man and give him the rod.
Lily: Is this good?
Old Man: Perfect
I walk him to Malinor and go on my way.

[Skippy 2466]

 

You were denied for the following.

 

-Role-Play definition needs improving and expanding on.

-You need to include your skin.  For a guide on how to do so, read this.

-Your ORQs are stale and boring, meaning things like "I do this, he does that, I do this" are not really acceptable.  Try to improve it a bit, and add more detail, and make it less boring to read.

 

Reapply in 24 hours.  PM me if you need any assistance.

[Skippy 2466]

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