Mittenpaws Kharajyr Application

[MittenPaws 0]

[color="#00BFFF"]MC Username:MittenPaws

 

 

 

[color="#00BFFF"]Rp Username (be sure to include the correct prefix, look up on info thread):Mitten_Swiftpaws

 

 

 

[color="#00BFFF"]Character Skillset:Mittens has a skill on adventuring wich she obtained by adventuring with her father in Asulon's most secret places.She also has a skill on hunting.She obtained that when her mother taught her how to find food on her own. She will gain more skills in the future probably.



[color="#00BFFF"]Appearance (age, SUBRACE, gender):She is 21 years old. She is a cheetah. She is a girl



[color="#00BFFF"]Personality:Kind ,brave ,friendly and attracting :D



[color="#00BFFF"]Please include a short bio of your character's life:Mitten was born in a little cottage. Her family were very proud.They loved her and cared for her. She had an un-discribable beauty, wich came from her mother. She grew up as an healthy baby to a child.Sometimes ,her father took her adventuring outside the  Unfortanately the war with the orcs started, so her father left for war.She was left with her mother. She got a teeny weeny bit bigger and a message came to her cottage. İt said that her father died at war.First she couldnt believe it :blink: .Then she started to understand :wacko: .Then she understood :unsure: .Then se couldnt keep herself from crying, and cryed as hard as she could. :cry: . Her mother started teaching her about Fighting/attacking. Her mother taught fighting on animals (like pigs ,sheep,cows and stuff) instead of aggressive mobs.So she got a hunting skill that way. She grew up in to a beautiful teen, but when that happend, the kharajyr lost the war with the orcs. So they had to move away. While they were moving out of theyre own city, She came accross a group of orcs.The orcs attacked Mittens and her mother for no reason. So Mittens tryed defending her mother.Since it was the first time attacking a aggressive mob, she failed at it and her mother lost her life . She ran away because she couldnt defend herself.Mittens lost her mother and father, but she stood brave and tryed not to cry. She was now living on her own, without anything to defend her. Mittens gathered what she had learned and started suriving. Later she got used to it and looked after herself. Since she liked exploring, she went exploring(see what i did there :-D ) and found her old town. She went to look but she didnt really know anyone so she decided to meet some people.Later, she changes her mind about it and leave's it for another time and find a good home. She finds one (but not a really good one) and gathers some food. Mitten gets used to it later and stays there.  (This is where the RP begins  8-) )



Character's ambitions:Have first love :mrgreen: , have a better home,meet the villagers, Help others in need, get money. and all that RP related stuff



[u][b][color="#00BFFF"]_---Situational Rp Questions---_

1
[color="#00BFFF"]As you travel through the Karakatuan jungle, you spot a human trespassing on your nation's lands. He approaches you, obviously distressed, and asks for any food, water, or shelter that you can provide, then tells you that he has been lost in the area for days without any proper supplies. How do you react?:İ give a bit of my food and lead him out of the town.

 

 

2.
As you romp through the lands of the "apes", you come across a tavern. Inside this tavern, a Dwarf notices you and starts gawking at you, then begins to speak.

"Oi! I gots a bowl of cream for you, Kitty! Ha! I'd bet you would make a nice throw rug, wouldn't ya, ya mangy furball?!"

He continues act generally as racist as possible. What do you do?:İ  attack him and show what a real kitty is, then i get the cream and jump on his face for a last time and say '' who's the mangy furball now? jerk''


3.
One of your fellow Kharajyr and a close friend of yours comes to your dwelling in the middle of the night and begins to pound on your door. After you let him in, he confesses to killing another Kharajyr over a slice of cake. What do you do in response?:İ tell him that its a stupid thing to do and give him a slice of cake



Do you swear to follow the Tlatlanni and uphold his law, and do you swear to hold Metztli and all of her actions as sacred?:Yes and yes


Please include a screenshot or 3D render of your character:go to:http://minecraft.novaskin.me/

 

 

Thank youuu! meow :D !

 

[Geo 1415]

Denied

 

After reading through your application I've noticed a few things left outstanding.  Firstly when I read your characters name, I did not think Kharajyr.  It is a very plain and out of the ordinary name in terms of Kharajyr culture.  If you wish to get help on finding a more suitable name speak with myself or another member of the Kharajyr application team.  I will point out that you should not apply with a surname, that must be left to joining a Pride in character.  Your biography makes sense but I feel like you should go back and read up a bit more on Kharajyr lore and observe a little bit of Kharajyr role-play, and play about with the biography. You should also look through the social class lore to find a suitable Prefix for your Kharajyr, as all Kharajyr do hold a prefix title. Lastly I think your open response questions were a little half-efforted and could easily be added to, with a little more oomph!  And do note that Kharajyr do use accents, something which you should try, as it will definitely up your amount of 'Kha'

 

Feel free to come to me with any questions you have about your denial, I'll try to answer them to the best of my ability!  You may apply in twenty four hours from this denial, but do remember that Kharajyr apps will be closing for a little while come February 1st!  Should you wish to re-apply, good luck!

 

Edit: After checking, which I'd forgotten to do, I see you are a very new member.  Please go back and read the Kharajyr application rules and you shall notice that you must be accepted to the server for at -least- one week before applying to become a Kharajyr!

[MittenPaws 0]

thnx for the info! ill do better next time

[nobody 146]

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[Princeton 396]

Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.