[Denied][Orc] Gruelgauntlet

[Gruelgauntlet 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name:Gruelgauntlet

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone:Central United States

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:Yes.

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:Yes, when I was playing an old non-whitelist server for almost 3 years.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:Searching google for any good roleplay server.

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/80216-gruelgauntlets-application/

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):Yes.

Have you read the Orcish lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:Yes

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing:Roleplaying is being a character to use in games. Basically, being someone that you are not.

Meta-gaming:Using your knowledge outside of the game to gain an advantage.

Power-emoting:when you do or say something without giving the other person a chance to stop it.

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name:Baruk mekhan

Current Age:72

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):This child was brought up by an elder due to his parents being alcoholics. He had a knack for breaking things and fixing them, making him the craftsman he is today. He was taught not to kill anything without a reason,but will not hesitate when he does.He has a deep respect for authority, and those who are ill. So begins his story. he was separated from his parents by Bekharv One of his clan's elders, due to the fact that his father had accidentally tried to kill his son. When his father sobered, he demanded his son back but Bekharv denied him because all he would do is get drunk and harm him again. The elder taught him the language of the humans and the sciences and arts and how to wield almost any weapon. He and the elder sparred constantly and afterwards he would learn. When he turned 13 he was told "Never kill anything unless you have a good and acceptable reason. When he broke the property of Bekharv he had to fix it himself. But how constantly he broke things! When he was ready to leave his master and father figure, Bekharv fell upon a heavy fever that nearly took his life! This event taught him to respect life and death. He lived with Bekharv until his eventual death. and that is where we now begin.

Ambitions for the Future:To be the most intelligent being in the world.

Personality:Quick learner,

Skills:An ability to craft almost anything. His immense knowledge.

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):The skin is not possible to be posted at the moment, but my avatar Is drawn from the skin.

Any other details you wish to share about your character:No

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. You are roaming the mighty capital of the War Nation Of Uruks, as you near the Arena you spot an Orc, wearing what seems to be human garbs as he looks at you he smiles and say out loud in common not in blah “Come friend let me teach you of civilization and break your mind from this orcish savagery!”, how do you react?

Answer:"Orcish savagery? That is nonsense. No race should be judged. Because believe me these orcs that live here view you as filth. Also, unless you want to be beaten to death, take off that human clothing, and speak in the blah." The strange Orc seems off put by how Baruk responds and smiles and walks away. "Humph. Strange." Baruk grunts

2. As you are watching an Arena fight between two Orcs, the Goj of Krug walks towards the Arena, and shouts “Mi brudderz da Feztivel ob Krug iz coummeh! We needz zacrifizez tu zummun da Zpirit ob Krug un diz uzg, go gadder da Warbandz nd raid da landz nd bring mi buck zacrifizez, twiggy nd pinky dat we kan zlauhater upun da alter ob Krug nuw go mi Brudderz!” How do you react to this?

Answer:"Aye! Te feshtivul will be te greatesh ov our time!" He sneaks around, searching for the best sacrifices possible.

3. As you are travelling in the barren Orcish deserts you come across a quiet oasis. Beside it sits a small tent where a young orc is preparing a meal of roasted halfling. He calls you over, offering you to join in with his meal. What does your character do?

Answer:"Ah Ish taht a haffling you ave tehr? I prefer human buh it'll do! Thank you!" He eats part of the halfling choking on huge bites constantly and gives the rest to the child. He drinks a gallon of water they talk for a half hour about battles and literature and history. and says his goodbyes to the young Orc and continues his travels

[Lita 677]

• Metagaming definition is poor, and could use some work.
• Server lore needs to be included in the biography.
• A skin is required on the profile. Refer to your last denial for how to obtain one.
• Open Response Questions need more work, and more practice with the blah.

[Lita 677]

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